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Oh my! If Travis doesn't completely freak with this one I'm a monkey's uncle! Poor kid is still trying to come to terms with having fallen in love with a bot that his parents had built for expressly that purpose, his parents disappearance, his brothers abduction, the idea that some "friend" may be behind it, the potential of that collar now around his brothers neck, and now his boyfriend bot is pregnant? You do like to turn your characters minds inside out don't you! You got a lot of explaining to do - like why would his parents have wanted this sort of timing? Pregnant on the first encounter seems so....cliche? Not to mention the mechanics of a bot carrying to term, and who's egg did Travis fertilize, and, and, and.... Seriously, I am enjoying the story immensely. Don't leave us trying to pace in that air duct too long!

I'll be darned to see where it isn't perfect! You even got his shadow! The only hint I see of the pictures previous occupant is a vaguely head shaped dent in the cloud, and unless you knew a man previously stood there you would never notice that.

Unless you are making the good comments along the way - "i love that line" or " good job describing that" etc, its important to put your positive comments somewhere and a review is the best place for them! Only hearing about problems or what your editor doesn't like would be a real downer.

skip the rest - just add the bacon and call it breakfast

And just where do you keep finding these things Cele?

Please? For your Ma? I'll edit if you like.

I love that Bay took the initiative and physically "escorted" the camp twerps out. And I'm another vote for Zu and wine not having a taste - at least not a taste I enjoy. A nice Belgian wheat ale ,,, much better! Another winner love!

Allergy relieve eye drops dear. They help!

Perhaps you should be a tad more interested. Thank God the ex boyfriend from hell I had to deal with pre-stalker laws didn't have these sorts of apps available. It was hard enough to get rid of the ass!

The real shame of it is that stereotypes are pretty much ALL invalid. A person's sexual orientation should be about as important to how well they can play football or any other sport as the color of their skin is. Like James i grew up in the 70's when attitudes had not come out of the dark ages yet. I can easily see where he was more or less forced into being a "right bastard" as he put it. I grew up one of three girls on a block of about 20 boys. I played ball with the guys daily and got good at it. I constantly got asked by people from further afield "are you sure you are not a dyke - you act like one". Guess what i am trying to say is the best reaction to the idiots that make your sexuality an issue is no reaction at all. Live your life the way you want, don't let a bunch of bigots drive you off and to hell with anyone tells you that you don't belong somewhere!

And just what is a provisional marriage? Is this a trial period? You make it to your 5th anniversary and it becomes a permanent marriage?

Maybe its a product of a northern metropolitan area, but for a long time race seemed to stop being an issue at all. But then, gay couples haven't really raised too much issue either. Or perhaps that is more a perception of mine. I grew up in the 60's and 70's where race was a real issue in the schools around here. "Black" and "White" hallways that most would go 3/4 of the way around the school to avoid going down the "wrong hall". But race seems to come back as an issue every so often, most notably when there are issues like the Rodney King or the George Zimmerman trial. I think that all references to race should be forbidden during a trial like these and the jurors be blindfolded. The bottom line should have been if a neighborhood watch member shot a suspected trouble maker and why, not the color of the skin on either side of the issue. I see the ACLU making a big fuss in a situation like this. Black people and Hispanics mostly it seems. Has the ACLU ever stood up for other races? Native Americans, White and Asians have civil rights too ya know!

lol cause rabbit food is the only way to stay within the alotted calories for a borderline diabetic.

Bad yes - but aren't the best tastes always bad for you ? I am sooooooooooooo tired of rabbit food!

Water - isn't that the stuff they mix with the wheat before brewing the ale? and ferment the corn mash in before distilling the Jack?

Wooo hooo do i need a new dress to watch the cam cast?

lol Its way easier than that - you tag the nook to the computer thru a usb port and save it there like an external drive. You can bet i will be doing that before our next long drive! And i am now half way through my first Dom Luka story. Everyone has been right so far. I wouldn't call him my favorite but he ranks in the top 5 - right behind Mark and Tucker, and Mann. Now - all I need is more time to read and my new glasses!

all i can say is

Wooo Hooo! I love the way Zander breaks up a fight! I expected a little more hurt feelings on Zol's side but I can so totally see them rolling on the kitchen floor! Excellent.

Poor Daithi, you aren't giving her enough string to make a tangled mess! Now this is a much better set of people! Can't wait till Zol finally corners and makes Zu spill. Having his twin not share has to be eating at Zol! Lovely my dear - simply lovely

Ummm - does that "cake" get served with the number of the local taxi service on the side?

Again- I need more likes per day! Thanks Treb. I like to read in the car on long trips since my hubby's idea of conversation sounds like a conversation with Tim Allen at times. With the Nook that's great if i can tag a wifi when I need to load another chapter. Can't wait to try loading the story the way you suggested. Hope it works with the nook too!

Actually I was impressed with how well Zu managed to control himself and keep the violence down to a minimum. I think I would have totally lost it, even if I was just a bystander in the club! People, in addition to being horribly bigoted about some of the stupidest things, can be incredibly stupid on top of it all. Given a choice I am quite sure Zu, and any one else in the world, would prefer not to be in a chair faced with the immense challenges they are every single day just to live their lives and get around. Life isn't always fair, the least we can do as human beings is to try to be. Too bad so many don't even make the attempt! Zander I think is in for some interesting conversations in the next little bit of his life. With his so called friends and acquaintances at the club, with Bay and Issac, and most importantly with Zu! Can't wait to see the results!

LOL Me too!

Oh I listened, just couldn't find it buried in the depths somewhere. Let's keep it going and up in the front of the forums!