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Happy Anniversay Com, and here's to many more years to come 🍰🍻🎉
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Silence followed Kitryn’s explanation and everyone jumped when Elder Patrick slapped his hands down on the table. “That woman thinks it’s okay to take other people’s powers? To help herself to more than fate decided she was capable of using? Who does she think she is? And to try and take a child? No, that will not be allowed.” “Um, things may be worse.” The interruption came from a male further down the table. Elder Patrick jerked his head up. “What do you mean Xander?” “Well, I was
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That's my problem most mornings
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Doesn't matter, but thank you As long as my comment is there then people know what I meant. I probably wasn't concentrating as much as I should have been, it will teach me to have my coffee before I log onto GA.
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Saw this on facebook and with Father's Day not far off (well, in the UK anyway, not sure if others have the same date or not) I wanted to share this.
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I second (or is it third by now ) this. However, when i clicked yes on the poll it listed me as no and won't let me change it.
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This is currently the last story in the Imp and Angel’s series (maybe we can get Tim to write some more someday?). The crossover between this story and Aditus’ Cupid Central story is well done. The use of Aditus’ characters mesh well with Imp and Angel and makes the story perfect. Seeing Angel and Imp’s relationship from an outside perspective is fun and the way the two deceive the cupid is hilarious. My favorite bit is when Imp and Angel wake up to a few changes after Angel joins Imp in the living room to sleep. I’m not going to say anything except please make sure you’re not eating or drinking anything when you read this as it may end up sprayed over your screen. You have been warned A highly recommended read
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The perfect sequel to the first story. There is more focus on Imp and Angel in this one, rather than their missions. The reader gets to see them starting to understand each other and become friends (although, I doubt Imp would ever admit that). I loved how Imp cares enough to cheer Angel up when Angel is upset. It makes Angel start to think. The ending in this one is something you have to read to believe. And trust me you’ll be reaching for the pitchforks to throw at Tim for leaving it there. But, the good thing is the next one is already written and you won’t have to wait to find out what happens like I did when I first read this. Another great read
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Angel and Imp: Mission Impossible
Caz Pedroso reviewed Timothy M.'s story in 2016 - Summer - Wicked Games
I love this series. The way Angel and Imp go from competing to working together is perfectly written. The two characters are so different but also similar in some funny ways. The world Tim created for this series is wonderfully imaginative and the ending of this first short is left to the reader to decide for themselves. A great start to an intriguing series-
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The thing I liked most about this trip into Valdemar was when the uncle pointed out that the servants would be punished more than a highborn even if the highborn is at fault for the offense. (You’ll just have to read the short to see what I mean 😛 ) We also get to meet a companion again and actually get to witness a choosing. Again this is well written in Mercedes Lackey’s style and is in keeping with the world she created. A well-written fanfic read
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I loved reading this and it led to me checking out the Valdemar series by Mercedes Lackey which I am still working my through at this point. I liked the idea of sentient horses that worked with and protected their riders. This is very well done in Mercedes Lackey’s style and a very loving and hot read. A well-written fanfic read
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This short was both funny and serious rolled into one. Warning: It deals with the issues of being in the closet and even touches on suicide. So if any of these are triggers, you may wish to head for a different one of Tim’s stories. I laughed at Dean’s reaction to a talking fire extinguisher, I suppose to wake up to the start of a fire and then to realize it was a fire extinguisher that had woken me up I’d react in the same way, but still…it was funny. Then it gets slightly serious when they start talking. The extinguisher (aka Bart) is a soul that has been sent to make amends and his mission seems to be to make sure Dean doesn’t make the same mistakes he did. Their talk is eye opening and brings up a lot of points that any person who has secrets should think about. Whatever we think other people will think of us when our secrets are revealed, the truth is not always as bad as we think it is going to be. Sometimes we just need to take the plunge. Please give this story a read and please please be sure to comment and maybe we can get Tim to continue the story and let us know what happens.
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Another intriguing read from Tim. His use of the prompt he received is imaginative and well thought out. I felt so sorry for Frankie, he was just doing his job and he ended up entangled in someone else's mess. The police and DA try to reassure him but it is hard for him to understand what is happening. Tim leaves it up to the reader to decide on what happens at the end, so why not give it a gander and if you have time leave a comment for him. As always a highly recommended read
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Making Sense of Secret Gifts
Caz Pedroso reviewed Timothy M.'s story in 2016 - Secret Admirer Short Story
This is an incredibly sweet story. Tim makes the gifts a perfect match to Colin’s character and keeps the reader guessing about who is leaving the gifts until right near the end. The story will keep you reading and hoping that Colin gets his Happy Ending. Colin has been through so much and really needs to be reminded what its like to be wanted and loved. A wonderful tale of love and healing -
Yep, now they just need a plan to get ahead of her. Become the hunter, not the hunted. We'll have to wait and see what the bears say when they have all the facts. I don't think they will leave the family with no protection, but as i already said they have their own families to protect as well. I wish it worked that way. And I'm sorry I've missed the last couple of weeks, but some things were happening at home and they put me behind. I promise to get back to this as soon as possible. I think whatever the word limit there will be weird break off points. Whether the limit is 500-1000 or 1000-2000. Hopefully, I will get better at making what I want for each chapter fit into the word limit as I go forward. They may not know where but at least they know who now. Also, knowing what her powers are could help them to hide and not be found. Hopefully, the bears can help them with the plan and with how to execute it effectively. Thank you all for reading and commenting. I am sorry it took o long to reply and that I have missed a couple of weeks again. I had a few things to take care of and they have put me behind in my writing both on and off site.
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The bears will have to make the decision that is in their best interests and safety of their den. If taking in the family will put them or their families in danger they have no choice but to say no. I do think the kits will make the bear lean towards helping them./ But, that help may not include sanctuary due to the same things I mentioned to Gary above I don't know about Bears in particular. But, in most shifter stories children are to protected by any adults around, whatever their species. We'll have to wait and see Thank you, everyone, for reading and commenting, it means a lot and I am sorry it took so long for me to answer you all.
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You're lucky. Ali's school (and only her school) is on teacher strikes AGAIN! I've just had her home for half term, now she has another two days off. I'm so far behind it's not funny at the moment. Hope your writing goes well
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Lol, well, It's dreary here with a forecast of rain/thunderstorms today Hi Sam and how are today???
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I'm lucky, coz i live near at the seaside I get a cool wind off the sea. The temps here are at about 18c at the mo, so just warm.
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Hi Tim This chat thread sort of fell through the cracks I think. How are you??
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Until Cyril is really ready to see his relationship with Fred for what it is all Stuart can do is be there. It's the hardest thing in the world to watch a friend hurt and be hurt, but least he can make sure Cyril knows he has someone he can go to when he needs to. A very sad story, but very well done
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Beautiful story Tim
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Happy Birthday
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Loved it. The characters were great and their relationships with each other and as a group were well written and hot to read I will be checking out your others stories for sure. :
