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Mission - Succeed To Lose It All
Shaggy_93 commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in Mission - Succeed To Lose It All
G is on his way out... hes scared lol -
Casper needs to tread carefully... hes too close to Father and too close to James... Caleb seems like a decent human being in an extraordinary circumstance... poor kid
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Father is a manipulative fucker..... i think i get it.... im not saying anything
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That last line was definately comedic.... 😆
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This was a very good story, it was quick and had comedy (something we all need these days). You are an amazing writer, and i always look forward to what you decide to write next... thank you for being an amazing artist!
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Now i want to see what happens.... wonderfully written.... i just hope all ends well for poor rick... and i really hope rita has to pay what she owes$$$
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Who is this little shit? Is he a good egg, or is he rotten? Hopefully he doesnt hurt our little flyboy...
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Those two idiots are either gonna get pinched by the cops or get away with it.... i hope they get pinched
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The ending made me laugh! I needed that 😁
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Chapter 144 Looking After My Interests
Shaggy_93 commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 144 Looking After My Interests
If you make a sequel i will read every chapter... you are an amazing author!- 36 comments
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Big fan, cant wait for more... have no critical thoughts, because it is so well made.... keep it up! You are doing amazing 😁
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PERFECT CLIFF HANGER
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My dislike for daniel has been growing for 50 chapters or so... this just pushed it further... He wants a status quo that doesnt exist... he doesnt fully realize the damage don is doing to him and his brother, and if he knows and sees it, and still does nothing, it just pushes me away from him. Amazing story, been reading since chapter 1 😁
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I liked daniel... not anymore... too much like don... GO SUE! ROBBIE IS AWEAOME
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This is gonna get crazy.... i love it 😁
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Past Shapes the Future: Pt 2
Shaggy_93 commented on R. Eric's story chapter in Past Shapes the Future: Pt 2
I am not judging you, or your creative process... i have the utmost respect for you and your work, i and some others feel this chapter left the story... With or without context, it left the story, all we wanted was a warning, so we can continue this wonderful series. We love you, and your work, the way you work, the experinces you get to share, the memories you have shared... the love you have shared with us all... Seriously, just a warning is all were asking for... but only if half the chapter ends up being a flashback ( they are good for character development, but a hindrance if used too much... my english teacher taught me that). Sorry if i am being in any way rude or insensitive, but i respect you too much to not say something. -
Past Shapes the Future: Pt 2
Shaggy_93 commented on R. Eric's story chapter in Past Shapes the Future: Pt 2
Good story overall, and i have been a fan of yours for a long time... going off on a tangent in the middle of a story will get people to skip till its relevent to the story again... harsh, i know... but sometimes truth is harsh (its why some people dont want to know the truth). YOU Are an ARTIST, sometimes artists need inspiration or guidance, not for others, but for yourself... if i was where you are, i would want the truth... no matter how harsh, or brutal, or disapointing... because i can make things better going forward... These are my feelings, and everyone is allowed to feel what they want... peace and respect.
