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  1. Carlos Hazday
    Not sure what you're talking about. Oh, wait, you're picking on me! Yep, you're Liebe. PS I haven't seen your name pop up either. You sure you wrote something? Maybe it was too wordy and it's being simplified as we speak?
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    I'm ready for batch #2. One more sleep and @Mrsgnomie will stop whining, nagging, and lying about her patience.
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    Pat yourselves on the back, Myr+. You created something that has impacted many lives, including mine. I wish you continued success.
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    I'm telling the whole world you were responsible for her mishap. I can't believe you brag about that. But then again, you know how she turns out. People are gonna wonder what the fuck we're talking about!
  5. Carlos Hazday
    I should have something to share next month. Another dinner party! LOL Pssst... Pam and Geoff will be 2 of the guests. Keep that quiet.
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    Dinner Party

    Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Dinner Party

    Yeah... there's that. But you know how I love my eggs. LOL
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    I've been going to the Florida Keys since I was a kid; one of my first drives after getting my license at 16 was in my dads business van with a few friends and a cooler of beer in the back. I tried to capture Key West's quirky characters and atmosphere. Thanks for reading, Liebe. (That chapter where she emulates your bully handling's coming up next month.) LMAO
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    Thank you! I've preached about newer authors using prompts as a way of practicing and experimenting, and this is a perfect example. Not sure if you noticed, but I never named or identified the narrator's sex/gender. My goal was for readers to decide if it was a man or a woman. Being vague at times is a useful tool; I may have used it again in subsequent stories.
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    Hopefully, you'll be inclined to do it again in the future.
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    Dinner Party

    Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Dinner Party

    LOL I had to wind my way to the big reveal, and that innocent comment led the way. Not sure why, but you're not the only person who's missed details I was proud of recently. I think I've been posting too much, too frequently. I'm in the process of adjusting that.
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    Epilogue

    Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Epilogue

    Thank you, Jeff. This was one of my earliest efforts and compared to later works it's rough. But you're absolutely right; even back then I was fascinated with setting fictional stories in the real world and incorporating real-life events. I think between Solcar and Children of the Dust, I established myself as a historical fiction writer. So what if some of the history is only a couple of years in the past. LOL Glad you enjoyed this one.
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    Arrival

    Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Arrival

    I'm hoping CJ can control himself when she opens her mouth. LOL
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    Arrival

    Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Arrival

    We haven't seen her in a long time, so who knows how she's doing. You think all those video calls calmed her about Mexico?
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    Arrival

    Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Arrival

    Was thinking about you earlier today. I was plotting Pam Liston's next appearance and wondering how upset you'd get with me CJ.
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    On the Grass

    Carlos Hazday commented on AC Benus's story chapter in On the Grass

    My second reading this morning was even more enjoyable. Great work, AC. My mind conjured up a sappy epilogue set in Texas. ☺
  16. Carlos Hazday
    Thanks, bud. I treasure your continued support.
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    Too political? LMAO You're obviously not familiar with my writing. I may have included a touch of political atmosphere in my submission.
  18. Carlos Hazday
    I disagree anthology should be light and airy. There's plenty of room for hard tales too. And yours is a wonderful distillation of the precarious times we live in. I recently wrote a dialogue line where someone claims the fight is not over and vigilance is a must. You make a strong argument for that view. Great job, Bill.
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    On the Grass

    Carlos Hazday commented on AC Benus's story chapter in On the Grass

    Wish I could give this one more than one heart. As usual, your use of language is impeccable and your pacing was spot on. I always enjoy your historical tales, and needless to say, Kim talking about St Louis... when did Famous Barr first open its doors? Great job, AC. Truly enjoyed this one.
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    Anyone reading this should know Wolf's deployed to a fire. He texted the poem to his husband who posted it. I messaged the hubby when I heard of the Queen's since I knew how Wolf felt about her. I mean, they did fly over for the Jubelee 😁.
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    Promises to Keep

    Carlos Hazday commented on W_L's story chapter in Promises to Keep

    LMAO I add details like that all the time. As much as I push simplicity, small asides often make a story richer.
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    Promises to Keep

    Carlos Hazday commented on W_L's story chapter in Promises to Keep

    More than I usually do, I want to hug a tree. Progress, as measured by human, often leads to losses most people don't recognize. In this case the pond and the hare were both lost in pursuit of profits.
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    The Perfect Car

    Carlos Hazday commented on Mancunian's story chapter in The Perfect Car

    So damn touching. Really enjoyed it. Inanimate objects can help recall and cherish special times, and cars do it often. Our first drive, an escape vehicle when stressed, and at times a private spot for smooching or simply thinking.
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    Thanks in large part to your efforts. Great job, Val!
  25. Carlos Hazday
    Is that the GA membership clamoring for the Anniversary Anthology release? I think @Mrsgnomie is out front leading the charge.
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