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Why doesn't it feel like the last time they'll see Hawke? Why no water arriving? Isn't it a scary chance they'll be moved apart by the fleet? Why not learn from arte first?

Hey CIA. Long time since I commented but I've been enjoying it thoroughly since I found it weeks ago. I loved how the baby is turning into a cuddly human baby. I love the colors and the way he protected mom lol. Were these things something kohen fought b4? On planet here? Isn't quite the friendly place I hoped for. I'm excited for the info they come back with. But I can't help but feel the baby is more pet than son. How do the dads feel? And what will they feed him? Te do they just have k take lightly walks? Lol Cannd

great chapter. I'm a bit worried that Casey won't tell James how he feels. Will he have the strength to come out? James is one smart cookie. You had me nervous when he was in the barn making the call and unarmed. Glad nothing happened to him. that is great that they got the grandfather's murderer. I give Mary credit for sticking by Sam when it could have put her in danger.

Thanks for making the torture not include rape. I'm hoping that the person holding him is Ronan or the King. Landyn isn't that big. Maybe Si also? I think the only reason to stop him from making noise is to protect him. m I'm wondering what the benefit to starting the mating was. Did it allow him to track him? Was it to give him healing abilities? Wouldn't the phone allow them to track him with GPS? I wonder who Andra is. I Hope they take her with them or that family will kill her. l hope that fire was strong enough to kill that sick fuc*! What a sicko. Can't think of a nicer end for him.

I'd love to see you get an editor. The title you meant for him was errand boy. I'd love to see you describe looks between them and things more conversation we can try to feel what the chemistry is like between them. Are there looks or touches we can determine if anikin feels something back? half of the chapter seemed to have repeated itself at the end rather than just having the meanings of the conversation in other languages. I'd have loved to have read what was said by the french hairdressers and gunther.

Great chapter. I'd have liked the boys to give him some explanation as to how Lunis were created or why they were like rabid animals. did they exist as more sentient creatures like the weres? I'm really touched at how much Rafe and moreso, the Alpha, is so quick to defend Ethan and pledge their protection. I don't get the feeling it is for what Ethan could do for them either. I just can't imagine that the team that bagged and tagged it isn't going to remark on it not looking like a fight with the wolves killed it and about the beast being wet. It could lead to people seeing the similarities between the events surrounding the bridge and this. Poor Ethan was so upset. I'd have thought it would have at least made him feel good that he may have saved his mate's life and those of Casey and himself too. I will be very surprised if Aidan doesn't decide to live with him at this point. he should be around to help his mate through this and protect his mate. I think it is time they cohabitate. The idea that he couldn't complete the mating upset Ethan so much so it is clear that he feels deeply enough about him to live with him. As for the increase in ferals and whether they're attracted to Ethan...it would be surprising only b/c the animals that have come to him have always wanted to help him and honor him almost. I don't feel like it would draw animals to him that want to destroy him...that said, we don't know if the Lunis wanted to get to Ethan to hurt him. It may have wanted to cuddle with him. lol It really was attacking the guys for blocking his way to Ethan, not ethan himself. I do wonder. I don't know why ferals from god knows where would be called to him...wouldn't all animals be feeling a draw to him, including the other weres? This is all getting really good so keep it up!!

I'm surprised that Aiden wasn't more suspicious of the events at the horse farm. I'm surprised about the horse now. I thought whatever he is may just involve water or at most the four elements but that was so sweet and interesting that the horse did that. Those two things within a matter of a few hours must make him think. I'm also somewhat surprised that the boys haven't decided to live with one another and expect that soon Ethan would decide. Afterall, they clearly love one another. He mentioned wanting to run as a wolf with Aiden right? I'm surprised that Aiden hasn't pushed him a bit or at lease raised the point that he'd be more able to defend himself as a wolf. He should consider it lucky he survived what he did. I like the Alpha so much. He's really being fair about this despite it being his son. That must be hard despite his knowing it is right. I liked that he threatened others not to try any move against Ethan or it will be an official challenge to his rule. That will serve as a huge deterrent

I kinda hate that rape keeps happening. I'd have liked to see it last a bit longer. I'm not going to bother wondering why he didn't give them a chance to protect him after the fact. I'm surprised all the training he had didn't allow him to know how to stop a larger attacker. I kinda thought martial arts training did that. too bad. no one deserves to be raped once let alone multiple times.

