Timothy M.

How sweet that Zander has apparently been bragging about his new boyfrind so much that even people he only knows in a vague way has heard about him being hooked up. Obviously these were not his friends, nor was the first guy at the bar, who had to introduce himself. His real friends would know the deal, because Zander would never embarrass Zupan or his friends by leaving them unaware. I bet he has even said something cute and sexy about loving that he can go for a walk with Zu and be in his lap at the same time. Not that I blame Zu for getting out of there, but I sure would have liked for him to see the absolute fit Zander was about to have, I bet he would have just about killed those three guys with something utterly cutting and witty. Oh and I was just waiting for the clothes shopping part, I'm betting that will be a regular occurence, especially the underwear. And that Zupan will be very surprised by how people will notice him in a different way, when he starts looking smart all the time. Zoltan and Bay are just gonna tease him so much about it - but I bet his twin is relieved never to have to take his brother shopping for clothes again.

Blimey, barebacking in the changing room with no lube, they really are getting desperately naughty, aren't they ? But as alway you manage to mix humour and sex in a really wonderful way. Nice that Zander finds it great that Zu is only hot for him - and I'm guessing that he is a bit awed by the fact that Zupan is so obviously committed (using the L word and being protective and possessive). From Bay's comments earlier it seems as if Zander has been used and heartbroken before, so he deserves being loved and wanted.

Thanks for some wonderful chapters in the past few days. Interesting that Zu wanted Zander to be at the bar, I wonder if he'll have second thoughts in between now and then. He obviously has no problem with random people seeing him with a boy on his lap. But based on his reactions towards his brother and gym friends and previous girl hook-ups, he may find it more difficult to deal with his brand new relationship and barely acknowledged bisexuality in front of people who know him. Hope he does not chicken out, that would probably upset Zander a lot.

What an amazing story. Such an original take on how to deal with shyness and the bullying related to being gay. Teasing Peter in a 'safe' environment - even if he did feel very uncomfortable, and explaining how getting upset does not help but being able to give back as good as you get is the best way. I get the point I was a loner who spent most of my childhood reading, and I had a hard time in school because I've never been able to bear teasing. Nothing as bad as the stuff gay teenagers have to deal with, just the geek issue and other stuff. I would guess that Andy had gone through the whole desensitizing process with Marty - after helping Marty with dealing with the earlier 'fat' issues hinted at in one of the chapters. Andy really is very clever and he manipulates people brilliantly - in a good way. So great how he dealt with the gay matter on the swim tream, towards the other people in school and the enemy swim team. Turning the table on the guys doing the bullying - and in such a funny way too. At first I was a bit annoyed about Peter being so clueless about himself, but I soon realized that it was very much in character for his age and personality. He was in denial and pretending about all the touching and flirting stuff being innocent, but no more and no longer than was credible. And when Matthew came out to him, he redeemed himself big time. Showing that he had thought about it, but very coyly hidden this from us as well as himself. Of course I would have liked to read more about their fun in bed, and how their relationship became more serious. But I think you made the right choice about keeping it to hints and funny descriptions. It meant the story stayed in tune all the way through, and they were still quite young - even in the very last chapter two years later on. This will definitely be one of my favorite stories from now on.

HOT, HOT, HOT !! And just a little bit funny too. And very well written. What more can I say - you've done it again. Looking forward to the next date - and I bet it does not go the way Zupan expects.

He finally meets someone he likes - and he has sex with Joey while thinking of Colin. What an idiot ! I lost all respect and interest right there. And it seemed so promising a story.

Finally, I've been waiting for this chapter for a long time. I like it that they are still a bit tentative about their relationship, but still manage to commit to each other. Hope they have a nice sleep and a cuddle when they wake up. Did you manage to read the comment I left in chapter 1 ?

I totally agree with Lisa. Zupan needs someone who can keep him on his toes mentally and play games with him. This story looks like it's going to be a lot of fun. You've already run into one of the problems wth having two main characters beginnign with Z: getting them mixed up. Zupan handed him his drink, line already pushed down - should be Zander (and lime). Oh and you had how instead of who a couple of lines higher, but I think we all prefer to have chapters fast and with a few mistakes rather than wait for perfection.

Hmm you really have a fetish for guy's names starting with Z - although Zander did start out being spelt with an X, when Bay defended him in the bar. Anyway, it'll be fun to see where you take this . and nice that Issac and Bay can be the ones to help Zu sort things out rather than the other way round.

Am I the only one to feel that this story ended too soon ? There were so many emotional ups and downs (and mainly the latter) that two or three more chapters showing their relationship sailing smoothly instead of being in stormy weather would have been good for unclenching my gut after reading the first 31 chapters. Somehow I get the feeling that you like the drama but get bored with happiness fairly quickly. I's OK as you do write wonderful drama, but you could work on writing more of the aftermath. I think it would make your readers very happy. Because in fact chapter 32 (and parts of ch 30) were great to read, full of tender but still funny moments - and in any case I'm sure Bay and Issac would still have issues to deal with for a while yet. Anyway, thanks for a fantastic story, it will stay on my favorite list forever.

