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The preamble to the Constitution, while a goal to constantly work for, still in the minds of many do not apply to all - we still as a society place some people as "others" who don't have the same rights as "we" do. And this Us versus Them attitude is promoted by so many of a particular political party in the United States who believe in "law and order" as they see fit to apply it. It would seem to me that the pilgrims and those who followed to the New World didn't follow the "laws" of the land they took over and displaced the residents who were already there. As for the child and sex slave trafficking: would that the same passion to rid our country of "illegals" be applied to the lowlife scum who perpetrate this abominable criminal activity!

You certainly have captured my feelings about what's happening politically currently. I refuse to lose hope, but that gray mist is certainly descending.

Nolan's advice to Ralph is very cogent: he has to go through his problem in order to go beyond it! I'll bet that Gordon is much more forgiving than Ralph expects, because they both ended up in a better place because of their own histories.

A simple Wow! This background certainly helps us understand more of these characters. Well written - I could picture everything via the very descriptive language! I have a hard time believing this happening in boot camp, but then again, having never attended one, what would I know?

I doubt that Jackie will ever feel that she did anything wrong but deserved the money and travel, etc. A confrontation with Ludo will still be an attempt on her part to blame him for an mishap that has occurred in her arrest. Will a positive story in the news about Ludo influence those who want to believe he was a weak husband who allowed his wife to get away with such a crime? Will the public be more sympathetic with his position? We'll see. I do agree: counseling for all to clear their minds and help them move into the future without so much baggage from the past! Brilliant writing continues! How long till next installment?

Add to that disgusted, sad, hopeful, and nauseous...and still loved it too!

What is the connection of Donald Cassel wearing Eddie's watch? Have I missed something there? The story is coming to a very intense moment: who's watching Riz? Is it an FBI undercover or one of the mob? Will he try to kill or hurt Roger from his current vantage point? It would seem that a small dent has been made in the child slave trade, but there are 2 more children saved. Powerful writing!

So much to digest in this chapter - budding love, potential mob solution to Riz, discovery of the young boy, an introduction to Det. Ramos' mother, and the growing confidence and respect of Juan Ramos. I wanted to hit love, anger, but decided on WOW! Great chapter!

At my age, I am not certain I could foster a child who has been tossed aside because of sexual orientation. However, I do what I can to support the community. To me, nothing is more important that making another feel wanted, loved, accepted for who they are. I tried to provide this in all my years as a school counselor and did accomplish this to the best of my ability. Now, the people in charge of government regulations would prohibit me from advertising my office as a safe space, from discussing the sensitive topics of sexuality, and from even referring to a teen by their chosen names! I'm so glad I retired when I did! Samantha's article should appear in its message in every news outlet on a regular basis.

I'm really appreciating the growing relationship between Ralph and Nolan! It is so natural and supported by the twins and his work mates. The twins are delightful, if not naturally curious and, at times, a bit over the top, lol! Ralph's attentiveness to their needs and care is wonderful! And Nolan fits right in without any jealousy! It is nice to just slow down and enjoy a weekend before stuff hits the fan once again!

Why is Cottontail's brother so intrigued about Jamie that he is using his brother? Cottontail is slowly getting more courageous in standing up for himself...

Dear Dr: please don't hold back your assessment of this individual, lol!

I feel as though I am reading a Clancy-like structure - several stories going on at the same time that will come together at the end in a connected manner. Well done, indeed!

Is it just Andreas and Jackie who are involved in this "project", or are there others playing parts? Jackie was definitely a user when it comes to Ludo and Damian: they were just there to provide her with an image. Evil in the form of greed, selfishness, and amorality define Jackie!

Bipolar disease does happen in children but usually isn't recognized until into adolescence or later. As a counselor, I have dealt with students and referred them for professional assistance, knowing that at best, it might be tempered but not cured. My best friend was bipolar and died in an auto accident. Reading this has brought back memories - good ones, thankfully, though I did see the low side. Wonderful and masterful writing, @CasualWanderer82.