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lilansui

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  1. lilansui

    Chapter 4

    Thanks Daithi, I'm glad you loved this one too.
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    Chapter 4

    Thank you so much Quietman.
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    Chapter 3

    I love your wild spirit, lol, Liron should have taken it and run right...I'm with you, but Liron is a stubborn git. Lol.
  4. lilansui

    Chapter 3

    Liron is a bit stubborn, in a way he's had to prove his own merit for so long, (paying for his school, and working to get through and find a good job) that I think when he's offered such a chance, it's difficult for him to think he could up and leave. You're right about his sister not wanting him to give up the chance, but I think Liron's decision was because he was afraid to trust himself, a little of Milo and just the thought of leaving home. You always get me thinking Cannd, now that I read this reaction, I see a whole lot of other places this story could have gone. I get the itch to twitch it a little, hahaha... thanks so much and I'm happy for your reaction and thoughts and enthusiasm for Milo and Liron.
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    Chapter 3

    Thank you Daithi. Liron's dilemma, i wanted that to feel real, like if you were given the chance what would you do kind of moment..lol. I truly appreciate your reviews, thank you.
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    Chapter 2

    Wow, I wonder if you ever saw Jamie again!! That's sounds like so much fun though.
  7. lilansui

    Chapter 2

    You got the catch-22 right, Liron is afraid of the future I guess. Trusting so easily can end up in broken hearts. lol.
  8. lilansui

    Chapter 1

    He's crazy right!! lol, thanks Lisa.
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    Chapter 1

    I think Liron thought he was joking or putting him on, but you're right, Milo wasn't taking no for an answer.
  10. Happy Birthday to you!! :wizard: :wizard:
  11. lilansui

    Chapter 4

    Chapter 4 I regretted walking off that bus. For love, I probably should have kept sitting on that couch and when Milo asked me if my bags were packed I should have said yes, or made him stop by my apartment to get them. Instead, I’d taken a small folded paper and stuck it into my jeans, given him a chaste kiss on his jaw and walked out. July ended without ceremony. I worked odd jobs in between interviews for a graphic design position. The job market was pretty stiff and I was afraid I migh
  12. Chad and Tib have a special place in my heart, I truly loved reading this story. Ultimately, their relationship wasn't ever going to be accepted in their society, too many traditions and beliefs. There was no crusade to change the laws, just two people who believed in their love even though it led them to the hangman's noose. There was also the complication of Mia who ended up being Tib's wife. Hard thing for him to reconcile, but he ended up doing so, because of the kids they got together. I was upset when Chad decided to leave Tib, abandoning him after they escaped, but it was probably the best solution. Tib grew up, became his own man, one who knew what he wanted out of life, and that was a lovely transition to read. I had many highs and lows reading this story, but that was the best thing about Reach. I anticipated every chapter that was posted, even now, I can still go back and read it from start to finish. That's what makes it a classic.
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    Chapter 23

    Wow, I thank you again for the reviews and taking me back to this story. Jiro did deserve a sound lashing, but jail time is reasonable too...there are so many plot bunnies for Liang, Ahmon and Han, I should get right on chasing them...lol. You're awesome, Daithi and thank you again.
  14. lilansui

    Chapter 22

    Sometimes communications get crossed....
  15. lilansui

    Chapter 21

    Lol, that's true, there's a whole bunch...
  16. lilansui

    Chapter 20

    yeah....I did that. Poor Cole...
  17. lilansui

    Chapter 20

    yeah....I did that. Poor Cole...
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    Chapter 19

    Hmm...A lot of truths in this chapter... Han seems to take back his position once Choi Yang gets to Tokyo...I might have dropped the ball on the female bodyguard here...lol.. Editing points once again...
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    Chapter 18

    Chapter eighteen was a conundrum, so much to go through that for a moment I was afraid I might have lost the reader, but...it worked out well, i don't think there's much I could have changed. Zun was in trouble and Jiro was fighting like hell to survive this, and SarEr was definitely in need of rescue..fun times...
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    Chapter 17

    This story was fun for suspense, I think I had moments sitting around in the lair, laughing with my little finger at the corner of my mouth. lol...gosh, this is fun going back. So the tangle continues.
  21. lilansui

    Chapter 16

    Went for the wicked taking over the world in this chapter...lol
  22. lilansui

    Chapter 15

    Cole and Savan are going to have a difficult time ahead here. Nothing is easy anymore.
  23. lilansui

    Chapter 2

    Thanks for noting that Bovian Image thing, lol. And for reviewing this story..I later renamed it Love (Ai) but I still like it's current title. Lovely reviews, thank you.
  24. lilansui

    Chapter 14

    Calm before a storm was right...
  25. lilansui

    Chapter 1

    Kyo was my very fun project, he makes my day...I don't know why. He is rebellious, spirited and basically lives how he wants, he was truly fun to write.
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