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Freddie's concern about his mother and father are no different than the conflict Vince had to work through! And if Vince is just 34, then he was 18/19 when Freddie was conceived and born, which means he married quite young. Add to that, going through University...
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So, Tony is checking out the house on the hill...I think a good solution for the time being would be for him to purchase that house and put his brother and sister up in his apartment in Brisbane! Sounds like his sister wanted to make sure she was truly lesbian and got the full experience! Maybe she and the girlfriend could raise the child together, that is, if the girlfriend is truly a partner to her!
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Getting To The Bottom Of It
pvtguy commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Getting To The Bottom Of It
Once again, @Lee Wilson, your intriguing story has spawned wonderful comments! This chapter shows that there are people still alive and the spread of the gas. How, or why, is the "good" Dr. Allen still alive? If the CDC is on the way there, who alerted them? Have they been living in Hazmat suits? And what will the group at the hotel do to move forward now? Looking forward to the future chapters to answer these and many other questions!- 26 comments
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Your challenge to the christophilists is wonderful and needed! This is a powerful statement made by a tremendously gifted poet!!!
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This definitely was a very warm chapter which illustrated wonderfully the relationship with these characters. There is love present in many forms - parental, romantic, and platonic with all the friends celebrating the "bachelor party".... It is a beautiful buildup for the wedding and honeymoon.
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IF ML keep up her attitude and behavior, she will become Marie Lonely, as no one will want to be around her! Guess there are always her type everywhere. She must have been raised to feel she was a "Princess" and entitled to everything she wanted. A new order must be established that will take care of everyone from the young to the old!
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When two people really talk and are honest, they can find solutions to problems. Now that Aaron and Tony have begun that conversation, let's see where it goes.
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April 8 through April 14
pvtguy commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in April 8 through April 14
Each of these is a powerful statement unto itself! What a wordsmith you are, @Parker Owens!!! Each has spoken to me in its own way, but today, April 8, 10, 11, and 12 have me mourning the current environment that has been created over the past few months, and waiting and hoping that a vote might change the source of this chaos and lawlessness. April 9, 13 and 14 do give me a belief in hope! Thanks for sharing your wonderful talent once again!!! -
I do believe that the comments are as interesting as the story itself! Love it!
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Well, the fan is turning....let's see what it spits back in the next chapter! I do believe Kieran's parents will step up to support him and Charlie!
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The cancer cells may have been eliminated, but he is still weak from the effect they have had on him for a while. Strength has to be built up!
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Oh, the actual slavery to "perfection" rather than "reality" is truly a burden. I do hope Vince can break through that shell!
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Guy added. ‘They must have spent a fortune on clearing the land and fixing the house up, but I don’t actually think anyone lives there.’ A foreshadowing of the place Tony may soon call home? Scott certainly has initiated a much more positive conversation between Aaron and Tony. Now for the next chapter!!!!
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ML is trying to be the dominant one, but I do feel she is actually scared, and too proud to admit it! Will she find them? Very unlikely at this point. Stealing another car does not guarantee that she has followed them. Just how far has this gas spread? Does it hold its strength the farther it spreads? You are doing a great job, @Lee Wilsonin creating an apocalyptic scene!
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I do believe that finding Daniel will be a bit more complicated, but hopefully result in reconnection with Joshua. The question as to Joshua's parents may well prove to be helpful in rooting out the bad cops and/or whoever else is involved. And if sister is in Europe, why didn't she come home to look after her siblings after finding out about her parents? Things are moving along!
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So the boys were "saved" due to asthma and cancer...what about MI? And are there no adults with these diseases too? I'm eager to see who has survived and what they do....
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Jamie has gone from pure emotional reaction of anger and seeking revenge to thinking rationally about what Life feed is doing to him. Bunny is going to be instrumental in planning and executing Jamie's challenge. He, Bunny, may well also find the strength to stand up to his brother and crash Xpress. Above all, Bunny may realize that Jamie can truly love and accept him as he is!
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It both amazes and surprises me when young people realize that proficiency in writing, reading and speaking language as well as learning maths that can be used in research is necessary in all professions! Likewise, the ability to think, analyze, and be critical about issues are absolutely essential in daily life! Toby is realizing this and is doing something about it. It is not totally unusual that ex-spouses can develop a better relationship as friends than partners in marriage. I'm glad to see this with "Bri" and Deidre. This will prove much better for Toby! Light-hearted but a very poignant chapter, @Robert Hugill.
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Chapter 1 - The Spice of Life
pvtguy commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - The Spice of Life
With so much effort being put forth to stifle diversity today, how refreshing to be reminded of the need for diversity to keep the world functioning properly. Great writing, Bill. -
When at last one stops trying to fit into others' expectations, one finds "normal" defined by one's own actions, beliefs, and lifestyle! Each of us has talents and parts to play in creating and lifting up the world in which we exist. To have someone join us on our journey is a gift for sure!
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An anticipatory chapter building the emotion of another meeting between Aaron and Tony! I could feel the fresh air, the ocean mist and the solitude of the lighthouse park! It certainly did soothe Tony's soul a lot. I hope the meal being delivered includes a side of Aaron....
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Venetia & Charles cordially invite…
pvtguy commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Venetia & Charles cordially invite…
While I'm sure the luncheon was delicious, it seems the "desert" (dessert) was truly dry in terms of the pretentiousness of Venetia, et al - it sucked the moisture from any warmth the conversations could have had. I do hope Venetia drops any interest in Vince's "problem" of being single! As said above, a delightful chapter! -
The crazy weather over the United States this past month and still going on currently is baffling, for sure!. While you were experiencing freezing temps and snow, we (in Florida) had temperatures reaching into the 90's - 20 degrees above average temps for this time of year! While there were areas being soaked by rain and suffering mudslides, there were massive fires in various areas and drought elsewhere! Still, as you so eloquently say, birds are returning, the air is crisp, love is blooming once again, and there are problems to solve everywhere!
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Lots of decisions to make. Regardless of where Tony decides to live, he will still have to travel for appearances if his books and movie options require it to keep his name in front of the public. Aaron will have to decide if he can accept that part of Tony's life if they do get back together. Aaron may seem stuck in time with his business, but he also needs to reflect on his own growth. He needs to recognize himself as an individual who is not dependent on another for definition. Scott is going to play a large part of the voice of understanding and reason again! The rest will be strong support for both Aaron and Tony. I chuckled outloud at the explanation of the 'double A'...
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We also call them "Chreasters"....