I'm becoming scared of your imagination lol this story is so freaky and terrifying and crazy as well as sick. Poor Greg. I did't guess till he walked in that he was the one that lived. That said, is his conditioning any more than Ryan's is? I mean, what more does it take than punishment to really train someone or something or a cross between the two? And what about the fact that people range from subservient to alpha personalities on their own. Wouldn't it have paid for Max to get to know him first? Wouldn't those tendencies affet the outcome of this? Rex is confusing me. I want to know what type of conditioning would it take to mae an animal that had total dedication to you go from acting the same to suddenly acting like they were goig to attck you. That is what I'd better expect of a human. The part that really got me was the moments when Max is telling him hes going to turn him into some were creature or and the description of the insanity in his eyes and the kowlege that he has ryan. It surprised me that he'd bother trying t get his agreement at all. The whole idea of the change going better if you want to to do it. I just think Max is too crazy to get that he could have possibly found better ways to get someone on board than tricking them, imprisoning them, etc. I wonder if Greg was from the same type of situation as Ryan? Look forward to more.

Very interesting. There is a lot to figure out. It sounds like the kids of the pack were on some trip, but where were adults? I am sure they can camp alone, but it sounded like a school thing. And who brought him in? I'd think if any of them brought him in, Aiden would have. But, wouldn't Caleb have more info if so? I'd be surprised if Aiden was willing to abandon him...and esp. his wolf, being that it seems he's his mate. Adds some craziness that Michaelf is possibly future Alpha and his dad is the Alpha of a pack that thinks chasing a human for a hunt is okay? That's just messed up. This guy can't teach much good if all of them went along with it except for Aiden. Can't wait for more. Why wouldn't Caleb have used his hard luck story to try to make Ethan stay a while? Is he going to track and watch the boy or is someone from that (so far scary in my opinion) pack going to? How can you just hope he isn't turned? Have a feeling Michael might have known Aiden found his mate and knew it would weaken him to kill him, hence the wolfsbane. that is alot of trouble to go to for an easy target of a hunt.

he's a charming old man. And what is it with his science project? Is he bringing things back to life? Are the lupoids created by him? I'm really curious about Chris' family's history. He was brought up to protect this creeper? How was this guy worth protecting 17 yrs before? What did he do that made them protect him? Looking forward to more details. I was glad Chris wasn't really bad.

Im so excited about this new story. This seems like a good one. Was his wolf a part of the pack or ws he alone? I assume he is alpha wolf now. How will the boy take to being a wolf. It seems like he would love it given his love of nature and his hunky new wolf boyfriend will probably help that. I like the way you wrote this. I felt like I was along for this awesome trip the boy was taking, just him and nature. What a cool thing that would be for a while! Really nice descriptions of the places he saw. You drew me in. Looking forward to more!

I'm loving this story alot. I guess I also am wondering how it works with the two souls in him. How can he know what is them or what is him. Or is it that they make up who he is so they are one and the same? Isn't he supposed to be a third soul so a person who has them as part of him? It would be overwhelming. I feel like he's blaming Diarmad though. it seems like he's angry at what is being thrown at him and he sees it as diarmad's fault. But, diarmad didn't cause it. I hope he can put it aside and continue to get to know the king and form a relationship with him. He clearly wants to be there to support him physically and I think that will lead to the emotional support. He's still fighting the urge to get closer or feel a desire for intimacy with Diarmad. These new characters and the whole offensive spell thing is really interesting. I can't wait for more.

I'm so disappointed that despite rain, ice and the horrible people he won't trust two guys who didn't betray him. What is the worst that happens? They do and he leaves....or he betters his life and gets a home. Isn't it worth it? I guess not in his crazy logic. being on the street and putting up with horrible humans is better. No one deserves what happened to him. he was raped. But, isn't his choice to stay on the street leading to these experiences. Now he'll use them to justify staying on the street and being hurt maybe worse in the future. Uggghh very annoying. You definitely got an emotional response from me. lol And I hope people who are scumbags and esp hiding behind a job that is supposed to protect kids, get theirs!

fun to read the night before Halloween. Hmm. A job with benefits like that would be fun.

Hopefully this isn't any type of autobiography. I didn't read the tags. The parents are horrifying and deserve a miserable life and death. I don't understand how he reasons that life on the street and trusting no one kills or robs him is better than trusting two people to treat him well when all points to them doing so. I guess the fear it hurts more to have someone you let your guard down to hurt you, like his parents did, might keep you from opening up to that. But, to not take a chance of having a life again in exchange for a life on the streets is sad. I hope this kid learns to trust and maybe turns to the two guys or chad. That isn't a life for a 16 y/o if can be helped. How is he going to survive a winter on the east coast either? sad he couldn't take the jump to trust those guys. They had the means to help him and probably the desire b/c of the connection through shared sexuality.

