Timothy M.

It'll be interesting to see whether Zach is clever enough to think of the solution which Will implied: Call JP and explain the situation (including being disappointed at losing this opportunity) and ask for advice. Call Frank and do the same. Sit back and wait for JP to decimate Barry and for Frank and Isobel to flay the parents (in a coldly polite manner).

Fuck I knew something would go wrong due to the lie, but I'd never have guessed it'd be so bad. However, for all his impassioned speech, Corbin never managed to tell Pete he loved him. And I agree with Mike: nothing can be resolved unless Corbin admits loving Pete - to his face. Poor Mike; I feel more sorry for him than either Corbin or Pete.

Thanks for replying. Just to be clear: I don't want Kevin to hurry up and do anything. Not sex, coming out, dating, saying he loves Rory or even kissing. I'm fine with him taking things slow. However, it would be nice to occasionally see Kevin use his brain and be sensible and start thinking about what Rory says and does. And maybe eventually open his mouth and TALK to him, ask him what he likes, how he feels. We know he can, because they did when chatting. And it's nothing to do with age, but I'll admit I'm a guy who handles everything in life from an intellectual stand point (even as a teenager). So I can't relate to all this emo stuff. However, this is probably why I'm attracted to your stories, and I find your characters cute in many ways. But when they keep up the silly nonsense for too long, it gets too much. So if they just act intelligently now and then, I'd have no complaints about your stories. Not that I have any right to complain about getting to read all these awesome tales for free

I'm so glad you finally decided to continue this story. They are a great couple, even if they do sometimes hurt each other with words.

Well this was sex-as-healing, not sex for fun. Although I've no doubt both Riley and Takashi would do this again for pleasure, and Mick would enjoy it even more. However, the likelihood of Takashi being a future boyfriend decreased with this chapter I think. He's much more likely to be a friend, even if he and Mick might have a period with lots of hot (kinky) fun. But I could be wrong. Oh and another thing: now we know Mick is Fae and not human, we can't judge his behaviour by human society. So slutty for us is normal for Fae in this world as defined by Robin. I was more surprised by Riley's enthusiasm for being bitten. Hmmm how about Riley as Guy's boyfriend ? I'm sure a Fae who likes to be bitten during sex must be a wet dream for a werewolf

Oh yes Takashi is just right for Mick in so many ways. I noticed immediately that he was the FIRST person who'd made love to Mick without projecting his feelings or reacting badly to the scars. And apparently they share tastes (BDSM) in bed. Yet Takashi is so caring and considerate - but I bet he can be protective too. So I vote for Tas I feel sorry for Guy, but let's face it. He doesn't make Mick feel good about himself and so far his interest is more of a crush on a man who smells nice than anything deeper. This might change, especially if Takashi stays a friend or is too afraid of the loss of control he mentions. No matter what, Mick has certainly not agreed to be Guy's boyfriend, so he's free to like Tas.

Well now we know why Mick doesn't date. Not Justin and not Guy or anyone else. And considering how bad he felt about Justin, we also know Mick is a good guy. With lots of issues and prone to making mistakes, but he never sets out to hurt people. Not just because he feels their hurt as his own, but because he's a decent man who is a tangled mess through no fault of his own. I saw one reader call Mick a slut, but I find this unfair. Sex is one of the few activities which gives Mick a pleasant connection to other people. I find it perfectly understandable he searches for it. Yes he has to do it in slightly strange ways and with 'rules' so as not to freak out, but once we're told his reasons, they make sense. And the pleasure of his partner is literally enough to please Mick as well. Nothing's wrong with sex-as-recreation as long as the participants agree on it - and Mick learnt his lesson with Justin about not going further. Anyway, I loved the fact that Takashi rescued Mick from the asshat rapist. He does seem like a much more likely boyfriend than Guy, if only for the fact that Mick can be sure any emotions he feels are his own and not projected by the dancer. Or if nothing else Tas could be friend with benefits

Well this chapter explains a lot. Mostly nice stuff apart from the evil stepfather issues. We're all thankful there was a nice guy called Justin in Mick's life. He deserved a bit of luck and relief.

