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Ella is so self-assured! I'm still in disbelief at how vivid the interrogation was in the courtroom. It's as though Joe's inability to perform was due to Ella's inadequacies.

Sebastian is so imprisoned by his fear of being himself that he doesn't realize that he is the "they" governing his tragedy.

Seth is in a really precarious position: perhaps his mother might just think of him as being the one responsible to look after Stacy by taking her everywhere she wants to go, not thinking of how Stacy is viewing it. That is a hopeful way of viewing her, even if I don't fully believe it. This behavior has led Seth to believe he is not equal in acceptance. If mother put more time into parenting both of her children, Seth might feel supported and able to be himself. He's going to have to say something before he is raped by Craig or more problems will occur. Craig needs to be neutered!

Ah, the difference a half-century makes. This type of questioning to the degree would not have been attempted in the 70's or after. Actually, I'm not really sure when the judicial system changed in reference to divorce/annulments. Normally, it would seem that if both parties stipulated to the statement of non-consummation of a marriage, then there would be no need to go into such detail.

You're the author and know the mind of Devin better, but I don't think he feels one bit bad about being deceitful to acomplish his goal of breaking up a friendship. They didn't even speak to the RA's and give that a chance. I'm a bit less respectful of him right now.

There is a certain peace that comes with viewing the ocean (or any body of water for that matter). It seems to have calmed down both of them at least for the moment. That break can bring about clearer thinking...hopefully, it will!

Perhaps we, today, are so used to divorce that we forget (or never knew) how difficult it was in the first part of the last century. Women didn't gain some major rights until the 1970's (credit cards in their own names!) - and still don't have equal rights in all things - ex: pay, access to top jobs). I love the perspective of this story through a younger woman who is showing more independence. Great writing.

More angst woven into Seth's life! How long until he is 'forced' to come out? Great writing! You've got this teen thing down pat!

Too bad we can't find a way to transport water like we do oil to the areas that need it!

It just keeps getting warmer here in Florida! We're already hitting the mid-80's to the mid-90's and the humidity is starting to rise! I do like warmer weather, but I am looking forward to getting some rain too! It's been exceptionally dry in Orlando.

This was the norm for me too in my profession....too bad this ethic is not as present in many of our younger people today. Actually, guess it was never the norm for everyone in our age group either, lol!

Oh the hormones and confusion of the teen years. What we were convinced was true - which it was for the time - changes almost as quickly as we do in the following years. I have loved every installment of this series and look forward to this one too!

How wonderful - the beginning of another Ravello story and seeing what happens between Danele and Giacomo.

First off, thank you, Anton, for another wonderful chapter. Hope you are doing well and recovering or recovered. I am always impressed with the attention Andrew and Ryan give to everything they do! They are amazing hosts, bosses and parents. And now...looking forward to the next chapter!

We get more insight into the family here through a very warm and open conversation.

Seeing and experiencing a visit to a Cuba that can only exist in the CJ-verse is a wonderful journey. CJ and Oz let us vicariously see a wonderful visit where they get to meet wonderful people, eat great food, and discover a find that will help propel Cuba into a brighter future. As part of the CJ series of the summer of 2022, this both fills in some blanks and sets up the promise of more to come. As usual, a wonderfully crafted story by an amazing writer, Carlos Hazday.

Ok...I'm going out on a short limb here....Craig enjoys a popularity and lives up to a created reputation, perhaps not living his true nature. Yes, he is aggressive/bully-ish, but perhaps he doesn't know how to act in such a way as to break his known persona. After all, we're dealing with 16 year-olds who make stupid decisions all the time. Still, I think Seth is in for more difficult times. This just makes it abundantly clear that I wouldn't want to live through age 16 again!

I'm going to take the devil's advocate position for a moment about Gonzaga (the TSA Agent): Was he overzealous? In some ways, I can say yes, but he was also being especially cautious as he did not know that they were doing an official job. They could have had a potentially false official pouch in which could have been something dangerous to National Security. They did not use their diplomatic passports or carry them with them on purpose. As always, I loved this story for all the reasons cited previously by everyone who has responded so far. You are quite the talented author, Carlos! Your research and preparation before writing is exactly what fails other authors who get stuck ending a serial because they had no total picture to begin with. While I wish you would publish sooner, I respect your taking your time before crafting and publishing a story.

Is the history part of this story accurate or literary? Great explanations.

I totally get Sebastian. Still, I hope as he calms down, he proceeds with his coming out. I'm not sure what the future holds with Miles if any other than professional, but I do hope he finds someone who values and respects him!!

And I'm guessing options available today were not available then. Still, Ella is a very strong women and very advanced in thinking and acting than most women were then.

I wish everyone who goes through a separation/divorce could be as amicable!

What becomes of the doubloon and chain/trident? It would seem that they would have to be turned over to the Cuban government. Another excellent chapter, Carlos.

I do hope there is a teen support group for Roni and Seth! Seth is a doormat for his sister as far as his mother is concerned, it seems. Great chapter in providing intrigue, angst, and care on the part of Seth towards Roni.

I learned how to block out noise around me when I wanted to study. It is both a blessing and curse as it gives many the impression that I am ignoring them (which, I guess, I am momentarily). However, it also served me well as a counselor to focus on what a client was saying. I am thankful I never lived in a college dorm! Without meaning to do it, Devin is acting like an emotional bully when he says he will tell him his secret later, but appears not to do so. I'm sure this can be resolved.