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What is the point at which concern becomes over-involvement as far as parenting goes? Whatever happens among Noah, Ryan and Holly should be allowed to happen and then dealt with rationally. It seems as though all the adults are ganging up to make sure Ryan doesn't have any chance with Holly at all. Besides, where is Holly's opinion come into play? I love the continuation of this series. Great job. Tony
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I find Seb's quick withdrawal of all support from the school to be sudden, very impulsive as is his wont, and without consideration of the good it would do in the long run for all the students and the community. Perhaps he will reconsider after meeting with Xander over the weekend. Dwas doing what typical adolescents today do - he was overawed with the wealth and status and acted impulsively too. Is Seb's "punishment" to the actions of the Headmaster proportional or was he just showing his wealth was more important than the long standing support of the Chairman of the Board. I'm not condoning the Headmaster's response, but I just see it as a clash of privilege.
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This is an extremely well-written and powerful read. It involves the reader from the first paragraph to the last, allowing one to experience the emotion, the values and the challenges presented. Wayne is an excellent author and I encourage all to read his stories. Tony
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Again, I find the lack of emotional response on Lewis' part very sad. Also, the failure on the part of the twins to inform Lewis of Sebastian's death is really odd. Everything just seems to be a surface telling of events and quick decisions that just seem to be made and orders given and followed with no empathy whatsoever.
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I am amazed at the shallow emotions of both Lewis and Sebastian. Lewis seems not to commit to anything more than surface level and changes directions on a whim! Sebastian treats the twins as young children he must control at all times. There appears to be no warmth from either Seb or Lewis for more than a fleeting moment. And yet, they do make the story quite interesting and appealing. That major plans can be changed on a mere moment's notice - no mention of the impact that the decision to go to the Mediterranean would have on those in FI - is amazing. Thus - fiction! Keep up the good work. Tony
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It would appear that Julie's time may be short. I still think that there should be more frequent visits, especially since it is summer and the boys have more free time. Grandpa Josh could take them during the week... In any case, I have loved this entire series and it is just as intriguing now as Book one was/is. Tony
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Chapter 122 The Anniversary
pvtguy commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 122 The Anniversary
You've done it again! A wonderful chapter that has left me (and apparently everyone else) chafing at the bit while waiting for the next chapter! Great job, Dodger!!! Tony -
I find it a bit odd that the twins and Holly only are seeing their mother in Sunday. It would seem to me that in her terminal condition, they would want as much time with her as possible. Otherwise, another great chapter in this wonderful series.
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A beautiful ending - and you're right - it brought closure to Huon's story. Thanks for this.
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I love how you intersperse education within the story. Taking care of puppies is not easy and you handled that quite deftly. Also, I'm glad you had them get two puppies so that they could have company. Great chapter. Tony
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Chapter 121 Nicola Takes Over
pvtguy commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 121 Nicola Takes Over
Understandable - they are two teens whose lives are following different paths and experiences at a very critical time in their lives. It is natural to drift apart at this point. However, if they get to meet up again after high school, perhaps they could establish a new relationship, but, then again, perhaps their individual experiences to that point might not be compatible. That could be a whole different series.... -
Chapter 121 Nicola Takes Over
pvtguy commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 121 Nicola Takes Over
At long last, Robbie is getting the counseling he has needed for so long!!! I look forward to the developing changes that will inevitably take place with everyone as Robbie deals with his demons and becomes more confident. Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next installment! And thanks for continuing this story Tony -
An Unexpected Consideration
pvtguy commented on Bill W's story chapter in An Unexpected Consideration
I had to chuckle out loud when I saw "Shady Pines"...I miss any input from Jake save for his telling the guys to have a good meal as it would be charged to him. Other than that, he doesn't seem to have much interaction any more. I know the focus is on the new generation, but a short interlude with Josh and Jake would be nice.... Tony -
While this is far short of the 25 volumes I suggested, I must admit it is a fitting ending to the CJ saga. You have created a wonderful and compelling series, filled with relatable characters, events, ups and downs, idealism, and sometimes impossible situations (especially financially for most of us!). Still, it certainly allowed me vicarious vacations and remodeling a house with all the gizmos I would love to have! Thank you from the bottom of my heart for sharing your talent with us. I look forward to your next project(s).
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Chapter 120 I Never Claimed to be an Angel
pvtguy commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 120 I Never Claimed to be an Angel
At last, an update. Great job. Robbie is finally getting the help he so desperately needs. Keep the chapters coming!! Tony -
I absolutely have loved each volume of this series. I know that there has to be an end, but would not be disappointed in the least if you were to come back to this story again later. You have done a marvelous job weaving politics, family, social commentary, values and vision filled with positivity. Thank you again and again!
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Chapter 27 - The pressure in my chest
pvtguy commented on albertnothlit's story chapter in Chapter 27 - The pressure in my chest
And now, a few months past the last posting, I do hope that you are learning to "swim with the current" when needed. I do hope you're still working with your therapist and remembering that there are those of us who you don't know if have met personally who do care for and support you. I do hope you find peace midst the storms. Tony -
My mom was a Sophia, a close second to a Nan, so I do know the joy she brought into so many lives. I love this series and look forward to book four. Tony
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Beautiful chapter. I love her name and the shortening to Liebe. You now have given the reason for 25 more volumes!!! Tony
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Hear that Mann? You've got job security!!!
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As I have said before, there needs to be at least 25 volumes to start, lol. These characters and the story itself are too compelling to just stop!
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And how long will we have to wait for the next volume? Fridays won't be the same until then! Great chapter! Thanks, Carlos. Tony
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Well....there's another vicarious vacation for me! Can't afford a real one, but this certainly satisfies my need for one! Thanks. Tony
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First off, I enjoyed this story very much. However, as a retired counselor, I would have enjoyed seeing Richie getting counseling as his mother was dying and after her death. If in fact she did keep his father from him, Richie needed to know that. Still, that does not relieve Richard from fighting for his son. I know...this was not the plot of this story...I'm simply projecting what I would have like to have seen, but that would not have been the story you told. I don't think that the issues have really been resolved but rather just accepted and the characters simply moving on. All said, it didn't stop me from looking forward to every posting. Keep up the good work!!