I'd like to look into the original holiday like you suggested. It sounds interesting. This story was so interesting. It was filled with ups and downs. I would love to see more of these characters and I like how you wove the lore into it. there was a sense of longing in the characters for more that I know I feel all the time lately. Maybe everyone does. It was a great story. I'd love to see more of their adventures. Thanks.

OH man do I wanna know what that proposition is. What is this madman up to? I'd love to know what made you think of this. I hope he sees his dog again. this douche is probably enjoying his pet. I would like to think the dog knows these people are enemies unless he's with Greg.

Is this the 'caretaker'. I am disappointed the guys didn't give him an explanation as to who this guy is and why these hounds are protecting him. And why is Chris, who trained to protect him all his life, on the opposite side now? I was happy that Hudson got a kiss from his crush. I just don't understand why the guys wouldn't have had someone with hi at all times if they knew these creatures wouldn't give up Looking forward tmore.

I enjoyed this alot. I loved these two characters. I would have loved an epilogue to know if they made it past the first year, but I guess it is a more realistic view of a new relationship that has all the signs of being right. They have high hopes and time will tell. I guess the hope for a definite success can't be helped by some of us romantics though. It had a nice ending and it seems like Dave's parents will help make up for his shitty parents. They seem to have a good chance. Thanks.

thank god he got away. i hate to think about how many of those 'camps' are in existence. it is a horrifying thing. i also hate to think of all the kids who lose that presence of parents in their lives who they thought loved them unconditionally, when they tell them they are gay or bi, etc. To have a parent turn their back on you at any age would be very tough. just the emotional fallout of that part, not to mention finding a place to be and surviving, would be so tough. It is sad that parents can be so misguided. that was a strong way to convey how felix must have felt. I think that Dorian should be a bit more honest with Felix about risk here. If someone watches him, they will see felix is there and that is a weakness for dorian. he needs to tell felix to be aware of his surroundings and not find himself away from other people where he i safer. He is going to be out of the house for work now and it is a risk by association. As for dorian's concern about felix's ability to don a mask, I agree he's so young it's a shame he knows how and has to already, but Dorian shouldn't feel he doesn't know him. he's been able to give him a place to be where he could be himself most of the time. Hell, we all wear masks at some point. i hope dorian just makes more of an effort to get to know him going forward.

I keep hoping that someone will realize he's on his own and reach out to him. It is a shame he runs each time he begins to reach out to another person. He doesn't seem to give himself a chance to come to trust. Why not hang in that area a few days? It's a shame he couldn't have seen about working on the farm. He'd not have to be clean to do it. He could eat. I'm glad he had fun, but I was disappointed that didn't become an opportunity for him.

wow! clark is one crazy sob even in death. i hope you will give us an ending. I'd like an hea for him, but what can he do about something that he can't seemingly hurt? I wanted to smack him for still giving out candy despite the danger. I'm sure the kids could have lived with the disappointemnt of no answer at his door since he was trying to avoid being killed! jeez.

Great chapter. I guess even if they'd seen his bag, he'd have left without it rather than reveal himself to police and such. That was a sweet story though. it shows he hasn't been destroyed by all the bad and he still cares enough to be a good person. He hasn't become jaded. I wonder if it healed him any to help someone, maybe it will make him believe someone might want to help him later? I wonder what the mom will remember of the person who saved her and branlee? Esp. when they saved the life of her child. I am glad he considered that mom may have needed saving too, though he didn't think as far as his father maybe killing her. I only question the fact that he hasn't eaten in a week. According to these survivor shows, you'd be unable to function let alone walk after a week of not eating. And a lot shorter a time period if you can't get water, though with all the rain, he may have a way to collect that. I assumed the eyes on the tree were going to be a hallucination from lack of eating/drinking. I hope a good turn comes soon. I find the fact that he is thinking things out in his journal to be fascinating and look forward to what other things he works through in that manner. I always thought keeping a diary was kinda like therapy in a way. Sometimes reading what you write makes you see it a different way or you work something out as you talk about it.

I really would appreciate it if you gave the kid a good experience again. the old lady was the only one he had. What an asshole that kid was. The little girl was sweet. Shame she's related to that. I hope he avoids this Ozzie guy. How could he not understand what the kid means when he says 'Ozzie's boys' when he said flat out, 'how long did it take for...' He seemed to want to believe it would only happen b/c of his being gay. Well, I can't believe that this kid has such a homing device for cruel and misled people. I hope that you bring some nice people around b/c there just can't be so many cruel jerks in the world for him to have this many bad experiences. I desperately want him to learn to stand up for himself too. Or at least not accept people just abusing him. It's horrible. I understand why he does but wish it weren't so. I'm holding out for something good to happen for him.