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Wonderful job, Bill. All was handled extremely well. Emotions were conveyed, but were not dragged out as to make the story maudlin. Even through sadness, joy, hope and love shine through. Thank you for continuing this series. I have enjoyed each volume. Each one gets better and better - and that's a lot to live up to as the first one was wonderful to begin with! While I would be ready to start reading this evening, do take the time to rest, reflect, and produce another great volume! Tony

A lot of action in a short space. While more detail would have elongated the story, I do believe your focus makes for a wonderful read.

I do remember that from the earlier volume...just exaggerating with the number of people there for Thanksgiving. I have cooked for large numbers of people in the past and know the amount of preparation it takes. They are definitely fortunate to have Josh and Jake to help out with everything. With the way you write this story, I feel like I am right there in every scene as the invisible participant.

I can see the ending of this volume coming soon. I do hope you continue through the Junior and Senior years. Great job.

The Currie household must have a commercial sized dishwasher as well as huge refrigerators and an 8-burner stove with 4 ovens! This chapter has set me up for my own Thanksgiving - though it will be on a much smaller scale, to be sure! I have loved all the volumes in this series, but this one has to be my favorite. Great job, Bill. Tony

I don't know Canadian law - only U.S. law - when it comes to suspected abuse. Medical and educational professionals are required by law to report suspected abuse. It is then up to the Department of Children and Families (or whatever that department is called in a given State) to investigate and determine the accuracy of the complaint. Jo has made a complaint to the police, as she told Robbie. Let's see what comes of that. I totally understand Nicola's reaction: she doesn't want to see the family impacted by divorce. She, perhaps, is thinking of the financial consequences, but I'm sure there are mixed feelings regardless. She did state a fact to Robbie, and I don't think it was meant to hurt him as he took it: he doesn't have the history with the family that Daniel, Amy and she have. His history is one of non-acceptance by Don and mixed acceptance by Sue. Even though he was formally adopted, he is still not treated as an equal to the other children. Dodger has done a wonderful job of presenting this story through Robbie's eyes. I certainly look forward to how things progress.

It is wise to remember that we're interpreting everything through Robbie's eyes. I'm not saying his interpretation is inaccurate, but neither is it totally accurate.There's always more to the story than one person's view. That said, I do believe that Don is up to something - he certainly is conniving. I would not be surprised that he has used up funds from Robbie's inheritance. Neither would I be surprised that he has some nefarious plan in progress. Let's see what the coming chapters have to say! Nice job, Dodger. Another chapter soon?

I am amazed at the instant decisions Lewis makes without any seeming deliberation - sell cars, etc. There is no indication that he has reviewed numbers which would tell the story of the cars' need at the resort or not. Oh well...I guess money talks!

Good job...it's worth the second read.

Fortunately, he has good legal advice and support. I only wish positive things ahead for both him and Bliss...but my cautious mind is always at work questioning possible negative impact of all actions... And now...waiting for Friday!!!

Are you revising the story - adding more - or using this as a starting point for more adventure with Sebastian, Lewis and the Twins?

Another chapter chock-full of activity. Thanksgiving will be truly that if Julie can make it. I have to admit that, in the spirit of Thanksgiving, when Becky asked what she could bring to the dinner, somehow I read 'pumpkin' upside down cake instead of pineapple...think I'm overloaded with pumpkin spice everything right now!!! Now on to the next chapter!

I am concerned a bit about Chipper: while he is acting like a normal man of his age, he is making some choices which could have very negative impact on his future. I know we all make crazy choices when young (and old too, for that matter!), but I just don't want to see anything prohibiting him from the success he is working towards. I truly love how you are focusing so much into the thousand word limit, Carlos! Great job!!! Tony

I love the intrigue mixed with the love story The closeness of all the family members gives this story an intimate feel that pulls in the reader. Thanks for continuing, Eric!

It is really getting intense now. I am eager to see the developments! As a retired counselor, I must say that I enjoy how you handle the parenting and family working together. I am concerned about how the boys will handle whatever happens to their mother, but they have a superb support system already in place. Tony

Thank you, thank you thank you!!! I love this story and I am glad you are finally able to continue it!

I just want to see good things for Chipper. However, not path is completely without a few stumbles and/or side roads. And sometimes those detours provide great growth opportunities, painful though they may be. I trust he is smart enough to not totally lose caution! Tony

Really wonderful chapter, Dodger! So much has been said in the other comments and I don't want to repeat. Please be quick with the next chapter. I really want to see Don getting a bit of karma! Tony

Again, a lot packed into a small space. Well done!!! Adam's faith in Chipper is sure to pay off in many serendipitous ways! Tony

A courtroom drama that involves drinking and driving, challenging perceptions of various groups (police and bikers), and wonderful characters. A definite worthwhile read!!

Excellent story - very well written, serious topics but interjected with humor, and good characters. Tony

I really ad The Pendleton Omens a while ago. Also Quabbin. I do enjoy your writing.

Ah....much better closure with this chapter. It was an enjoyable read. Tony

I guess this makes as good an ending as any....just doesn't feel fully satisfying.

This format forces you to create a lot in a short amount of space, and you do not disappoint! One can feel the tension, excitement, and drama of the show. Well done! Come on, Tuesday!!! Tony