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Whew!!!! What a chapter. Loved when Kayden said "you're jealous of HIM now?" too funny. Yeah Damien hang your head. So glad they're together. Now let's go kick some Lao's butt!!!!

Let's see....Louis was abused and can't talk....He's super shy....He's afraid of everything. Am I close? I like this chapter.

So that's why Casey acted so angry with Jackson. He was trying to fight his attraction and didn't know that they were mates. And now he's angry because Jackson didn't tell him. He's all screwed up, isn't he? And who is Vash? Did Harry find him on one of his missions? What pack was he taken from? Is he super powerful or something? He must have something special for them to lock him up at age 5!/!?!?!? Great start.

FINALLY!!! The light bulb turned on!! There's hope for Nate. He realized what type of person he had been and has resolved to change. It's going to be tough to break the conditioning of a lifetime but with Taylor's help I believe he will. I adore Taylor and something tells me that eventually he will be the catalyst that allows Nate to make amends to Clem. I want that to happen and I want Nate to become part of the gang again. He needs them in order to grow into the person we're all rooting for. Great chapter.

Great ending! I liked the simplicity of their heartfelt vows. Two broken hearts who mended each other. Thank you for writing it.

Yay!! New story. I just love the characters on Unison Island. So why does Cade "have to" be with Louis? I don't remember what either of them are...witch or vampire? Can't wait for more. Thanks for the chapter.

Really, really good chapter. Kendall finally settled down and realized that he couldn't cut Michael out of his life like a bad hangnail. Lanny and Candy deserve each other, really they do!! With all the emotion you put into each chapter, the 'Talk' is going to be a rollercoaster, isn't it?? Excellent job!!

Don't Damien, just stop right there!!!! You know better. Finn may have a crush on Kayden, but Kayden is totally not seeing it. Don't make something out of nothing Damien. But I can bet he's going to get distracted while on his mission and that's going to cause problems.

Great chapter....but then everyone else has told you that already, right? After reading all the other reviews, I don't really have anything original to add. I really hope Michael's plan works. Awwww sleeping with the hoodie. That's just so sweet and hopeful. You're doing a wonderful job as a first time writer.

Great start. It's good to see Kayden asserting himself and wanting to learn how to better protect Damien. I'm so excited to see this posted.

Loved this glimpse into Matt and Avery's life before the epilogue. Thank you for writing shorts for your characters.

So glad that all the guys have finally decided to let bygones be bygones and be friends. Good chapter

What a way to start a Sunday morning!!! The dorm room scene was so well written it played in my mind like a movie. I even had a song playing in my head by the end...Sting singing "In the Moonlight" from the movie Sabrina. When I can hear a song playing in my head during a scene, that's my cue that the writer has nailed it. Bravo, Gary!!!! Michael has finally opened his eyes with help from his parents. Those are two of the best parents I've ever read about. He's going to have his work cut out for him because Kendall isn't going to believe that he could love him romantically, plus the new friend isn't going to let Kendall go easily. Can't wait for the next chapter.

That was good. Dillon is doing the right thing. Mick deserves whatever the outcome is when he tells his boss. Taking credit for someone else's work is a no-no in the business world. Because eventually you get found out. And ooooooh the consequences from that are not pretty. Go home early, Mick, you're golden!! Thanks Renee, I enjoy all your prompts, stories and briefs.

Ditto on what Headstall (Gary) said! Nathan still hasn"t won me over, but I understand him a little after that scene with his father. Jeez, what a bastard. I believe that Taylor is confusing Nate. He doesn't act like the guy's he's used to. Thanks for that brief mention of Firefly Creek Ranch and their success.

That was another brutal chapter! Please let Lester be dead. Mick's a Fae, with powers. Yay!!!!Come on Guy!

Oh Nooooooooooo!!!! You weren't kidding about a cliffhanger!! Wow.

Continue, continue, continue....was that enough continues? I liked this and I'd love to read more about their lives together as a family. Find some more prompts.

Wonderful,wonderful ending! Firefly Creek Ranch is the perfect name for their new home. I love that Charlie is all grown up and went with the guys to their new home. I don't know how you think up such interesting characters, but you are superb at it. Hat's off to your imagination. I bet you're even going to make me love Nate, aren't you? Oh well, that'll be par for the course. LOL. Thank for sharings your stories with us because they make us think and feel deeply and sometimes drive us to drink and always make us cry because we become so invested.

The chapter was perfect just the way you presented it. Don't change anything. Loved Matt's POV. Travis' last statement will reverberate throughout the entire town. This isn't the last chapter is it?

That was hilarious!!! Whatever you're smoking, I want some! Yep, that door definitely needed to be sealed. "My Little Pony Porn"....too funny and now I won't be able to look at my grand-daughters little ponies without thinking of this. LOL

Nooooooooo It's ending already???? But I wanted it to be longer. (pouty face). LOL. Anyway, great chapter, you let us know how perfect they are for each other, how Clem's life has improved and changed and that everyone accepts and loves them both. You have such a descriptive way with words and you told us so much in this chapter. Glad they're moving in together can't wait for part 2.

I hate to say this but I really don't like this story and that's saying a lot coming from me. It's too painful and sad. Somebody needs to rescue this poor kid, soon. Or else he's gonna go postal on his dad. Heyyyyy......that's an excellent idea!!

Congrats on the story. I knew that if you ever wrote a story it would be epic and emotional. I was reading the first chapter last night when you posted this chapter and I decided to wait until morning to read it because I was feeling sad from Kendall's confession. Glad I waited. lol. Michael and Kendall's relationship is one of those that will stand the test of time and will last, no matter the circumstances. Yeah, it will have to evolve now, but it will still be strong. Michael loves Kendall but right now he doesn't know the depth of that love. Of course I don't want Michael to remain straight, especially if his taste in women trends towards the likes of Candy! But this could be a story of two friends who remain close even if they don't become a couple. It's happened...won't make me happy but it could happen. I'm all buckled up and ready to ride the emotional rollercoaster you're about to make us ride. I'm hooked. I guess I'm going to have to write my own reviews for this story, since I can't just ditto yours like I do for other stories.

Castration!!! and then stuff it down their throats! That's all I've got!