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  1. Buz

    Chapter 2

    The grandpas have only just walked in the door and I love them. I want to know who that was at the audition that TJ's Mum knew? I have to comment about the editing. I could understand if it impacted on my ability to understand/read the story or if it interrupted the flow of the story. Believe me, I have stopped reading some stories because it is annoying to have to interpret and read it at the same time. Sometimes the story was stilted, etc. But this is not the case here. Granted, I am not great when it comes to stuff like commas, etc but I really enjoy this story and look forward to reading more. Isn't that what its all about? Well, that was my 5 cents worth. New Zealand doesn't have two cent coins
  2. Buz

    Chapter 1

    This is going to be repetitive, but good story and I can't wait for the next chapter. Except I don't have to wait and have a few books to catch up on, so yay for me!
  3. Buz

    Chapter 13

    I thought it was abit suss about the lack of walnuts their last hunt. Everything seems to be moving along swimmingly. Will be good to see what Cody will be doing job wise?
  4. Buz

    Chapter 12

    I was too young to remember anything specific about the relationship I had with 'Peter'. Just that we seemed close. I have one glimpse of a memory of us playing in a paddock. The sun was shining, I was looking up at him and just feeling really happy. It was a 'content' kind of happy. What I do remember was being devastated when I found out he was my Uncle and not my older Brother. I don't know why I was so sad, why I remember this intense feeling of loss. I must have found out the same time that he left the Homestead to move to the City?!?! I really can't remember. He was my Pop's younger Brother. Young enough to be my older Brother. Anyway, Andy's idolisation has stepped up a notch.
  5. Buz

    Chapter 11

    I want cake now. Like, REALLY want cake. Cake with a milky hot Milo. MMMmmm... Can't wait for Andy's Birthday. Very lucky lad indeed.
  6. At the least, I think a strung out (is that the correct term?) meth head may have been driving that other car? At worst, maybe Stefan just made his first move? Alpha Shifter / Mate relationships are always so VERY intense. I love it. I want it. Like their dinner date, that would be way perfect! WAY perfect! Thanks Aaron. Can't believe you're a nube. Doing exceedingly well me thinks. Can't wait for the next chapter!
  7. Buz

    A Family Visit

    I feel really sorry for his Siblings and Mother. I hope Hamarra gets Searched and H'rek reconciles with his poor Mum. Mawgrim, may I ask, have we been told what was said between his Mother and Non-Father? I don't remember. If so, what chapter is it in? If not, will we be?
  8. Buz

    Chapter 10

    Ohhhhh...okay. Oh. Long snuggly winters locked in the house with Cody. OMG. The Clarion flowing through a winter wonderland. His floor to ceiling will look like a perfect picture. So jealous. That would be heaven...
  9. Buz

    Chapter 10

    Some of the stuff Alan has had to have ordered in so maybe he thought he'd do everything in big lots so that he has to 'order' things in less often, won't have to wait for deliveries, etc? I have wondered that myself a bit. Also, he is not thinking of buying Andy and Jeff vehicles, is he?
  10. Buz

    Chapter 9

    All that food and there is only the two of them. How long does meat keep in a freezer? Love the sound of the market. Is also awesome they are getting to know people in their community as well as they are.
  11. Buz

    Chapter 1

    I like the storyline very much. Hong Shen is in for the shock/ride of his life/death. Will be very interesting...
  12. Buz

    Chapter 7

    LOL! Ya know, I've never used a hookah for that. I've also never used a hooker for that either!
  13. Buz

    Chapter 7

    I am sure it was a simple mistake and that you meant hookah. If not, remember. We have already agreed that a Head Shop is not that. I've never heard it called smoking before, but I suppose the mechanics are similar
  14. Buz

    Chapter 8

    Who doesn't love soup and toasties! I love markets of any kind. Especially ones I've never been to before cause you never know what you're gonna find.
  15. Buz

    Chapter 7

    I am sure you can tell from my comments that I am a paragon of innocence and virtue. That I thought a Head Shop was a barber/hairstylist or facial skin care specialist. Okay, so the first line may be a smallish slight stretch with a drop of wishful thinking (or delusion), but I actually did think that that was what it was you know. Okay, so for a nano-second I initially thought of the obvious. But as quickly as that thought came, it was dismissed with a, "Nah. They wouldn't/couldn't have an actual shop for that?!?!"
  16. Buz

    Second Time Around

    Okay. I'll admit it. I'm abit slow. It wasn't until Herebeth said what his name was that I clicked. I did read about it being a prequel, but I didn't know how far 'ahead' it was. Plus I didn't realise Rider's shorten their names once they've impressed. Duh! "Clueless City this way folks. Please check around you to ensure you've got everything. Wallets, phones, bags, etc. Once this train leaves the station, any lost property queries will have to be made via our Head Office. Mind the step and Thank You for travelling with InterCity Rail..."
  17. Buz

    Loranth's Hatching

    I am not sure how I feel about Detgar projecting his feelings towards the Hatchlings that way. I am assuming it wouldn't make a difference because if a dragon was supposed to be 'impressed' by/with a Rider, that is it? Full stop?
  18. Buz

    Chapter 7

    I had to look up both Montgomery Wards and to find out what a Head Shop was. There is no way I could have guessed what a Head Shop was. Wasn't even close.
  19. Buz

    Chapter 6

    "He doesn't half muck around eh?" They have moved quite quickly as a couple Unless you meant my comment about the fishing? People asked about it and the last sentence was, '...Cody and Jeff, ‘definitely fishing tomorrow'.
  20. Buz

    Chapter 6

    'e don't 'alf muck around innit!?!? Also, are they not fishing tomorrow or am I missing something?
  21. Buz

    Chapter 5

    I'd be travelling with a huge ass grin on my face too if I was travelling towards my stunning forever home that I was going to be sharing with my equally stunning partner. Cheers to that!
  22. Buz

    Chapter 4

    I loved that his heart poked its tongue out at his brain. It is when your dick pokes its tongue out at your brain that you know you're in trouble. Cody sounds awesome for Alan. He knows what he wants and 'ain't backwards about coming forwards eh...
  23. Buz

    Concerns

    I can see where R'feem is coming from, but I don't think he truly believes F'drun is a threat of any kind. Hope that attitude don't bite any of them in the behind. Rather than tell D'gar after the fact that he agreed with him, B'lin should have said so in their meeting. On a personal level, I used to hate when people did that stuff when we had staff meetings. Say shite after the meeting is over coming across all passionate and opinionated, but sit there all meek and mild during the actual meeting. Pssshhh...
  24. Buz

    Chapter 2

    Ditto with the black pudding. Just the idea of it is enough to put me off. I did try it once a long time ago. Honestly can't remember the taste, but I've never had it again so that must mean something. Also, he is now in Scotland. I'm sorry, but haggis is horrendous. I can't even stand the smell of it cooking. But they do make up for it with shortbread. The biscuit we always had in the house when I was young. Tartan Shortbread biscuits. They don't make them anymore, sadly.
  25. Buz

    Chapter 1

    The site sounds stunning, if my imagination is anything to go by. I hope he does ceiling to floor for views of the river and surrounds.
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