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hmm...i hope those two don't miss their chance! I can't wait to know more about both characters. Very effective to keep us guessing...two very different characters. Why does mick smell so great? i'm kinda hoping it wasn't the 'he's my mate' thing b/c the younger guy was attracted to it too. Also, Guy wasn't totally interested right away. I like the sense of humor of Mick (or whatever his name really is!). I was glad to find they helped that little girl and would have preferred a death sentence from the werewolves...they usually have a better sense of justice!!! Keep writing. I like the story and the characters mainly bc it isn't fitting some mold for a were story. Looking forward to more of this!!

Really interesting...damn I wish I could contact this guy and unravel my head lol. Really intriguing. It is a tough topic to touch..rape and then factor in a child and molestation...a brave author to touch it. look forward to more! Man this guy would be rich beyond his wildest dreams if he could do this!!!

Thanks for the laugh Rob...that was classic when noah said he was glad he wasn't wearing the 'sorry ladies, i like dick and choking hazard' shirts. good stuff. i'm glad to see these two getting closer...though it's always a bit tough reading your fav authors wed briefs b/c you get left wanting more! I love these two. it's so hard to get that chemistry going in such short chapters..im still wanting noah to let himself go and let himself feel something...it was a sweet ending though when Eli realized he loves noah. noah definitely deserves him after that crummy ex. I can't remember...does noah know that he tried to pay eli off? i don't think his ex is done yet! he doesn't want him, but he doesn't want to give him up completely. I think he really thought Noah would fall apart when he was losing his last contact with him in the form of the condo. Eli naked with two guns aimed at that idiot is still my fav chapter lol.

Glad to see you back. The one thing I wonder is how they will take Otto back when they can't get to his mom's house to question her or send the boys off b/c it is a death sentence. I doubt the POW camp is closer than his home with his mom. Despite this detail, I was glad to see them get the better of Otto and it is ironic that they accused him of the crime they are guilty of (albeit it is consensual between them) and that Otto threatened revealing.

I look forward to them getting to know each other better. It makes it harder to bring in a conflict when they are not dealing with some past relationship (friends, acquaitances, lovers or whatever)...they only know what we know about them so far. i like how Erin is complex in that he does go from a bit assertive to shy. It leaves it open for him to surprise us. That was sweet that the junior looked up to them for being out. I look forward to where you take us next.

Intriguing idea. The duality of his owner was interesting. On the one hand, he treated him so well, saw him as a 'human' and fell for him. He clearly was treated so much better than his fellow para-hum's but at the same time he was the creator and controlling force for the enslavement of all the rest and was capable of the evil done to his brother. That was so sad and I was surprised that Poll didn't blame himself partly for betraying their secret connection. My only question is how the humans could win a war with the para-humans when they had abilities that could be used against them in some cases? Interesting piece and I kinda wish we'd get to see the rest play out.

I really like the sentiment that a person is who they are and that loving someone isn't about your gender or theirs. If it works for two people then who should judge. I usually would want a story to follow through on the outcome of the relationship...not feel like you're left hanging I guess. But, for this story it really works where you ended it. You know it's the beginning for these two and it would be a hard road. But, if Nathan truly believes that Sam is Sam, then it may weather the storm they would face together. The painting was a great visual, even if the idea came from some lyrics. I love the cast of characters you create in your stories. They are definitely unique. It was a brave (prob over-used description in comments here--but it is 1am and the best I can do subject to attack and what better thing to use writing for than to make people think and feel about something others do face.

Really phenomenal story! I really enjoyed it. You really have an extreme talent for writing. I know you said this was your first m/m story, but I wonder if you are new to writing overall or not? Either way, after reading Hidden Sun and following 'So Little Magic' I really love the fact that your characters are so DYNAMIC. You have such a variety of characters that you develop so fully. Even minor characters are developed. I love how you have more than one conflict to be overcome too. You don't follow the formula that many stories do. The stories also don't mirror one another at all. With erotic stories, some authors fall into making their characters similar, at times possibly fall into a rut creating a pair of characters that is erotic/attractive to them. The only disappointment I had was in not finding out how Ogre would deal with coming out to the team/friends, etc. I really wish you could put in a small story about that. Simce that was a huge hurdle in the relationship from the start. Though Steve decided to not break up with him despite thoughts put in his head by Eric, it still was a real issue. I felt that in the end they would still be in that awkward place they were at the mall outside of their home. I loved Heidi and hope Eric and her get together. They seem like they could be a good match with both being focussed on their studies. You could update us on that too. Well, I assume these comments so long after a story is written don't get looked up...but you wrote the story for us so I figured I'd put down my thoughts anyhow It was a great one so thanks.

