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If I Could If I could paint a portrait of you; For canvas, I’d use the ordinary days of my life before I met you; For paint I’d use the rainbows and the sunshine you have brought me; But what color would I paint your gentleness and goodness? What shape could I give to your warmth and your love? I could never capture on canvas all the special things you are and all that you mean to me, so I’ll just do the things I do best; That’s love you with all my heart.
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First try at poems
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Nice to you posting again.
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Ok, where is book 1? Don't want to read book 2 until I get book 1 done first.
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Chapter 14 - Swift Reunion
ShadowDancer commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 14 - Swift Reunion
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Nice job, really like the work you put into the chapter. Would really like to see what happens next
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Please Don’t Die On Me Sitting here in this Café drinking my morning cup of coffee, watching people walk by the big bay window. Like I do every day before I start my morning in my very quiet office across the street. I got up and got me a Danish before I left the Café, thinking I will eat it at my desk. As I was stepping out the café door I heard somebody yelling “Help me, Help me” I look around to find out what is going on, which when I looked at the corner of the block I saw somebody lay
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With everything those two guys have been through, if it was me I would put them back together but I guess in the real world wishes might not come true. I have enjoyed reading this story from the very start with all the ups and downs, hope there is a lot more chapters to come our way.
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Thank you Joann
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Thank you
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Your welcome and thanks for the review...long time no talk stranger...lol
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Thank you very much for saying that.
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My First Christmas In Five Years Two days before Christmas: “It’s about time you got here.” “Why are you not in Seattle? Your parents are going to worry about you not being there by the time they expect you, then they will be calling here asking me all kinds of questions. I am not going to cover for you with them.” “Yes you will and you know it. I wanted to talk to you before I left so I had to wait until you got here.” “What did you want?” “I was wondering if you would c
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Cody has not had a happy Christmas in five years since he got kicked out of his family home at the age of seventeen, until he meets up with Adam.
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Great chapter. You did mix up somebody saying something. When Chris and Maddy got to the party at Carter's you have Sam greeting Carter and Sam when it should be Chris saying the greetings. You ended this chapter great with the boys saying the were going to the private school and then with the puppies. Sure hope you have Carter and Sam getting there dues for the crap they have done.
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All I can say is : I NEED MORE, I have been hooked on this story since day and I can not wait for the next chapter to come out. LoL
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5th line from the bottom needs a little fixing. Sorry if I overstepped but I saw the fub and thought I would say something
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Happy Happy Birthday Lisa
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I KNOW...I KNOW... OPPS I can not say anymore then that ...well maybe a little bit ...Ya'll are going to LOVE this story, it is well written with a fabulous story line. Cole has come out with some great stories...wondering what he will come up with next
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OMG Jacob's web site is down, now I can not read any of his up to date stories since they are further long on the site then in GA
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Chapter 29 - The Talk
ShadowDancer commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 29 - The Talk
Great work, i have enjoyed reading this story and working on it with you. Yes i read it after you post each chapter just so i can read it again...lol. You have done a really great job on the chapters. -
Great story, had a great time editing the story for Cole. He is a author that I have enjoyed talking to and working with on his stories. Cole keep up the good work and Joann your review was right on point with the story.
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“Double C” Chapter 4 Cody watched Cal walk out the door wondering if he should get up and follow him. He didn’t want Cal to think he was smothering him. With what Mike has done in the one day Cal and I have been here, was making for me to worry about what could happen next with him. I didn’t trust Mike, he is putting off bad vibes and I’m usually not wrong when I get this gut feeling. I looked over at Hunter and asked, “Should we be worried about him being out there without one of us there?
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Really liked your short story, wonder what would have happened if it had been a longer story. lol. Keep up the good work, waiting to see what else you come up with.
