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Timothy M.

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  1. Timothy M.

    Chapter 6

    Stupid Harry, I'm really with him. Even if he did this at pride parades when he was single, he can't do that now. Or at least not without discussing it with his boyfriend first. But I'm glad his uncles are there for Ralph.
  2. Promises, promises. I've been wondering about those twins for ages.
  3. Timothy M.

    Chapter 5

    Interesting how Ralph's mom is suddenly all happy about her gay brother-in-law. Maybe the fact he's a lawyer and will help fight for custody is a huge plus in his favor. But hopefully her improved attitude will help Ralph and Harry too. You hinted in this or the previous chapter that Neil only came home because his best friend died, but Ralph didn't seem particularly surprised to see Neil in the first chapter.
  4. Timothy M.

    Chapter 4

    It would be easier if Neil could stay near his family, and how would he be able to afford living on his own and paying for childcare ? I'm still trying to work out how old the brothers are. I was guessing 25 and 15, but then why hasn't Neil gone to college yet ? Did he go into the military ?
  5. Timothy M.

    Chapter 3

    I'm glad this chapter ended with a laugh over uncle Chris' clever comment. How old is Ralph ? You can now edit your Y reply to K.C., if you want.
  6. Timothy M.

    Chapter 2

    I'm still a little confused about whether Maryann the mother was pregnant when she died. But I assume so, since why else name the baby after her and Frank. Awful idea IMO, I feel sorry for the poor girl. Fancy knowing people think of your dead mother every time they say your name. But otherwise Neil seems to be doing OK in his new role as father.
  7. Timothy M.

    Chapter 1

    A sad start, but I guess we now know how Neil becomes a father. And Ralph can be a substitute big brother as well as uncle.
  8. Hi Albert, I'm fine, enjoying my Friday and nice spring weather. How are you ?
  9. you just ruined @Page Scrawler's excuse for not finishing and posting the story.
  10. “This is Cupid Central?” Diego looked at the gleaming white toilet with the grab rails on its left and right. “Don’t be stupid. This is the handicapped stall in the bathroom of the bar across from CC. We can’t simply plop in there as we do with Guardian Central. Only Cupids can do that.” “Oh.” “Yes, ‘oh’. Really, bro? Picture what would happen if one of their flighty boys or girls just dropped into GC’s breakroom.” “You’re right. I wasn’t thinking. It would cause mayhem.” The
  11. And of course you immediately prove me wrong. Shouldn't you be cuddled up with Morgan right now ?
  12. Well, no wonder the poor girl is confused. She's holding a banner staying San Francisco State University. So maybe she thinks it's a city state like the Vatican ?
  13. We'll find out when the next chapter posts today. Maybe you won't dislike Ayil, but @aditus and I are wondering what readers will think of him. He's still a stickler for 'proper protocol'
  14. Good morning, I think you'll find most people here have gone to bed. Our Australian tea bat aka @Bucket1 may be around. Oh and there's no such thing as off topic here - well, except politics.
  15. Well, that's a big vote of confidence. Have you read Cupid Central by @aditus ? Otherwise, I can recommend it together with all his other stories. They'll keep you occupied while waiting for more Cardmaker chapters (thanks for all the likes and comments btw). Ariel may be bad, but just wait till you meet Ayil, the head of Cupid Central. Diego absolutely needs some hugs and TLC.
  16. Thanks, AC. I'm not sure what statues are at the Met, just that there are some. I'm not sure why I imagined them all stern and Greek with cloaks and chiseled features. Not all of them die, but they're definitely traumatized. It's not surprising Diego is feeling depressed.
  17. Hey Thorn, a bit busy today and more so tomorrow. We're having a warm February, see above. I'm still trying to work out what the 'a bit further down' comment means.
  18. Hey Gary, thanks for all the likes. I just popped in here to upload the next DDD chapter for tomorrow. Adi and I look forward to seeing what our readers think. Hey Albert, are you still getting snow ? We're having spring-like temperatures and some trees are flowering.
  19. Timothy M.

    Chapter 18.4

    I guess Kitty won't underestimate Fran again, but believe her from now on. Trissy, lol.
  20. Great critique @Parker Owens I'm not surprised Carlos was pleased with it. It made me want to ready the story again. Now, where did I put that box of tissues...?
  21. Not as interesting as page 555.
  22. I'm glad you liked it, I had fun writing the A.I. trilogy.
  23. You're welcome, I hope I'll be able to share more at some point. You'll have to make do with the other stories in the series while you wait.
  24. You're absolutely right. I'm so glad you caught on to this, because Peter arriving in Patrick's life opened the floodgates to more people who in some cases have been waiting at the side lines, while Patrick ignored the possibilities.
  25. This was a very crucial chapter in many ways, so I'm always happy and grateful when readers approve of it. How wonderful it evoked good memories, too.
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