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  1. Timothy M.
    It's 1 am and I should go to bed. Will catch up on the rest later. Lots of awesome stories so far.
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    I was sad it took them a whole year to make their way back to their secret space and to an understanding of what they are to reach other. But at least they did get there and Dalton grew up enough to take the needed step out of his mother's clutches. I think having almost lost the friendship and love they are much more likely to stand fast against the inevitable fall-out when they face the world as a couple. Awesome story, Batman.
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    Under the Surface

    Timothy M. commented on jfalkon's story chapter in Under the Surface

    That was gruesome. I'm glad Jeff was OK and about to be rescued. I hope all the parents who abandoned their kids there will be punished. Including Justin's narrow-minded, stupid parents. The interesting thing is Justin was actually not a very nice kid before, but he actually developed empathy and became less selfish in the camp. However, this might have been achieved in a less damaging manner.
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    Message Bringer

    Timothy M. commented on C.T. Piatt's story chapter in Message Bringer

    I liked the fact he was never really tamed, never not dangerous, even when he was with Corey. Perhaps they will find a way to keep the beast down together.
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    YES, another fan captured You need to start reading from the top, in order to get the whole dynamic. Be ready to laugh til you cry.
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    Chapter 1

    Timothy M. commented on Defiance19's story chapter in Chapter 1

    The way you describe them, Tait is definitely a better fit to Sloan, so I hope he has luck in becoming his friend and perhaps more. He has his own company to keep him busy, and Sloan has hopefully learned his lesson about keeping communications open and his relationship a priority in life. I don't blame Jason and Toby for falling in love, but Tobias should have spoken up and given Sloan a chance to change. Great story, Def.
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    At least Shade was sensible and even a little impressed by the human tricking Briar. And I'm glad the human got revenged and escaped, even if he dies in his sleep.
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    Brotherhood

    Timothy M. commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in Brotherhood

    I had to check again to see if Cole was writing the story. you definitely did well with Rush and Ben, though I guess being with Ben has mellowed the PI a lot. Heart-warming story, but I'm wondering what happened at the wedding and after. Did the parents refuse to attend or did Isaac tell them where to go (a hot place starting with H ).
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    You can definitely be proud, Northie. I'm impressed and emotionally wrung out at the same time.
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    The Story

    Timothy M. commented on northie's story chapter in The Story

    That almost made me cry. It's my one great fear, to lose my mind. But it was beautiful story and it evoked the past magnificently.
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    Chapter 1

    Timothy M. commented on Puppilull's story chapter in Chapter 1

    This was a good sequel to your previous anthology story, yet it also made sense by itself. I'm glad he finally got out and I hope Stuart can convince Cyril to go to the hospital and have his injuries documented. The threat of a trial for assault may be sufficient to keep his abuser away.
  12. Timothy M.
    I'm glad they took Sally with them, so she gets to meet aliens in a good way. I'm sure Simon and Alex will have fun together.
  13. Timothy M.
    and of course the tradition continues in SATW https://satwcomic.com/america-has-spoken https://satwcomic.com/well
  14. Timothy M.
    Greenland has their own flag - and there's a SATW comic for that of course.
  15. Timothy M.
    On the other hand, I get two notifications when someone comments on lomax's story (not on chapters, but the story itself). One notification says lomax has commented on and the other says lomax commented on (and it's the same comment). I guess one notification comes from me following the story and the other from me having liked the story ? Same happens with Wild Card by Dayne Mora btw.
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    Chapter 2.1

    Timothy M. commented on Caz Pedroso's story chapter in Chapter 2.1

    Ha, I knew it. The needle was silver. Which one of the cubs is Kitryn's ? I'm guessing the other two are adopted or something. I'm glad he takes Fran's gift seriously.
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    Chapter 1.2

    Timothy M. commented on Caz Pedroso's story chapter in Chapter 1.2

    so was the needle silver and prevented the cat from shifting?
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    Chapter 22

    Timothy M. commented on craftingmom's story chapter in Chapter 22

    I think Declan needs to go slow with Bailey, but a bit of making out will probably be fine. I'm glad Bailey is coming to accept Daniel as someone who is good for his mother.
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    Chapter 21

    Timothy M. commented on craftingmom's story chapter in Chapter 21

    It's so awesome when the grown-ups in charge are actually honorable and wise.
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    I liked this story too, and I'm sort of split between finding it perfect the way it is and wanting more. It was a good critique, and I hope you get a response from the author. I'm still a bit bummed Mann never reacted to my contribution.
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    Chapter 7

    Timothy M. commented on Cia's story chapter in Chapter 7

    I'm not sure Lakshou's abilities would have prevented the incident. Kemit wasn't upset until the captain caught him, and Kohen had a physical reaction to people staring at him. I can see the Captain has learned his lesson about not asking intrusive questions.
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    Chapter 6

    Timothy M. commented on Cia's story chapter in Chapter 6

    OK. I won't mention what I shouted when Lakshou ordered Kohen's meal. I'm not surprised Lakshou might employ sensual techniques as a counselor, and of course some prudes would misinterpret it. Reminds me of how Firesong's lover Silverfox is viewed by some in the Valdemar books.
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    Tillykke med fødselsdagen waves Danish birthday flags at you and SATW comic of flag waving to cheer you up
  24. Timothy M.
    Sorry to hear you have health problems, my friend. I hope you'll get through the necessary treatment without too much discomfort and find yourself completely cured by the end of it. We look forward to seeing you back at GA, but the most important matter is for you to take care of yourself and get well.
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    Story

    Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Story

    So lovely to get a new comment on this story, which may be my favorite too. I invested a lot of effort in writing it, and nothing is more rewarding than readers expressing their approval. Yes, Ken is a keeper and I've no doubt he and Colin will make each other very happy.
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