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I hate to say it but I saw this coming!! Poor Clem. I didn't like Nate from the first chapter and he just validated what I thought. Stay strong Clem. Sasha is gonna give you someone just perfect for you!!! And that guy will show Nate how badly he f'd up!! Great chapter because it got Nate out of Clem's life! Yay
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Penguin rules!! Welcome to the family, Nick. Loved this glimpse into Penquins life. Thanks
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Prompt #376: Dagger of Ignorance
LadyDe commented on craftingmom's story chapter in Prompt #376: Dagger of Ignorance
Lance is a jewel!! Compassionate and wise. He counseled Finn perfectly by helping the young man see that his actions were hurting Kayden when Kayden needed his praise. And Finn realized what he had done. Looks like Finn will be Kayden's friend. I liked their interaction. I see a deep friendship blossoming between the two of them. I can't wait till January comes and you start posting the 2nd story. and you're wrapping gifts already???? Wow...GO You I haven't even started shopping. LOL -
While reading this chapter, I kept saying to myself "How bad is that shoe gonna hurt when it drops on David's head?" Please tell me I'm wrong and David's faith in Robert is true and he'll have his happy ever after!!!! He deserves to be happy....they both do. Thanks for writing.
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Take your time! You got this chapter right!
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Lucian's the bad guy, isn't he? How did he pick up on Dimitri's interest in Talin? Is there a mole in The Talon? Will Dimitri tell Talin whats really going on? I've got ideas but will let you tell me. Great chapter, but now I'm wanting lemon flavored creme filled horn shaped pastry!!
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Prompt #291--That Damn Tree
LadyDe commented on craftingmom's story chapter in Prompt #291--That Damn Tree
Kinda tickled that everyone was concerned about the tree! hahaha. Instead of the tree, how about getting rid of all the whips. Better idea. Thanks for another interesting short. -
What Headstall said!! He said everything I wanted to say. I actually got a little teary eyed at the end. (sniff sniff). I just love this story!!
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All In Extra--Brad's Demise
LadyDe commented on craftingmom's story chapter in All In Extra--Brad's Demise
Wow!! That was creepily good! I'm glad got the beat down from his cell mates. And I was really glad that he stayed conscious enough to realize that he wasn't going to make it to his luxury prison. Excellent chapter and ending. What's the next story? More Neko? -
I agree with all the other reviewers. Nathan is a selfish, unfeeling prick. I think he loves Clem because Clem fits his image of the perfect boyfriend. He doesn't know Clem. It's the idea of Clem that he's attracted to. When and I mean WHEN, Sasha, Clem stands up for himself, Nathan will break up with him. Poof, gone!! So will the couple Clem met play a part in future chapters? Maybe they can introduce Clem to his "one"? Great chapter...sad but great.
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Prompt #364: Slip of the Tongue
LadyDe commented on craftingmom's story chapter in Prompt #364: Slip of the Tongue
I just burst out laughing!!! I'm going to be thinking about that word for a long while!!! Thanks for the giggles. I love these Neko shorts. "Cock shell" too funny. -
Excellent ending! I want a sequel but if it doesn't happen, this is perfect as it is. I think Trebs would be happy with it. I know I am. Thanks for writing it.
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3 Yay's for Ryle!! Whoo Hoo!!! The defender of Meg won major cool points with the Captain. But I wish the Captain had stuck to his original plan because Darth is going to come back and cause lots of problems. right??? This was a pivotal chapter. The entire crew will look at Ryle in a different manner. He saved the Captains girlfriend and then was treated as an equal instead of a slave. Major kudos on this chapter.
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I have a request....can this be the last we see of Petersen? I've never really warmed up to him and after first his reaction to Roy's news and then how he reacted to Silas and then disappeared on sweet lovable Wes, well, he just moved to the top of my s**t list! How 'bout pairing Wes up with Angus or bring in a new person who will appreciate Wes. He needs to be loved and treated right. My heart breaks for him. Not worried about Roy and Chad now. I just want Wes to be happy too!! Great chapter.
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What do you mean "which was his mistake"? That doesn't sound good at all. Nope not good. I don't like "not good" LOL. I'm glad the captain is proud of his son. Maybe some of Gabe's nature is having an effect on on him. Good chapter.
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I am loving this story. But you just moved to the top of my favorite writers list because Kyla is my oldest daughters' name!!! Spelled exactly the same!!! That was an OMG moment for me! Like Headstall, you've shown the growth of both the characters and added new characters to give a fullness to their lives. Great chapter.
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Prompt #374: Shopping in Town
LadyDe commented on craftingmom's story chapter in Prompt #374: Shopping in Town
Another one??? YAY. Shopping, a large dinner and then watching football? Now why does that sound so familiar?!?!?! Hahaha. Very clever. That shopkeeper is about to become very rich because everyone is going to want a football. I just love these prompts. -
Prompt #80--Fall Festival Decorating
LadyDe commented on craftingmom's story chapter in Prompt #80--Fall Festival Decorating
ROTFL!!!!!! That was so funny. "I prefer apple" Hilarious short. Kayden is going to cause Joseph to pull his hair out one day. Glad to see Ellias, too. Thanks. -
Great chapter. I don't think Dimitri is a bad guy. I have an idea but I'll let you tell us. and then gloat when you prove me right!! hahaha Talin is as much as a mystery as Dimitri. He ran from New York because of something. Darn. Now I want you to write faster!!!
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Awwwwwwww. That was wonderful and funny. I was missing Kayden. Now I can look forward to catching little glimpses into his daily life while you write the sequel. I was wondering how you were going to work in 'sweater' and what you came up with was brilliant. Whoo Hooo.
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Prompt 372 - Babysitting, the cat way !!!
LadyDe commented on Caz Pedroso's story chapter in Prompt 372 - Babysitting, the cat way !!!
So Ben let Adam do it again?!?!?! Sasha and Thomas? I loved this. Have we been introduced to Kitt in the other stories? I must go check.Kitt figured out what would work and it did 'cause he was outgunned (out-kid'd). Poor Kitty. haha. And Jackson and Casey aren't together yet? Ok, I know you won't exactly answer....but those are hints (hee hee) I love these glimpses into the future. -
Chapter 12, Part 1 - The Wrong Twin
LadyDe commented on Caz Pedroso's story chapter in Chapter 12, Part 1 - The Wrong Twin
Yay Casey!!! Somebody needs to put Simon down. Yeah I'm a little bloodthirsty when it comes to villans. hee hee. I mean really, he wants Jamie, Andrew and Casey??? He really is insane. So glad, Casey is taking Flora with him. Great 1/2 chapter. And I agree with Terry P. no chapter is too long. -
Loved this chapter....except the SHE devil is coming back to town. Jeez. I actually pulled up "Midnight Radio" on Youtube (the version by NPH) so I'd know what Danni was singing. WOW!! that's a powerhouse song. Prom night sounded like so much fun. Better than any of the proms I went to. hahaha. I know how Marcus feels when a relative dies who's not close to you. Will we have more of Keith and J? Keith was so cute, getting all flustered after a 2 hour conversation. I was all 'awwwwww'. This is really one of my favorite stories. More Please??
