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  1. I'm still waiting for the fallout when he finds out he's going to be a Dad!
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    Chapter 27

    I still feel 'abort' is warranted as it is only used once in the chapter. The other report only said they couldn't save the baby. The antichrist's vanity would make him believe he was the cause of the miscarriage even if that's strictly not the case, as you have pointed out. However, Mike, as author, can use whatever language he feels best! 😀
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    Chapter 27

    I think it was the antichrist who used that term...and was deliberately used to cause Rudi the most pain. The inference would seem to be that he had brought it about by will and it was not just an unfortunate event. But I could be the one that is wrong, Drpaladin. I'm still hoping Henry can save the day but maybe not. Tragedies do happen.
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    Chapter 25

    Don't like the sound of the bulky man with shades! I'm now peeking through my fingers....
  5. As Paula Abdul would sing....Opposites attract!
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    Chapter 4

    'Call me Newton.'. Absolute class! Great writing, thank you!
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    Chapter 45

    Hi, Just finished this for a second time having followed Ian's Heart as well. Looking forward to reading more chapters if you are able to write more. Great writing and characters.
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    Chapter 10

    Just as well Terry and Davy are aware of the truth. I hope the Eastern Europeans aren't Rothenian!
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    Chapter 11

    Ohhh dear! The proverbial 💩 has hit the fan now.
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    Chapter 19

    Yay! Go Damien!
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    Chapter 17

    Brilliant chapter especially the last two paragraphs! Damian is going to be James' undoing when Justy realises what's in the bag... Hope Damian doesn't take any first. Thanks Mike.
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    Chapter 8

    What's the chances the wee boy is Damian?? Great story, funny and well written. Thanks Mike.
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    Chapter 29

    I think he got on well enough with his parents. It was his siblings that he didn't get on with.
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    Chapter 29

    Brilliant story but just one thing.... How did Henry explain Gavin's disappearance to his family?
  15. Yes.... But I would rather hope that Heathcliff would step in and insist that he only work with the company if Aiden was working with him. Obviously the thought of Heath terminating his contract might refocus the boss' priorities. Money talks! And obviously the boss gets the ungentle slap on the head for the most homophobic unhomophobic speech of the day.
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    Chapter 9

    Is Sam a Guardian but not aware of it? If so, what's his super power? This is getting interesting. Desmond will have to confront his hatred. Next chapter?
  17. The only positive thing to come out of this chapter was Nate legally becoming part of the Beaumont family and the irony of being financially set up by the worst parent on the planet. Eagerly waiting the next chapter.
  18. What are you doing to us? You twist the knife with such beautiful sorrow. You are cruel but brilliant.... Still hoping for the HEA you promised.
  19. I love this story. The best in here. Well written, intelligent.... Brilliant chapter...... Waiting (im) patiently for the next one! Thanks!
  20. I think, though probably wrong......Alex is hoping that he can convince Aron that Carter came on to him, hoping that Aron would end his friendship with Carter. I don't think Aron would believe him but Alex is convincing. Great story.
  21. Brilliant chapter. I think I'm glad there wasn't an immediate resolution but wait (not very patiently) to see where it takes us. Is Carter autistic to a degree? I think the childhood memories were quite enlightening and would explain Carter's reaction to his best friend marrying someone else. Thanks for the great story!
  22. This is a great story..... So often you can see what's going to happen but I've really no idea how you're going to resolve this one. It is indeed a tangled web. Poor Aron, he's not over Carter at all.... He's more in love with him than ever! What are you doing to us, @Laura S. Fox ?
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    Chapter 11

    Thank you @aditus I'm sorry you were ill but am glad you are better. You certainly returned with a bang! Brilliant chapter, and a cliffhanger! Hopefully Diarmid is ok and he grovels to Noel to come back. Thanks again for a great story.
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    Breadcrumbs

    Too true, and I'm a Scot! @Fantasyboy69, I assume there's some overlap here with Drums of War. I got confused at one point. Not difficult for me!
  25. I've just been reading the Nemesis series, so this is well timed. Thank you
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