Timothy M.

I've been remiss in leaving reviews, but I really like this story. Just enough uncertainty and issus to make it interesting but also an attraction and clear determination that makes it unlikely that they will not be mated soon. If those naughty females hadn't interrupted, it may well have happened right then. But I have the feeling that would have embarrassed Gavin even more than just being caught making out. I hope he will soon be convinced that the love is for real. And then comes the whole shifter thing - that will be very interesting too.

I totally respect Adam's point of view. I think Mikeal's parents would be upset with the deception later and that would color their reaction to him admitting he's gay. But the Thanksgiving holiday would be a good chance for him to come out to his dad and then ask his advice on how to deal with the rest of the family. I hope he gets up his courage to do so. In return Adam should admit his feelings - and at least he is not chiding his boyfriend for his lack of courage in coming out when he is a coward too. But at least he has admitted it to himself. And it was cute the way he hated that they had a fight

Very sweet and sensual, just what anyone would want for their first time. This story just keeps getting better, and not just due to the hot sex

I forgot to add that Hornblower does have a few more things in common with Granger: A hearty dislike of corporal punishment, an appreciation of good food and loyal servants, and a fondness for taking baths in seawater. I look forward to Granger's reaction to seeing Hornblower naked on the deck being doused with water by grinning seamen. And I have nothing against you bending Horatio in unexpected ways, but I don't think he'd be amenable to being the receiving partner in anal sex. But we all know that no one can resist the offer of blowjobs and getting to fuck Granger. For his sake I hope Hornblower has a big dick Oh and as far as I remember Hornblower was never unfaithful to his wives. He may have fallen in love with Lady xx (can't remember her name) whilst still married to Maria, and he was very close to admitting it, but they got interrupted by the maid. After that nothing happened until after Maria died in childbirth.

While George is likely to be disappointed in Hornblower's lack of appreciation of music and male sex, I'm sure he'll have empathy with a fellow prisoner of war and be impressed with the sharp intelligence which I recall from my readings of the books.

Oh well if Yuri freaks out from Benny's presence at least the two doctors will know what they are up against. But I bet the words 'I want Benny' was the sweetest sentence he has heard since Yuri and he got beaten up. Hope for the best and thanks for keeping us trembling with anticipation

I've read this story a couple of times and while it's sad and also a bit scary, I keep telling myself that Brian will be able to change his life and not be lonely anymore. But I sure wouldn't mind having you write the story of how that came to pass. If you don't want readers to beg for a sequel, you shouldn't create characters that capture our attention and make us wish for nice things to happen after all the bad stuff

Isla is the best, and I like the fact that Kurt has an easy time bonding with Tay's sisters. And apparantly Tay has learnt his lesson about not pushing Kurt when they are human. Getting him to be comfortable with his human side will be quite an accomplishment And the reward will be worth it for Tay - as well as hot

Loved all the running stuff, both the scaring bit down he hill and the mad car chase. Interesting that Mak will back up Socco not just against outsiders but when he thinks it's the fair thing to do. Gives me hope for the future of them as brothers-in-law. I'm looking forward to the two day trip with the other musher too. And how did Cenai's date with Gunnar go ? Or is that the evening of this day ? He'll be a bit surprised when she falls asleep in his lap from running all day

I liked getting an insight into the problems that dating a non-shifter could cause. Cenai may become my favorite husky after the cute trio, so nice to have a sensible and capable female in gay male stories, rather than the cliches we often encounter. Look forward to reading more about her romance with Gunnar. Oh and the whole vet and transport thing was funny, just because it was so realistic and none of them had thought about this. Just like the whole 'take the dogs for a walk' scene where we got introduced to Gunnar.

It will be interesting to see whether Will has matured enough to find out what is going on instead of being instantly nasty to Matt. He may manage if Matt is smart enough to immediately tell him that Wade needs help instead of going ahead with his original (stated) plan. Will will do anything for Wade, and if he realizes Matt is actually being a friend and not a stalker, this might be the beginning of a reconciliation (or maybe just the first brick in the foundation of a possible future reconciliation ). But of course it'll create a lot more drama if Will and Matt have an argument right now. And it will be a lovely opportunity for people to say how immature and bad Will is. Are you giving them the chance, Mark ?

Embarassing but sweet and I loved his cool family.

Beautiful and sad. Why do you always write stories that make me want to cry?

Liked it a lot, but I sure would like to see how Scott deals with being out at school and everyone trying to get used to his new image.

Im glad they got past the initial confusion about devotion and sex and managed to please each other. Very senual and sweet and hot. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I remember reading this the first time and wanting more. I'm glad you've made Kertyn a little more feisty this time round, yet still innocently devoted to his duty. But ch 2 was still something of a shock. Hope we don't have to wait long for a continuation.

