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II am not familiar with time zone differences of 1/2 hours. Every time zone I am familiar with is in one-hour intervals. The purchase of the glass-bottom boat seems odd for transport. Better for tourist uses. Seems like an imposition on a brother he has only known briefly. The story is good. The language - especially in conversations - is stilted at times. Patience is the virtue; Patients are people... Just minor observations. I do await the next adventure. Tony
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I am not familiar with time zone differences of 1/2 hours. Every time zone I am familiar with is in one-hour intervals. The purchase of the glass-bottom boat seems odd for transport. Better for tourist uses. Seems like an imposition on a brother he has only known briefly. The story is good. The language - especially in conversations - is stilted at times. Patience is the virtue; Patients are people... Just minor observations. I do await the next adventure. Tony
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The likelihood of a teen bonding with others - especially adults - when they've had no bonding as a child is very remote. I would like to think Ian has a chance, considering he does have a bond with Steve. Thanks for the conclusion to this story. Tony
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Is this the end? As usual, I hate leaving new "friends" behind. But also, as usual, I always enjoy your stories as I learn so much from them.
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I love the care he takes of Ernie, Emmy and family.
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At long last, another chapter! And, as always, very well done! May the next one appear after not so long an interval. Thanks, Dodger! Tony
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Was the decision to abandon the cruise come about too abruptly? The fire might simply have been minor. However, we'll see what new adventure awaits.
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Now you have me confused about the seasons: If it is Autumn up here, the winter would follow. Summer still follows spring in either hemisphere.
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I believe the comments to this, point cover all that I was thinking. I just hope the coming chapters have less time between postings. Great job, Dodger! Tony
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Another wonderful volume comes to an enviable end. If only I could enjoy just one of their travels...! Now that this volume has ended, it's on to complete the next 24 volumes! You make waiting for 2019 hopeful: meanwhile, we must live with the excrement produced by the Swamp folk. Tony
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A beautiful, charming, joyful chapter filled with authentic CJ and Owen. You've done quite well with this one!!! Tony
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Thank you for posting this chapter. I was in serious need of a Makarovia injection! Tony
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This is the second story I've read involving the Kokoda Trail hike. This was done with much greater detail - so much so that I am tired too! Great job! Tony
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A great way to start today and the month of June. That's, Carlos. Tony
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In true Quokka fashion, I am looking forward to a compelling, yet educational, journey. Intrigue is already starting. Keep the chapters coming! Tony
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So well done! As I don't live far from any of these places in Orlando, I could picture the visit well. Glad to see you were also a part of the story. What a great way to kick off my Friday! Tony
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Owen summed up the best approach to mourning: be thankful for having been able to have that person in your life for the time they were. Death is a reality, as CJ points out, even though we always want it for others. Thanks Carlos...well done chapter. Tony
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And now where does this go? I do hope there's a follow-up.
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You definitely have extraordinary story telling skills. Another Silverton? Going to be interesting. Tony
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Chapter 97 A Memorable Night to Forget
pvtguy commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 97 A Memorable Night to Forget
Please don't keep us hanging a long time to see how this is resolved. Great chapter. Lots of smiles but also depth. Thanks. Tony -
Pat may well take a step or two backwards just confirm his security, but with the love and support he has from Adam and Ian will allow him to come back and move forward with surety. There are many instances of adoptees finding siblings raised in different families. Great chapter, Joh. Tony F
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I, too, did not see an announcement about this chapter, but sure am glad to see the family back. I certainly admire Spikey's analysis and explanation. I do bristle when the word "patriot" is applied to only those who "respect the flag", etc. Standing is not the only way to show patriotism: when statements and actions serve to stand in contrast to the ideals on which this nation was built, that fails to be patriotic but rather just the opposite. We have work to do to bring about unity through diversity. I certainly appreciate your using these issues to point out the attitudes which divide. Now on to the next chapter! (BTW, I do believe you still need to write 24 more volumes after this. We need to follow CJ into retirement!)
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And on now to the next volume of this family...
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Sounds just like I grew up! It's home to me! Love this story. Tony
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Peter and Eric aren't the only ones feeling "at home" - it's good to be back with these guys! Thanks for posting! Tony