This was the best chapter of a great story (I loved the butt groping game), so I'm rather upset that it is also the last, and that there has been no update for a long time. I like the way that our perception of Sam and Dane changes over time and for this chapter also how we view Dane's friends. Aaron is totally cool.

Insanely hot ! But I hope they'll switch positions once in a while, even if Drew seems happy being the bottom. Or than Ethan will at least allow some mutual fingering time. Now Ethan just needs to sort himself out regarding school, friends and parents. But I'm guessing there will be some bad stuff with all of that, before the story is over. Just hope it does not rip them apart.

Fuck Ethan you really are mean and stupid. You could have averted suspicion for a while longer and protected your relationship if you and Drew had started to spend lunch together with the other guys. Why do you persist thinking with your dick - arrrgh though I guess part of the problem is lack of maturity as well as intelligence, I keep forgetting they are only supposed to be 14 years old, they come across as older most of the time.

so am I the only one to think Ethan an idiot for ditching his friends and not taking the chance to make Drew a part of their group. It's gonna come back and bite him in the ass, especially that he did not come clean to his best friend. Serves him right if they don't have his back when the shit hits the fan.

Will you please, please, continue with this story. I've read it three times now, and I'm desperate for more ! It's so fun and intense and even cute at times. Tay may be my favorite in both stories, but all of them are great.

Oh the irony of that last sentence 'where I could start over and hopefully not screw up my life so much' was just too hilarious. Hindsight is a wonderful thing - and I'll say again that your story just gets so much better and is more fun with the switches in time. Bay's parents are idiots, but I hate his Coach more. What a shitty, unfair thing to do - especially not to include Bay at the graduation ceremony, when he was their most important runner. Getting on that train might have been running away, but he was totally justified and better off.

Poor Bay - the one time he sees a man he really admires and desires, the guy is a nasty predator who demeans him by using female 'names'. He may have escaped the rape of his body, but his mind was fucked with and a whole load of issues were added. Yeah, I also guess that was the end of his clubbing. No wonder he freaked out as Issac's suggestion - but on the other hand: shame on Bay for not realizing that there is a huge difference between the man who loves him and has already given his body selflessly and people who disrespect him and try to make him into a 'girl'.

I think you are being unfair to Bay in this chapter - and the next chapter confirmed my feelings. And the fact that you've not described their lovemaking in any detail suddenly became a problem, rather than just being slightly annoying - ie went from 'nice to have' to 'need to have'. Cause I wonder how much access Issac has had to Bay's ass until now. If Bay has totally avoided even simple caresses, or if he has tensed up and moved away from gentle fingering, this should have told Issac that his boyfriend had issues about anal sex, at least as the recipent. And Issac should have figured out that there might be something traumatic involved, as the next chapter shows. And as the more mature guy it was up to him to ask about this gently and not during foreplay and in this way. On the other hand, if Bay was OK with being touched intimately in relation to his ass, then I can understand why Issac would be so surprisd and angry that he refused to receive - and in those words. But if Bay let Issac insert fingers, then why would he be so shocked to be asked to go the whole way ? But maybe he just ignored the possibility, the way he ignores most of his other issues. Just confusing... But I still think that Bay deserves more understanding - from Issac as well as us. Glad to see I'm not the only one to feel that way.

I've read this great story on Literotica countless times, I liked the few improvements you've made here, though I noted you didn't catch every mistake. My 'favorite' is in chapter 3 where they are suddenly naked on the bed without any indication of how it happened. One of the subtle tings is how you use Mac and Andy to show how Mike feels about his mechanic. And Mac realizes that, too, saying how being called Mac was like a jab to his heart.

A bit weird, but fun :-)

Thank you AK for the info about nifty, so that I could read the last three chapters of this great story. There's even a promise of a sequel, so I'll hope for that.

Blimey, once Aaron opens up, he really does let everything out, doesn't he ? We're talking major dam bursting here - and Ben's reaction after the flood is soooo cool. 'Yes, I'll be your boyfriend', just awesome.

I think this was the chapter where I realized how shy or even repressed and insecure Aaron really is. And the cliff hanger was hilarious, but also a bit scary. I had no clue how Ben will react to Bmad.

I always crack up when Ronnie and Amanda pull the 'complete make-over' trick on Aaron, I wish you had written that part in more detail, just to enjoy the sarcastic and uncomfortable internal ramblings.

Interesting that Bmad is already Ben now in Aaron's mind, but Dave stays Cosmo. And I just loved the reverse pick-up at the end.