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Venetia returns & Gray talks
pvtguy commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Venetia returns & Gray talks
There always seems to be a "Venetia" in every town! Her pomposity is truly annoying! Vince was remarkably controlled in his comments to her while Gray was seething but kept it to himself. This was a wonderful chapter which demonstrated the growing closeness of the family - Gray and Matt, Vince and Peter, Freddie (and Arvid when allowed). The mismatched dinnerware is certainly a metaphor of the family: all different, but making a comfortable grouping. -
The Things We Can Never Take Back
pvtguy commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Things We Can Never Take Back
Bunny boy is going to be the key to dealing with LiveFeed and redeeming Jamie and hopefully the others. Anna is wonderful!- 17 comments
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Great chapter, but it feels like "historia interruptus," lol! otherwise known as a cliffie! Who is going to be the local Australian of the Year? I think Tony has a motive in mind in inviting Carol to the party: to meet all the guys so that the story of building a place to serve homeless gay youth will have a greater social context. Tony is very suave in how he deals with everyone there!
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Getting Closer and Halloween
pvtguy commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Getting Closer and Halloween
The "criminal" trio will eventually have their comeuppance! I can't imagine that the won't be stupid enough to try something when adults are around or meet some law enforcement! -
The plot thickens as it gets a little more complicated. The relationship between Stone and Jen is amazing - remaining best friends and truly happy for each other! Stone loves being a parent and his son is truly a center for him. It will be interesting to see how he finds Lee and what develops there. Another exciting chapter!
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All went well with the interview, but the encounter at the end has certainly tugged at my heartstrings! I am now intrigued to see who Zack is and the part he is to play in this story! Well done!!!
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Jacob & a return to the Basket Makers Arms
pvtguy commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Jacob & a return to the Basket Makers Arms
This was a delightful chapter with a new character added to the new Philpott community. Freddie and Gray are developing even more a wonderful relationship! He can ask Gray questions without the "father/son" awkwardness, though it seems there is little of that with Freddie and Vince. Loved this installment! -
Stephen's Visit With Dr. Taylor and More Jeff
pvtguy commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Stephen's Visit With Dr. Taylor and More Jeff
This type of therapy is what I was taught was Rational Emotive Therapy. I know I used it lots during my career in counseling. The therapist challenges the thinking/beliefs that the client is holding on to and asks the rational questions to allow the client to articulate the thoughts and reconsider the events. It can allow the client to look at an event through a different thought process. In this case, Stephen was able to see what he did in a much broader view and, thus, deal with the guilt he was carrying. @Lee Wilson, you did a good job of presenting this approach. -
Stephen's Visit With Dr. Taylor and More Jeff
pvtguy commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Stephen's Visit With Dr. Taylor and More Jeff
Yes, hindsight is 20-20, but Leon, Sr, is correct: he was too young to recognize the warning signs about his brother. Stephen made great progress with being challenged to evaluate his thoughts. Hopefully, he will continue to use those questions to chase the dark clouds away. A more complete therapy session would also deal with the emotional/rational connection, but this is not a story about the therapy process as much as helping him to get past the guilt. His relationship with Michael is deepening. Jeff has made remarkable progress - hope it holds! It seems that all the loose ends are coming to an end.... -
I agree with @chris191070, Jess needs a police escort to get her belongings - and perhaps a court order too! The child bearer chooses to live a life of isolation from her children, let her live that consequence! Too bad on her part. Shania's statement that forgiveness is necessary also applies to the child bearer if she is to earn the title of "mother"!!! I'm glad the sibs are coming to see Tony! Now, if only Aaron's brother can be located!
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The discovery period for any trial is slow, meticulous, and frought-filled until the prosecution has a hopefully solid case against the accused. Of course, this will impact Joshua and Daniel, but knowing they have the support of so many will help ease the anxiety.
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From what we call lovingly the "Hugillverse" comes a tale of building a chosen family that might seem unconventional to traditionalists, but is one full of love and respect. Great writing, witty sayings, and fascinating characters.
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Friends' Reactions, and Gavin's Visit
pvtguy commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Friends' Reactions, and Gavin's Visit
The "scared straight" approach might have positive consequences for Gavin, but he has issues that go beyond being scared. He really needs some therapy! I still don't think Leon will be able to go into his room until it is completely redone, and there may still be some PTSD to deal with! Stephen will also have lingering emotions, but hopefully, the therapy sessions will help him gain some perspective.- 26 comments
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A delightful stopping point. At least, there' comfort in knowing that a continuation of this family's story will follow. Thank you, @Robert Hugill for the wonderful Hugillverse!
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Nice cliffie! Hope the next chapter is not far off! I'm glad the two girls have been taken to a safer place. But what about the mother? The ball game is a great opportunity for the kids and adults.
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How many people read all the fine print to any contract? Do you hit agree to every update to your smartphone without reading all the verbage? I think we are all guilty to a degree of this naivete. Jamie was idealistic and his hopes were being puffed up by Arthur, et al. All the masks are falling away and this is making for great drama!
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There are many things coming together for the party and for Tony to become more involved in the community. He'll be laying some groundwork for his goal of the shelter. And now, on with both the Australia Day celebration and the party for the guys and their friends/families!
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Ditto to all the above! Beautiful chapter!
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What a new experience for Gray! He's learning that the slow development of friendship is a solid basis for a relationship - the "benefits" part becoming a natural development. Vince did not react as Gray feared - just wanted Gray to clean the interior! Lovely chapter!
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Homecoming and the Aftermath
pvtguy commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Homecoming and the Aftermath
"They" here refers to the family; that doesn't mean that question were called out after he went inside (I'd bet there were inane questions screamed out!)... -
Homecoming and the Aftermath
pvtguy commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Homecoming and the Aftermath
All actions have consequences, both "bad" and "good". What Stephen has done will have to be integrated into his mind in order to proceed positively. I'm glad his parents made the appointment for him. Stephen certainly has a strong sense of morality in that he knows he killed someone even if to protect his brother and stop harm from happening. He needs to get to the point of knowing and accepting that his action was done for a greater good. Excellent writing! -
Wonderful start! It grabbed me from the first sentence! So glad to see you writing and publishing again!
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"The Book Of Disquiet"
pvtguy commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "The Book Of Disquiet"
I began this story absolutely disgusted at what Adrian was doing to his son and to Nick! Yet, I couldn't stop reading. It is a journey through abnormal psychology to what religions might call full redemption/salvation. I need to let this last chapter percolate some more before responding further! All I can say is this was one of the most intense reads I have ever done!- 17 comments
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The drama seems to have settled to a less frenetic level. While I hate to see good stories end, I'm looking forward to the next iteration of the activities of these delightful characters! Great writing, @Robert Hugill.
