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I can so picture Issac and Zander shopping and Zu and Bay sitting on the bench with the other husbands! Another chapter that had me giggling enough for hubby to want me reading aloud!

Depth can be so over rated! Its your break for goodness sake! Chris time. Relax and leave the depth for your next paper due.

Think I posted this before but its a frequent flyer on my play list. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2VZy7TPzZLk

Just as long as you author types keep on typing it will be Myiege.

Ummmm...... Take notes as fast as you can, then go back and elaborate when s/he finally winds down and rests?

Wooo hooo! Seems Officer Mallory Smith isn't quite as cold and nasty as she wants people to think! That she noticed the underlying tension between Jason and Travis doesn't surprise me. She is after all a trained investigator and SHOULD be observant. To have let on that she knew tho is bound to add to that tension. Why can I see her giggling behind her hand when the guys are not looking? I agree with Daithi, the evidence is piling up on the son too fast and too neatly, as tho someone WANTS him convicted besides the prosecution's team. I love how quickly you post chapters, but if you don't mind a suggestion? You may want to hook up with an editor/beta reader. There are a few spots where it seemed like your fingers could not keep up with your brain. In one spot it looks like half of two different sentences got lost and the front of one was then married to the back of the other. Great story line and quick postings make a winning combination mister! Thank you.

NOPE, not gonna say it, gonna be a good girl. Oh hell yes I am. I can totally see Zu sitting at the computer confusing the hell out of himself before he found anything even remotely helpful! Read this one out loud to hubby and had him rolling at times. Well done!

Since I am not a writer anyway perhaps I am better off without a muse. The seem like flightly things to me. Temperamental even.

As for grammar, I think you're generally pretty safe in the blogs from sniper attacks LOL the same cannot be said if you decide to start posting stories. The grammar police are out there. I have even heard them referred to as grammar nazi's!

oh my no! I can see people being equated with a chicken!

Well tell us what this gender non-specific personal pronoun is! Perhaps we could start a trend, since we have people chatting here worldwide!

Pretty screwed up shit that the twink gets away with spiking Robbie's drink, but I suppose things like that happen at parties all the time in the Hollywood set. Robbie and Will look like they are getting their acts straight in regards to each other. Nice twist - Will realizing how Trevor and his friend could be hurt if their little tryst is found out. He keeps growing up in leaps and bounds. He keeps this mature behavior up too long and a good portion of your readers will freak on you next time Will acts like a 15 yr old! A very pleasant surprise finding a new chapter so soon. Thank you.

Now Now, there are much worse things we could be addicted to!

Oh my. Now I have pictures in my head of Zu surfing the net and trying to figure out just how he is going to learn to give head. Loving the roll reversal and confusion Zu has to work thru.

So - it sounds like Corey was adopted. Where are/what happened to his biological parents? Was it a single parent adoption? Was there some sort of spouse around 10 yrs ago that no longer is?? Lol I love a story that keeps me coming back for more and asking questions, provided of course the answers are forthcoming eventually! And I agree with the gentleman above - Corey is a totally believable 12 yr old.

I think Rustle is right. The Adam's apple can be deceiving, but a woman's hips are hinged differently from men's. This one looks decidedly feminine to me. Too bad it isn't a video - the walk would give it away conclusively.

I love the interaction between Travis and Smith. Sort of forces Jason to be more objective and actually listen to Travis rather than dismiss him as the rookie with the hots for him. My last question still stands - Does Jason know he is gay/bi or is he just figuring it out? I would love to hear the back story of how this man now in an untenable situation with a hot coworker came to have such an intelligent, mature, smart ass'd son! Short chapters are ok with me - as long as they keep coming this quickly! I love getting my fixes on an almost daily basis!

Woo Hoo - so - does daddy know he is gay/bi or is he just finding this out? Sounds like junior has a better grip on this one than daddy does! Keep writing - keep writing - faster - faster

I am loving the "confused Zu". Can't wait to see what he says and does when he realizes he wants a second date! And points to Bay for not busting him about the confusion - yet.

Ok - now that you have mastered the hook and gotten us all looking for your entries you are going to have to put up with us pestering you with comments reviews and pleas to write faster. Great start and promises to keep us reading just as fast as your last story - if not faster. Looking forward to it.

I don't need to like her politics or aprove of her opinions to like Paula Dean's recipes. The biggest act of idiocy i ever say was a woman who tossed away a hand written cookbook left by her great grandmother that contained all sorts of old family recipes that are lost now. Her reasoning? Apparently great gram and gramps owned slaves and she felt using the cookbook would have been endorsing slavery.

I am not saying - or implying - that a specific law was not needed or would not be advantageous, simply that it's not impossible to deal with the situation just because legislation does not yet exist.

There is only one loose end you didn't tie in a nice neat bow. I am hoping you are saving that for a sequel. That's Jon's mom and her manipulative controlling issues. I have a mom-in-law very much like her. I can sooo see her raising a fuss when they tell her about the impending marriage and again when the boys decide to have children of their own. It's pretty easy to see where Jon came by all his insecurities. A wonderful story from start to finish. I too am a sucker for happily ever after and this one gave us three!