It's been a while since I saw a post on this story, I'm so glad its back, hopefully you have been inspired and we can see some more of this amazing story 😁
Wow, more tense than the church scene from the last chapter or the crazy boat ride from hell... you are doing an amazing job with this story, I have been reading it since it was in the mid double-digits.
My thought at that time was that he finds somebody to trust absolutely and gets away from all involved... the person he trusts could either bring him great reward or horrible experiences and unimaginable pain,
stories like these can litteraly go anywhere and i love it... that was pretty much all I felt i had to say...
Dani should go out on his own... how would that look? Only the aurhor can choose that... that is what makes these kinds of stories my favorite.... they could litteraly go anywhere! So exciting!
Ryan has a breaking point... it is nearing its maximum when it comes to being a prop for a show... he left show business in the spotlight for this very reason...
If he feels its starting to ruin their relationship, he needs to talk to jasper and tell him he needs to go home to save the relationship.
When you have any kind of anxiety disorder, sometimes thing are so triggering that you feel better ( less likely to wake someone up) if we are somewhere the other is not... Ryan is so stressed out that he is near an anxiery attack...
Jasper wanted to blow off steam... as long as he doesnt fall back into bad habbits again...
These two are aggrivating, in a good way... its like waiting for your favourite show to come back... the apprehension, the strife, and the other random stuff in between make the story meaty.... meaty is good