Loved the explanation about how Mick worked as a human lie detector, very interesting. Why did I get the feeling the evil Fae woman was the Queen ? Poor Riley, but the complusive cuddling was unexpectedly sweet. Oh and the hints of things to come are fun to spot on a second read. And this is the chapter where the story starts getting complicated, but you do so skillfully we barely notice at first. Tahashi, he's fascinating and I definitely get a vampire vibe from the teeth description. Another fun consequence of Mick being a dentist (he wants to see an X-ray - lol). If nothing else I hope Takashi becomes a friend and maybe Guy can take lessons in how to stop projecting your feelings in the presense of an empath. Or could he teach Mick to shield ?

This chapter is the most difficult of all. So much hurt and sadness and stupidity. Almost the only redeeming part (except for the initial fun) is Guy saving Mick. He should have let him rip Lester apart - just a little bit more. Please let Guy chew him up next time or even better tell his superior about this. I bet there's some supernatural high enough to pin this evil fucker and make him suffer. And Guy did say there were priviliges with being officially pursued. Although thinking it over this chapter also taught me Mick is strong in spite of his messy past. And the things he does to survive and stay sane may seem crazy but who are we to judge. He saved his little sister, nothing else needs to be said. And Guy needs to start using his brain to control his protective wolf

I agree with Dawn. Plus it's so cute how Guy refuses to be rejected and tries to date Mick properly. The whole you're not human matter was awesome, so funny and interesting too. But maybe the most important part is the way we're shown how diffficult it is for Mick to be around people with strong emotions or in places with residuals of bad stuff. I totally get how Guy's pity annoyed him.

So many revelations in this chapter, it's hard to keep track. The dentist thing was brilliant, so clever and logical that Mick can function well in a sterile environment. Oh and the whole 'my wisdom teeth grow back' issue was hilarious. I feel for Guy, my lower wisdom teeth grew the wrong way too and had to come out in small pieces. Sweet stuff with the kid - you forgot to change her name from Hannah to Emma in one place (Hannah's mom). The cutting business sets my teeth on edge (sorry about the pun), but it does seem logical no matter how scary it is. It's our first glimpse into how badly affected Mick is by his empathy and hints of even deeper issues. You wrote it so well I can hardly stand reading it again. Thankfully we get the restaurant scene, which is deliciously funny. Their discussion, the ducking under the table, and finally the 'I want to pursue you' stunt. The advice of the waitress and Mick's reaction has me in stitches every time. Finally you let us have some hot sex, thank you - even if it is laced by hints of sadness and discomfort. The most poignant part (on a second read) is Mick's quip 'Empaths are easy.' Funny on the surface, desperately sad deep down. All in all a brilliant chapter and the one to hook your fans (and scare off the rest).

I think your readers are as hotly frustrated as Guy and Mick after this chapter. The whole you smell good and I want to chase you and 'eat' you deal was cute and scary. I'm not surprised Mick felt weird about it and opted out. The funniest part was the Fuck - I'm trying exchange, has me laughing every time. Oh and the shirt issue is so much more poignant the second time around.

This is my second time around reading this story. It was good the first time and even better now I know more of Mick's background. I liked the way you threw us directly into the situation and had us work out what was going on from the things happening. Such as Mick meeting and helping werewolves and being able to sense and untangle emotions. And the sniffing bit was nicely intriguing. I loved the snarky humor too. It made the rage and revelation at the end even more dramatic. Oh and you write well too, the language is vivid and flows smoothly. Hope you keep going for a long time.

