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Hi John!! I'm glad, I've scheduled chapters to post, i'm just figuring out the logistics. I'm glad you're hooked lol.
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Thank you for reading.
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Chapter One He'd expected death, but not like this. Not leaning on a tree in the middle of the woods with no one to avenge his death. To be truthful, that last part was a dream too. The life he'd lived did not inspire love from others, not enough love for revenge. No, not many would notice he'd died. Meeting his killer's gaze, he chuckled. “I'm surprised you waited this long, Kaito.” “You are my favorite,” Kaito said, then leaned to press a wet sloppy kiss on his jaw. Toshiro clutche
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Stabbed and left for dead, Toshiro Shindo is at the end of the rope: no hope, no one to care, no reason to live. And then Jason rescues him, and shows him kindness and then love. When the man who stabbed him returns for him, Toshiro fights to keep the life Jason rescued.
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Hahaha....I'm with ateneact79. That ending was the best comedy ever, endearing but funny. Benny is in a new world, that's all I have to say...loll!! Great job, I'm eager for the next chapter.
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IsaFierce, I love your name!! Thank you for reading my story. Yes, chapter four was so much fun to write. Your comment made me go back and read that part too, and remember the fun of Dan and Jae's first meet. Thank you so much. Keep reading.
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In a small way I pity Jaesun because he took the safe way out of the situation they were in, it wasn't a bad decision, just a careful one, so that's okay for him. But the part that annoys me is the fact that he's fixated on Jae, needs Jae to validate his decisions. So, this chapter was great, Jae going like, "Jaesun, time for you to prove if you can stand on your own like we had to do, or something like that...lol." Thanks for always reading and commenting Lisa. And your edits are always the best, you make what I'm trying to say in the chapter make sense, lol. You're awesome! .
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It was about time for Jae to do that. I think he's held himself responsible for Jaesun so long, it was nice to write him making his stand. And saying, "Okay, the past is the past, time to look to the future." As for the time apart, lol, time to test how strong Dan and Jae are right...lol, Thanks Joann for reading, and commenting, it makes me smile.
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Thanks Sacred, yes Jae has grown up some, and sometimes Dan has had to play different roles for the guys, he cares a lot for them. Thank you for reading as always. I stopped by your story, made me cry a bit... still need tissues.... Dragon's Kiss...**insert very low bow) this writer has wronged you.I'll fix that soon, promise) ** I love your reviews, keep reading.
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Zune's return was happy and heartbreaking at the same time. Jenny's emotional reaction made me tear up a bit, she was so happy. As for Daryl, I hope they start believing Zune soon. Edward is my hero!! Yay. Great Chapter.
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To Love Someone is the Same as To Protect Them “We have tour dates without venues,” Harry said holding out the list of venues they'd planned to use for Rebellion's national tour. “Most of them have canceled our reservation. I'm starting to think someone is interfering.” Dan took the list with a sigh. Someone was interfering. “We're left with five venues; most of them are school gymnasiums, fields and halls.” “What do you want to do? That's a very small tour compared to the twenty stops we'd p
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“Mates sleep together.” Benny groaned and his ears flattened. “What? Does your stomach hurt?” Poor Benny!!! I laughed so hard, I think Timothy is right, about what you wish for. Great chapters, Yuri is so much fun, his innocent state is absolutely adorable, and I like how it comes out so straight forward. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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Thanks Jo Ann. I tried to cut back on the drama, but in the end it ended up that way, since the story is romance, can't help but wax poetic, once in a while Thank you for reading gal!! Made my day.
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Snake venom has so many uses...lol Cute Ellis, I want to meet Yuri already. Benny is really trying his best here. I find it funny that the other important thing in his life, other than Yuri, is his car. I think that's priceless. So, write faster, I can't wait to read the next one, I'm sure you have plots and plots to keep me at the edge of my seat. I can't wait to read it all. Great chapter.
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Benny shot of a cheap shot at the end there, I just loved Doctor Pannar's reaction. Imagining Benny in my head, and seeing Dr. Pannar chastising him, I wasn't sure whether to laugh or worry for the doctor in case Benny decides to retaliate. Lol.
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Velaku is admirable, leadership comes so easy for him. The clans he heads and the problems he's facing remind me a lot of cultural practices, and how some of the elders I know cling to ideals that don't work in this century. While their children adopt new thoughts and ways, the fight against the old ways is always so hard. Velaku's way of dealing with it, makes so much sense. Dear Benny needs to reel in his temper more, I think he's beyond the edge and is probably stepping on the air. I hope Ellis can help him soon.
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I love Benny!! I know he's missing Yuri, and all, but to visit him every time he has a day off, just to see him even though they don't talk and Yuri can't see him....oh, the romance...(dramatic sigh)...lol. I love it. I pity this tiger who dares threaten Benny's mate, he's dead for sure...lol.
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Benny surely has a lot of anger and frustration bottled up inside him. It rolls off him every second, I love how you write this side of him. He's simply doing his best to survive and I can't help but sympathize, I like Ellis's little joke, in the therapy session. As someone has said before, once Ellis puts his mind to it, he doesn't stop. Benny has a good friend in Ellis. Great chapter.
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This chapter made me miss Inside of You. Dav and Ellis are still my favorite in these series. I can't wait to see what else you have up your sleeve. I remember the struggle Dav had to let Ellis be part of the fight, it's great to see the other side of the story. Great chapter.
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Dan is crazy in love, lol. He's in it to the end, now if Jae can just see that...hmmmm. I'm glad you found the chapter, happy to see your thoughts on this story always.
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I've come late to the party, so happy to see a new Carthera story, can't wait to see what you have in store for Benny. He's having a rough time as it is, I can't wait to read more of his adventures. Awesome chapter.
