Shaggy_93

PERFECT CLIFF HANGER

My dislike for daniel has been growing for 50 chapters or so... this just pushed it further... He wants a status quo that doesnt exist... he doesnt fully realize the damage don is doing to him and his brother, and if he knows and sees it, and still does nothing, it just pushes me away from him. Amazing story, been reading since chapter 1 😁

I liked daniel... not anymore... too much like don... GO SUE! ROBBIE IS AWEAOME

Ive got a bad feeling about this...

This is gonna get crazy.... i love it 😁

I am not judging you, or your creative process... i have the utmost respect for you and your work, i and some others feel this chapter left the story... With or without context, it left the story, all we wanted was a warning, so we can continue this wonderful series. We love you, and your work, the way you work, the experinces you get to share, the memories you have shared... the love you have shared with us all... Seriously, just a warning is all were asking for... but only if half the chapter ends up being a flashback ( they are good for character development, but a hindrance if used too much... my english teacher taught me that). Sorry if i am being in any way rude or insensitive, but i respect you too much to not say something.

Good story overall, and i have been a fan of yours for a long time... going off on a tangent in the middle of a story will get people to skip till its relevent to the story again... harsh, i know... but sometimes truth is harsh (its why some people dont want to know the truth). YOU Are an ARTIST, sometimes artists need inspiration or guidance, not for others, but for yourself... if i was where you are, i would want the truth... no matter how harsh, or brutal, or disapointing... because i can make things better going forward... These are my feelings, and everyone is allowed to feel what they want... peace and respect.