pvtguy

Great chapter and great comments! You are doing what great literature always does: excite readers and make them clamor for more! Hank was Chase's first boyfriend, It is not necessary in life to have many before you decide on 'the one' - which is a personal decision, not a divinely inspired choice. In any case, Hank feels rightly betrayed and has lost trust (or at least feels that way). Can they work it out? Of course -- two mature people who choose to work together (perhaps with the needed assistance of a counselor) can intellectually analyze the situation and decide to choose one another from this day forward and work to make that happen. However, that isn't the stuff of complex emotions at the time we are witnessing with these two. I look forward to more chapters. I am a retired counselor who worked with adolescents for nearly 47 years. I have had years of working especially with depression - mix that with adolescent physical/emotional development, and one can only imagine the challenge. I loved it, however! I still volunteer as a mentor one morning each week to work with high school students whose educational progression is suffering especially because of emotional turmoil. It is challenging and rewarding. Do I succeed with every one? Would that I could. I have had to learn to accept the fact that I can't save every one of them or change the life they have to deal with every day. I can only provide a bit of hope and positivity to them and hope they realize that they can grow because of or inspite of the challenges they face daily. Tony

And I'm even later than JeffreyL! However, I find it a superb beginning. You have very accurately portrayed the "screwed up" logic so present in depression. For those who have never experienced it either themselves or with others, it is most difficult to explain but you have done a wonderful job. I will now proceed to follow the rest of the chapters!

I had the same thoughts before I hit "Add Comment"!

I take it to mean that Yuri believes emotional closeness to those you are sworn to protect causes a lack of objectivity and distance needed for objectivity. Eric has a different view. Is he right?

AS long as parts don't fall off with vigorous activity, this ought to be rather an interesting development. Just watch out for falling meteorites!

In all you write, you have a true gift of sharing more than mere words: even in a few words you create a powerful life experience. I echo the sentiments expressed so eloquently in the comments - my own father stopped communicating with me at age 12 other than very superficial comments (hello, goodbye)...a position I have made certain not to do with my own son who is in so many ways the opposite of me in personality, likes, etc., but a wonderful person in his own way. We don't agree on lots of "likes", but I totally respect him, and he, me. That makes things good in life for me, though that loss of the relationship I really wanted with my own father still exists - and he's been gone for 25 years! It just goes to show: we don't always have everything we want in life, but what we have are true blessings and we can be content with what we have! Thank you for sharing so much. Tony

This is a light but very engaging story. I love how you've woven in so many elements: friendship, legal and professional advice, hard work, dedication, and desire in your wonderfully flowing style. Now, would that this story could be real! Do you think the NFL or 'Murica would be openly accepting of this?

I did understand the "redneck" diet statement as referring to Don et al. As for the unprotected sex, Robbie has been checked so many times while in the hospital that he should have known if there were any problems. Still, safe sex should be followed. I found it gave me a chuckle to consider his gravitational problem at the breakfast table. I do hope Robbie continues to work with Jo - he needs her for a true reality check midst the craziness in his life. Now, on to the next chapter!

I really love the interaction of Peter and Eric with all those around them. Many would say that security must not be emotionally involved with those they protect - yet, who is more likely to be protective: the one who loves you totally or the disinterested one? This is what makes it more a passion than just a job.

Happy New Year, Carlos. I enjoy every story you write, regardless of length! Each is powerful and captivating in its own right. This one has begun with the intrigue that will keep me eagerly anticipating each posting! Thanks. Tony F

Conner is a bit much now - but that is because he has been so lonely for so long. Let's see how he is when he relaxes a bit. I don't think either one of them is ready for a lifelong commitment at this point in any case! Thanks for the Christmas present, Dodger!

Thanks for the Christmas installment. I look forward to an adventure with CJ and family when he gets a post with his new job. Meanwhile, have a very Merry Christmas and a New Year filled with unexpected blessings! Tony

Wonderful way in which Pam was made aware that she needed help and committed to getting it. A great chapter! Wishing you and yours a very Merry Christmas and a New Year filled with unexpected blessings

Wayne Gray is a gifted writer. In this story, he provides intrigue, mystery, and finding oneself with the gift of finding a home complete with relationships which form a "family". Great read!!!

In the continuing Rothenian tales, this one adds a new couple (Ben and Phil) to the growing family. Still, it contains intrigue, romance, adventure and a "spiritual" interaction. Well worth the read!

I have read all posted here on GA. I am not aware of the other sites. I limit my reading to a few chapters a day when a complete story is posted as I like to prolong the pleasure as long as possible rather than achieve premature ecstasy.

Absolutely beautiful! Would that all suicides could provide closure to the surviving ones who loved them. I do look forward to more Rothenian tales.

It does appear that there are still more tales from Rothenia to be told! That certainly excites me!

Hmmm....has Jedodiah (sp?) become a guardian angel of sorts? Things are coming to a conclusion - but not too soon, I hope. I love these stories and hate to see one end!

And the fan is spinning and the excrement is about to hit the wall! Great suspense created, Mike Arram!

And now the real trouble begins. How does Elijah know about what plans Phil, et al, have? The plot thickens...

I want to take this vacation!

I do love the intrigue! It will be interesting to find out whether Elijah is friend or foe.

We are in for some heavy intrigue! The reference to Jed is not a simple idea, methinks!

I love the descriptions of the buildings, the scenery, the taste of the wine, the feelings...in short, brilliant! I feel that I am right in the scene vicariously observing what each character is experiencing: a true literary gift! That said, the intrigue continues to build. I'm eager to discover Elijah's true role in all this - he does sound like a missionary, but for whom and for what? Great job again, Mike Arram!!