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I am so impressed with the insight and ability to describe the angst of a teen that is so evident in your writing! I was so eager to read each chapter that I have to admit to reading it on another site. However, that is more to my impatience than the manner of posting here. Looking for more quality work from you @Ronyx!!!
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Hmmm....Colin is maturing emotionally at a very nice pace! I do believe his family is in for some long-needed confrontation!
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Micco has turned introvertishness into isolation. I hope this encounter with Chase will help break him out his very thick shell. He certainly does have the "poor me" attitude, but with the assurance of Burke and the constant concern of Billie, it's time to move forward.
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It is so refreshing for me to read about adults coming to terms with themselves. I couldn't even admit to myself what I knew to be the truth till in my mid-40's! Oh well...I've enjoyed life since too!
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I think it's time for Colin's testicles to descend and his mouth to say what needs to be said to all!
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Why did Micco cut off his communication with the animals? It just seems to prolong the mystery. I love all these different threads and look forward to the coming chapters where they will come together. Love your writing!
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Will this ever stop? Not when people think of others as non-humans or lesser than....the us vs. them where we are always right and they are always wrong. Love this poem and the hope it inspires.
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It's just the opposite with me: I am the eldest of three children, the youngest with multiple handicaps. I am the one who became caretaker to all. I am still looking after the youngest, though now in a nursing home for the past few months and will be going forward. I am enjoying the progress of this story. As to the confusion mentioned by @Clancy59, in my mind, this takes a slight step back in time to bring us up to a concurrent time with Owain.
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Beautiful! It is indeed the full maturation of a relationship when each can see beyond the physical and experience the spiritual presence of another.
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Micco's heart rate might have slowed, but mine has not throughout this whole chapter! Wow - what writing skill you have! What or who will Micco find? Great chapter!
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I just started this wonderful story! Rather than repeat or restate what has already been said above, I will say that I am now intrigued to read your other stories! Wonderful writing.
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As with all true mystery of existence, words point a way, but are not the end or definition in themselves. Words are by nature limited - but can point to that which is not limited. That said, you have used the power of your words to lead us into the sublime. Well done!
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As expected, a very well written chapter full of information that I know i didn't know before this! I'm still wondering what the purpose of the skinwalker will be in the daily life of Devin and Mac. Devin did change in to animals at school but also into other human beings.
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Several issues converge to make Evan rethink his life's view. Religion plays a major part but the questioning of faith is a necessary step to clarifying one's personal beliefs. This short story is a powerful presentation.
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When one confuses training/work with identity, one loses the sense of "who am I really?" This is an exceptionally well-written journey through PTSD of a Navy Seal who has returned to life outside of the Navy that leads to finding not only self, but also love.
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Why did Chase leave? What does he feel now? Is he trying to deny or escape some deep feelings? I hope Micco can focus and communicate with the animals and gain some insight...
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Chapter 1: Working the Night Shift 2
pvtguy commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1: Working the Night Shift 2
Rather than a much warmer place for Sarah to end up in, I rather believe that she would have been surrounded by a love so deep that she couldn't accept it. Thus, her "hell" would be eternal loneliness. She couldn't accept love when living and probably wouldn't accept it when she crossed over... I continue to admire your storytelling, Bill. -
Apparently, even Burke can see the connection between Chase and Micco. Now to find out who was in the house and why...
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Hmm...just wondering: Was Angus aware of time or was he stuck in a time warp? Is there time in eternity?
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Well done once again, Bill! That the guys were not freaked out but actually sought help for Angus is impressive. I do love your Halloween stories!
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Chapter 1: Dance With the Devil
pvtguy commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1: Dance With the Devil
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As a fellow Floridian, with all the potential damage that could occur with hurricanes, I won't be without insurance, but also hate the hoops created and endorsed by our legislators.
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I totally missed the importance of the "trophies" until the surprising ending. It certainly placed Al in a new light. At first, I saw him as a quiet introvert who was perturbed by interactions with others. What a wonderful creation! I loved this surprising story.
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As I came late to the comments this week, I do believe everything I thought as I was reading has been already mentioned. I continue to admire your writing...but wish there was more than one posting a week...
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What a welcome point of my day when I saw the posting of this wonderful chapter! Would that I could ever experience such luxury with such down to earth people! I love the world of the Devlin-Majors and would love to be friends with them! Great writing!
