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Happy New Year, Carlos. I enjoy every story you write, regardless of length! Each is powerful and captivating in its own right. This one has begun with the intrigue that will keep me eagerly anticipating each posting! Thanks. Tony F
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Chapter 131 Christmas with Conner
pvtguy commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 131 Christmas with Conner
Conner is a bit much now - but that is because he has been so lonely for so long. Let's see how he is when he relaxes a bit. I don't think either one of them is ready for a lifelong commitment at this point in any case! Thanks for the Christmas present, Dodger! -
Thanks for the Christmas installment. I look forward to an adventure with CJ and family when he gets a post with his new job. Meanwhile, have a very Merry Christmas and a New Year filled with unexpected blessings! Tony
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Wonderful way in which Pam was made aware that she needed help and committed to getting it. A great chapter! Wishing you and yours a very Merry Christmas and a New Year filled with unexpected blessings
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Wayne Gray is a gifted writer. In this story, he provides intrigue, mystery, and finding oneself with the gift of finding a home complete with relationships which form a "family". Great read!!!
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In the continuing Rothenian tales, this one adds a new couple (Ben and Phil) to the growing family. Still, it contains intrigue, romance, adventure and a "spiritual" interaction. Well worth the read!
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I have read all posted here on GA. I am not aware of the other sites. I limit my reading to a few chapters a day when a complete story is posted as I like to prolong the pleasure as long as possible rather than achieve premature ecstasy.
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Absolutely beautiful! Would that all suicides could provide closure to the surviving ones who loved them. I do look forward to more Rothenian tales.
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It does appear that there are still more tales from Rothenia to be told! That certainly excites me!
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Hmmm....has Jedodiah (sp?) become a guardian angel of sorts? Things are coming to a conclusion - but not too soon, I hope. I love these stories and hate to see one end!
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And the fan is spinning and the excrement is about to hit the wall! Great suspense created, Mike Arram!
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And now the real trouble begins. How does Elijah know about what plans Phil, et al, have? The plot thickens...
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I want to take this vacation!
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I do love the intrigue! It will be interesting to find out whether Elijah is friend or foe.
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We are in for some heavy intrigue! The reference to Jed is not a simple idea, methinks!
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I love the descriptions of the buildings, the scenery, the taste of the wine, the feelings...in short, brilliant! I feel that I am right in the scene vicariously observing what each character is experiencing: a true literary gift! That said, the intrigue continues to build. I'm eager to discover Elijah's true role in all this - he does sound like a missionary, but for whom and for what? Great job again, Mike Arram!!
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Until Dressner/Dawson is dealt with properly, I don't trust that the trouble is over for Phil and Ben. We'll see. Another well done chapter, Mike Arram!
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I know that after 10 years after my aunt died at age of 26 from a rheumatic heart, my grandmother grieved heavily. She wouldn't have a Christmas tree, did not want to hear the piano played, and cried almost daily. I finally bought a small Christmas tree and set it up in her living room and it started bringing a bit of joy back into the house. She grieved still, but allowed joy to re-enter her life. I truly do understand grief from this experience. I am interested as a counselor how you handle Pam's grief. This chapter has so many wonderful elements. Another great job, Carlos. Tony
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Well played! However, it could mean even more protection is needed for Phil and Ben as Dressner's cronies will want to protect themselves.
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That makes two of us....
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As long as neither of us is an "Alex"...
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Not that quick! We have to meet first!
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I'm there with you as far as grandchildren go! However, I do love a clean house - I clean wherever I am too (my sister's or my son's houses, that is). And, believe it or not, I like washing dishes and doing laundry!
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Fascinating chapter - the setup to more intrigue. Keep 'em coming, Mike Arram!
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Well done, Mike Arram, well done!! I am loving the spacing of the release of chapters, though I could read straight through...