You know what. I like your stories and your characters are cute. But sometimes I get so weary reading about these silly emotionally insecure boys who ramble on inside their heads but never open their mouths and talk to the person they love. It's like they have no brains and after a while I lose respect and stop caring about all the angst they go through. Just once it would be nice to read a story of yours where the main character occasionally acted intelligently and actually remembered what their boyfriends told them. Instead of making up all these ridiculous scenarios and hurting themselves and other people. Kevin knows that Rory knows all about how Kyle is fixated on sex. Rory even said he didn't like it. It would be so easy to talk about how envious his socalled friends were and how they were being shallow and just asking about sex and didn't understand about being in love. I'm sure you could make up ten different ways which are even more clever and would lead to Rory simply telling Kevin to stop listening to those two morons. But I guess the main reason I get fed up is that all of your 'heros' are so self centered and blind. They go on and on about their own issues and never seem to think about how other people feel except to worry about how it relates to them. Kevin has gotten so many clues about Rory being insecure, he's even been told directly. But he shows no interest in finding out more or helping by being honest about his own worries. Instead he acts in ways that has Rory feeling even worse. I want to slap him. Sorry, I'm probably being unfair, but these guys exhaust and annoy me till I want to scream. I start reading every one of your stories hoping this one will be just slightly sensible and I get disappointed again and again. Nothing but emo boys driving me nuts. Could you please break this pattern - just once ?

Powerful chapter and I like to think of Brad as a furnace stoking them with energy and making them evaluate their relationships in a good way. Loved the wooing and teasing and the desire Brad had for everything they offered (not just sex). There's a couple of Brad/Mark name mix-ups as well as a few other typos. Send me a PM if you want a list.

Ohh that was sweet and hot. I wonder if Damien will be back to his spiky behavior next morning. Habits like that are hard to ditch. Oh and that goes for Dallas-as-jock as well. He may want to change but the patterns are still there. Their parents will be in for a shock if both boys suddenly declare they are gay AND boyfriends. Hope it turns out OK. But there's plenty of potential for interesting development, so I'm glad to see the story is 'In progress'.

This may be the sweetest chapter so far. The beautiful country boy with a cleaning obsession and endless butt hunger. I had to laugh, when John said he was in love. Good thing Mark's soul is as handsome as his body, so they all adore him.

Anyone would love Sean for a housemate with cooking skills like that. But the interaction between Sean and Tim is fun too, and John seems to relax even more.

I think you did well on the court room stuff, only I'm wondering why Asher was interogated by the defense council first, since I assume he's a witness for the prosecutor. But it's a minor detail and easily forgotten in the nice drama you created. But I hope somebody stops Michael from reaching Asher or punching the slime ball, because he could very well ruin everything. I doubt the case will be called a mistrial when the defense was clearly badgering the witness (enough to make him faint) plus he brought up the receipts. The judge seems clever enough to just say to the jury that they should disregard the last sentense. And Asher swooning may get him some sympathy and thus work against Allen and the slime ball.

Aawww so cute I don't know whether to applaud or roll my eyes. I totally agree with everything Cole said. Oh and such a nice sensible dad, not many of those around. But maybe the fact there's no risk of pregnancy helps

I like the way this is going, John certainly has room in his heart and his apartment for more than one guy. And I like the hints of Tim helping him to relax, he seems to have a playful nature.

Takes a little while to get used to the story telling style, but it works quite well, actually. They were quick to get into bed, but I guess they were two lonely souls coming together at just the right time.

I had exactly the same thought, Mark was described as the 'power bottom', so it makes more sense if the big dick sentence (This brings us to Mark, our most recent addition.) and the reply is about Brad.

I wish Corbin had told Pete he was going out with Mike, serve him right. And I fear the lie will mess things up even more. But I can't blame him for keeping his options open. Even if it also increases the risk of Mike getting heartbroken. But kudos for him for trusting Corbin to deal with his friends and any suspicion of gay stuff. I'm getting more and more annoyed with Dom, he's a prick, but I wonder if we and Corbin will ever find out why Dom hates Corbin. It can't just be his unconventional ways. Is Dom jealous of the attention and fame ? And the Melanie Mystery increases, but I have faith Corbin will pull off another miraculous save.