Hello. I hope you find the feedback you wan here.
I'm no poet, nor have I any clue regarding poetry, and I'm supposed to "not" be brutally honest which puts me in quite a predicament ....Alas, I gotta be honest. It touched me deep down, hitting a nerve or two.
I liked how you put words together reasoning in a nice way that people have to accept you the way you are. Good job. However, it was too neat, too grammatical, too much in the right order that, well, looked like a short prose to me.
Still keep on writing.