Kitt

I'm thinking Zane has some knowledge of, if not a hand in, Jesse's stint MIA. Not sure why execpt that I took an instant dislike to the brash bully. And have you been taking cliffhanger lessons??? You are handling the coming of age nicely, with an interesting twist. Hard enough for Travis to grow into the man he is going to become, but it seems Riley has to manage the same thing with only his programming to guide him. Lets hope the code jockey that wrote it covered all the bases and that repair program can manage to fill in the holes. I get the feeling one of those holes is going to make the difference in this plot. Nicely written. You convey the panic Travis feels at his brothers disappearance well. Please don't make us wait forever to find out where Jesse was off to.

I am getting the feeling it isn't either of the things Daithi is seeing. I think its Zu has not quite come to terms that he went from straight to straight-ish to not so straight at all in a very short span. Takes a bit of getting used to. As usual you leave us drooling for more. Looks like the words weren't as difficult as they seemed! Lovely.

Will really be nice when things don't turn awkward after something like that.

I love it when Will turns out to be handling something more maturely than his dad. I'm getting the feeling the hustling IS a part of Kai's life, but not by choice. Perhaps Will is about to join the ranks of the people in the family who go just a tad out of their way to help someone? A big step in his maturity development. As always a wonderfully written chapter that has me waiting (im)patiently for more.

Daithi is right - you hadn't mentioned the probability of the tree impaling and killing Issac but the account was Issac's memories of the day. It isn't uncommon that a gruesome possibility like that is blocked out by the subconscious mind. Many people recall little to none of a horrendous accident for days and sometimes even months after. I keep waiting for Zu to have at least a minor freak out. All of this is so new to him I cant help but think sooner or later it sort of has to cause some sort of issue between him and Zander. FANTASTIC babe. Can't wait to see what your devious little mind comes up with for the first time Zander wanders into "virgin territory".

The advantage to short chapters is they come quickly. Love the way Zu swings from confident to shy at the swish of a tail. Can't wait to see what happens when Zander puts 2 and 2 together and realized that giving a good BJ isnt Zu's only first tonight. Well done my dear!

And just like with many of the issues Daithi sighted, the reverse discrimination is beginning to show. Blacks spent years in putting down whites, and after so many years of seeing homophobia as I was growing up I am now seeing hetero-phobia. Why must the human psyche go to both extremes before things finally settle into a semblance of reasonable? Just as the color of someone's skin should not make a difference- neither should ANYONE's choice of a bed partner.

LOL!! Hubby just said the same thing!

I may be a day late but since your day fell on the weekend perhaps you are still celebrating? Hope yesterday was fantastic and today even better!

Is that like the horse who thinks his name is "Whoa asshole" ?

Oh lord! Here it comes! Something is gonna blow and I am not alltogether sure it will be in a sexual manner! Dang it - stop making me chew my nails between chapters!

I can so picture Issac and Zander shopping and Zu and Bay sitting on the bench with the other husbands! Another chapter that had me giggling enough for hubby to want me reading aloud!

Depth can be so over rated! Its your break for goodness sake! Chris time. Relax and leave the depth for your next paper due.

Think I posted this before but its a frequent flyer on my play list. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2VZy7TPzZLk

Just as long as you author types keep on typing it will be Myiege.

Ummmm...... Take notes as fast as you can, then go back and elaborate when s/he finally winds down and rests?

Wooo hooo! Seems Officer Mallory Smith isn't quite as cold and nasty as she wants people to think! That she noticed the underlying tension between Jason and Travis doesn't surprise me. She is after all a trained investigator and SHOULD be observant. To have let on that she knew tho is bound to add to that tension. Why can I see her giggling behind her hand when the guys are not looking? I agree with Daithi, the evidence is piling up on the son too fast and too neatly, as tho someone WANTS him convicted besides the prosecution's team. I love how quickly you post chapters, but if you don't mind a suggestion? You may want to hook up with an editor/beta reader. There are a few spots where it seemed like your fingers could not keep up with your brain. In one spot it looks like half of two different sentences got lost and the front of one was then married to the back of the other. Great story line and quick postings make a winning combination mister! Thank you.

NOPE, not gonna say it, gonna be a good girl. Oh hell yes I am. I can totally see Zu sitting at the computer confusing the hell out of himself before he found anything even remotely helpful! Read this one out loud to hubby and had him rolling at times. Well done!

Since I am not a writer anyway perhaps I am better off without a muse. The seem like flightly things to me. Temperamental even.

As for grammar, I think you're generally pretty safe in the blogs from sniper attacks LOL the same cannot be said if you decide to start posting stories. The grammar police are out there. I have even heard them referred to as grammar nazi's!

oh my no! I can see people being equated with a chicken!

Well tell us what this gender non-specific personal pronoun is! Perhaps we could start a trend, since we have people chatting here worldwide!

Pretty screwed up shit that the twink gets away with spiking Robbie's drink, but I suppose things like that happen at parties all the time in the Hollywood set. Robbie and Will look like they are getting their acts straight in regards to each other. Nice twist - Will realizing how Trevor and his friend could be hurt if their little tryst is found out. He keeps growing up in leaps and bounds. He keeps this mature behavior up too long and a good portion of your readers will freak on you next time Will acts like a 15 yr old! A very pleasant surprise finding a new chapter so soon. Thank you.

Now Now, there are much worse things we could be addicted to!