I am assuming Noah hasn't moved yet b/c he was still packing last chapter, as far as I remember. I am going to cheer and laugh if it is his stupid ass ex who gets an eye full of what Noah has now! That must be quite the sight--naked, sweaty from sex, pumped muscles, tats, with a gun he clearly knows how to use--then there is the pistol lol. Good for Noah! Now, why does Eli have that gun? Didn't he say he was a security guard? I will enjoy it if that ass Derrick (is that his name?) Noah is crazy if he doesn't throw his list out with all those old pics and hold onto Eli! He is sweet, hot, attentive, great in bed...what more can he want? Bet the two kids that work for him are gonna be sharing looks and laughs when Noah is walking a bit funny! Great chapter, Rob!!

Good start. The glossary helped....having glanced over it and then using context, it was easy to work out...even for an American Look forward to more. Stuart is sweet in his shyness and I love John! That best friend with way too big a mouth! Cute start. Cam should have known he was interested given the fact he remembered when his break was and ends up in the area by chance. Just wondering why he isn't from the area if Cam's store is on the route? I'm wondering if Cam is gonna find the little statues of fat men in kilts at Stuart's house

Wow! Thanks for the glossary b/c I'd never have guessed what they referred to. I would say that it might be easier to read if you put each word/character on a seperate line. Listed one after the other made it a bit harder to read. Look forward to the story.

Great Story, Sasha! I enjoyed this one a lot and I really appreciated knowing I could look forward to a new chapter each night! I was hoping for an epilogue and it was nice to see one. To have them see Gregg again, knowing he has shifter family now. The only thing I would have added would be the black bears and him going into the river to catch some fish when the women left them to hang out and let their bears get reacquainted. He'd spoken of wanting to be back in the river with is family so many times so the image coming alive, even just mentioned in passing like that would have been good to include. Just a small note...but a great story all around. Thanks!! PS- Would you ever consider doing Gregg's story?

Sweet ending....but I am hoping there is an epilogue...I really was hoping to see Troy meet the fam and maybe they can pick Gregg up on the way. I loved the cell message from him. I think it'd be nice for them to take him for a bit, but I guess they'll prob need to settle in first. I really loved the story. Bears with opera masks! Bears on Skype--lol. funny stuff. I really loved Noah too! He was a huge help to them all around and helped them find that peace they have together now. A strength in your stories is putting real details in ...all the details about camping and building bows and camping and stuff makes it feel much more real. I like that authenticity some authors don't add in. I enjoyed it a lot, Sasha. Hope there is a last chapter, but if not, thanks for the great story!

oohhh what is up with that ex? Tate had a right to give Gavin attitude now after that comment, but I think he is not jumping to conclusions like Gavin did. What is this share thing? I thought he implied the ex was straight or bi? I'm intrigued by Tate. How old is he? What is his story? Where is he from? Lookin forward to learning more about him.

wow! Alexia is a FRUITCAKE! Her ridiculous rant made her sound pretty nutty and like a total bigoted bitch! Nic is horrible. How can anyone respect him after his reaction? How did he manage to sound like he felt badly that someone had reported them when he seems to agree with her now. She must be great in bed for him to defend her behavior. She sure has some spell over him! Well, the rest of the summer should be pretty entertaining.

If I made the rules for Wed. briefs, the wc would be so much higher! lol I got a kick out of this chapter...esp the 'choking hazard' shirt. I am really looking for Noah to relax and stop keeping Eli at a distance. maybe next week?

what a poignant chapter. You did a beautiful job explaining the thoughts of a person who is bullied by others/his other personal issues like with his parents. At the end, esp, my heart broke for this kid who was so alone and in so much pain. I esp liked the description of the teachers. That is something I have always remembered...the way the teachers wanted to be popular with the kids that were assholes/bullies and didn't come to the rescue of kids I knew who were bullied badly. Sometimes they even joined in. Great job. Looking forward to more.

I thought I saw this was complete already? I hope not! I want to know what Daniel did. How sad!

I caught this story for the first time with this chapter. I'm enjoying it. I can't even remember how long ago that show was on. Anyhow, it's clever to have brought the descendants of Salem into it. The one thing that is tough is the switches in POV. The telling from the different boys' POV wasn't bad. I think it made it too much when you went to third person for the fight. I would stick with doing it from the POV of the boys. The very beginning was a tiny bit more confusing than it had to be when you first id'd the boys by hair color. There are a lot of characters to meet and when you're first trying to say 'who was the blond?' it was too crazy. I'd id them right off that bat with names. Aside from those small issues, the story is good. I'm enjoying it and look forward to more.