Short, cute and hot, what more could we ask? Well for one I'd like to know if he took as well as he gave In fact I was rather surprised Jo turned out to be the top, but maybe that little twist was planned. I can just see your eyes twinkling as you set us all up to think of Mac as the knight in shining armor out to save his love

I don't think the decision can be made without knowing why Brandon is still seeing his girlfriend. If he does it for sex or to hide his gay side, it's one thing. Then the problem is mainly the dishonesty (not that it's not bad enough). If he loves her and plans to marry her and have children with her, that's something quite different. Nothing can survive that. Right now they are living together and Brandon seems to fulfill every dream. So he has to ask himself whether he would be prepared to let Bran be with this girl on the side, if everything else was his. Maybe the real thrill for Bran is the secrecy and bad boy image of having an affair. If it was treated as his silly little habit, sort of going bowling once a week, it might lose the attraction. Sort of "I'm off to see my mistress." "OK hon, have fun, but don't forget to be safe. And take a shower before you come home, I hate it when you smell of her cheap perfume. And remeber when you're back, I get to tap that bad boy ass of yours." To be serious he may be able to find balance, but not without honesty. So that's the price Brandon will have to pay: no more lying or cheating (as in pretending he's faithful). And that means telling his girlfriend the truth too. It may not be enough to seal the bargain, but they could try. And at least if Brandon refused to do it, it would expose where his priority is. That would prevent more loss of pride and self-esteem.

Oops, typo, meant ch 1 not 2. Though I guess I should have complained here, because now there really isn't any more story So how about doing a little side trip to this sweet couple when Lost gets a bit sad Pretty Please...

Oh right, sorry about my complaint on ch 2. It did get hot - cold first I guess, but then hot as hell. But still cute Glad they worked out the problem fairly quickly and that Ram helped. I'm not adverse to a bit of drama, but I hate it when misunderstandings go on for ever.

AS always your story is sad, beautiful and uplifting. I just wish it hadn't ended before things got hot between them At least Keiron could still feel things below the waist, that's a good sign of them being able to have a relationship that was fulfilling in every way (mentally, spiritually and physically).

Drew: Is that both ways ? I.e. mutual oral sex? I knew they didn't do more as Will and John had a cherry deal

I totally agree with Daddydavek. Nor is it believable that Gathan wouldn't have a condom considering his high sex appeal, even less that Will wouldn't have more than one condom, or finally that Zach doesn't have condoms, since he tops Will some of the time. Nor is it very credible that Zach would be OK with his rival and recent enemy barebacking Will. And all of this to what end: a bit of nasty cum eating stuff that's supposed to show us Will is OK with Zach being a bit kinky. I'm sure there're better ways to have conveyed that idea. Sorry, but not cool

I took up Mark's challenge to keep track of the people Will had sex with. The only one I'm not sure about is Drew, because I don't know if they did mutual blowjobs. So I just put him under both oral with a question mark. I've sorted it by oral and anal (or intercourse) and whether Will gave or received, If the name in oral is in parenthesis, it means there was oral play but not a full BJ. I noticed that there is no description of Zach giving Will head. He may have or not, just no mention. Interestingly, Tony never went down on Will either, nor did Will go all the way orally. With Tony it all seemed to be about him being a top. A person may appear in more than one category depending on what they've done. (I tried to do this as a table, but that didn't work.) Within each combination the list is chronological. So depending on whether you count Mike the Skater who Will sucked a bit then gave a hand job, he has been with 34 or 35 people, two of which were girls. Hope this is what you wanted Mark, and if anyone sees someone I've missed, let me know and I'll correct this post. Will gave ORAL to Drew?, Gathan, John, (Gustave), Berto, (Tony), Ryan, (Tyler the cab driver), Jeff, Kristoffer, Shane, (Patrick), John Carullo, Alistair, Paolo, Kyle, Vic the Masseur, (Trevor & Hayden), Jake, Mason, Steve the realtor, Kai, Ethan’s friend Joe, Zach Will received ORAL from Drew?, cousin John, Gathan, Gustave the kidnapper in Paris, Berto, (David), Jeff, (Mike skater), Shane, Cary the clerk in San Fran store, (Trevor), (Mason), Kai, (Malcolm) Will had intercourse with (giving): Gustave, Berto, Raine, David the ice dancer, Jason the Tech guy, Jeff, Hayden, Mason, Malcolm, Marie, Zach Will had intercourse with (receiving): Berto, Tony, Ryan, Tyler the cab driver, John, Jeff, Patrick from party, Gathan, Kyle, Trevor, Chicago night club guy, Carmine, Kai, Erik, John Carullo, Zach Oh and unless Mark has something completely unexpected up his sleeve for the last chapter of 9.11 that should be it for the three stories he mentioned. I'm happy to keep track in future stories, if it's of interest to anyone.

Will has fucked or been fucked by more than twelve guys before he met Kai. If we discount Gustave and Raine (girl), he has forgotten the dude in Chicago and Patrick in the bathroom, Hayden and Trevor. So that would make Kai number 17 not 13. Just saying