I think I will be a bit mean to leave them hanging, only bc the kids might be affected if they leave, but I think they should go home if they are being harassed so much. This gay=child molester attitude is absolutely disgusting. I can't wait to see them meet the parents anyhow and get to see one another's homes. I'm sure Paddy would love to celebrate his birthday at home with his mate more than anything. Levi is such a jealous shit! I'd think it was him who complained. he got no where with Nic and went higher. How pathetic. I love how Troy is opening up and letting others see them together and showing affection. I think he feared it, but once he tried it, he enjoyed not hiding. I think it will strengthen their relationship so much. I got the note back from Kitt (thanks) about the women not being shifters. Somehow I missed that detail. I feel so badly for them. How jealous would you be to see the guys you love enjoying that ability and the bond it brings, and not be able to join in. That'd suck! Keep up the great writing! Lovin the story

Holy hell! I can't believe the twist. I never saw that coming! Alex was full of it the whole time! Had me fooled. Poor, poor Adrian. The horrible part is how vulnerable the pack is. His brother and father won't ever suspect it's him. They'll probably think it was Adrian who betrayed them and left with the rogues. Everybody is screwed. I can't believe his father and brother have never suspected anything? How could he be running the rogues all this time and no one notice something off? What will happen to Adrian? I'm also shocked bc I'd expect some sort of romance somewhere, yet there was no connection with him and any other wolf but for Alex. The poor kid. how will he ever trust again?

Great chapter. very hot scene in the end. Go sean...wanted to smack Nic. Idiot. Anyway...hope they don't get caught like they are..that might be too much for the others to handle LOL.

My comment is a bunch of random thoughts moreso than usual. Anyway, this chapter kinda made me sad. I hope the boys will let Gregg know they can contact them. Paddy might not have siblings, but he could be a big brother to a kid who will need it. What does he do with any of his questions about his being a shifter if not? I hope they do that. I wonder if Michael is his mate? He seems very close to him and defended him early on despite not stopping the others later on. I was wondering about Paddy saying the bears in his family had all fallen for humans when I know he mentioned his mom's family all being black bears. She is one too and isn't human, right? The saddest part of the chapter for me is where the guys stand on the whole 'going public' thing. I wonder if Troy is more afraid to now with the teachers acting like they did with paddy all bc he's gay. I thought Troy's reasoning about them not being sent off to work together would not be a problem. They've been there long enough for Nic to see they didn't not work bc they were too busy with each other. I think this will get to be a bigger problem for them each week that goes on. It's really taking its toll on paddy.

WOW! What a story. You kept the excitement up through the last words...though I'm excited there is an epilogue. The death of Carlos was so damn tragic and I am still working on forgiving you but it was pretty poetic that he took Reanard's sister with him. I loved his last words too-they were perfect b/c I liked Morgan and it was a bit tragic when he died too, if not as surprising. I so hoped that Carlos would make it, esp when he was saved by the bubble from the mega arbiter. But, if a bright spot could be found, that bitch, The Tigresse, had to die! There has been this great sweep of action from beginning to end. I was surprised with two things...one was why he didn't try to use the node underground to attempt to cure Lucere's beings? Weren't readings given to him for what would be okay as a strength and what would be deadly to all? could he have tried what Hartley had in mind but at the right strength? It kinda felt so anti-climactic for them to go through all they did to merely save the three of them. I also am wondering why they haven't thought that Earth could be one of those world's that these arbiter's had purged of his kin? I was glad you were able to have him cure Konstantine. My thought right prior to that was why Konstantine wouldn't have stayed behind knowing that him having the virus would be enough to stop any world from accepting them. This disease is too great to risk a carrier being allowed to land. I would have loved to see Carlos make it too (the only thing I gave a in the series! But I can accept the role you decided to have him play, if not like it. Was the story with his brother a more last minute decision to add so he could play that role or at least support his decision to play that role in the end? I'm still a bit unsure why Earth would allow anyone from Lucere to come back when they probably know the severity of this disease by now, it's seemingly invincibility and such. I will be interested to see where they land and if they can do any other good for other worlds? Again, I guess I kinda hoped he'd use the node to not turn the sharplings back to people, but maybe kill them and let the humans be cured. I guess I am still wondering why he'd have this amazing story and this journey with such providence (as K would point out) only to save himself, Mira and Konstantine? I guess i'll only find out by reading on! I hope you try to get this published. It was an amazing story and I thank you for letting us read it here. It was brilliant!!

I'm surprised Troy is showing such little control over his lynx instincts where the kid is concerned. he seems to really not be able to overrun his love for rabbit meat lol. I like this chance to see them with a kid and it will be great to see them help him kick those little bullies' asses. Short chapter though Congrats on your PA rating.