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Parker's Birthday (Part 2)
Puppilull commented on Rip Skor's story chapter in Parker's Birthday (Part 2)
One thing, among many others, that I like about your story is that you don't shy away from the reality of things. Like the whole what goes in must come out... To me, I feel like I'm not only entertained but also educated. So thanks for continuing! Saw a new chapter up. Will get to it shortly! Happy New year! -
Tantalus is great! I'm so looking forward to a sequel.
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This just gets better and better! I want more!
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It was a great plan Mr Stevenson had. I'm glad the judge could be pragmatic and allow Andy to stay. It's a bit of suspense what's going to happen when they contact the police. It will be fun to see Kaz and Terry find out the latest developments. And how are they going to act in school? Great chapter!
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*insert gratuitously suggestive chapter title here*
Puppilull commented on Dayne Mora's story chapter in *insert gratuitously suggestive chapter title here*
Your careful work overhauling the shower scene didn't detract from the hotness of it for us readers. Wow! I'm really happy they finally got together. Yummy! -
Hmm... Who do we know who likes numbers..? More guessing! Just kidding!
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Haikus that mean 'Stay indoors'! LOL A very cozy picture, at least when you're on the inside looking out.
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In my defence, I feel I must point out I guessed all stories and it felt even stranger to leave mine empty. It irked my semester of order and symmetry. So it wasn't technically a guess. LOL
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I heard it yesterday and feel like I must wrote a story based on it. So very good!
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I'm thinking about doing a little remodeling and see if I can make (I didn't even name the poor guy) a bit more believable. It was a romantic, silly story, but maybe it could be something else. Thanks for reviewing!
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Chapter 43 Good Dreams
Puppilull commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Chapter 43 Good Dreams
Sometimes, just sometimes us lawyers are good to have close by! I think how you described his parents as their reaction to Zander not only having a boyfriend but a very damaged boyfriend showed just how wisely Andy has chosen to give his heart. Hopefully, Mr Stevenson has a plan. A foolproof one. I don't want Andy and Zander separated for even a day. -
Temptation is a bitch! And they can't even speak. Will it be a loooong journey to Pallas? I kind of hope so. Also, I want to say you always make me laugh with your use of language. Sentences like these make me love your stories: 'He could also fit my whole head in his mouth, we’d tried it once. The chick watching almost fainted. It was hilarious.' I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Will they find a way to talk? What really happened to Senna?
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And you finished just in time for Christmas! Even though the title is ominous, I'm really looking forward to Zone wars. A revolution is upon us?
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Poetry Prompt 3 Lyrics
Puppilull commented on Drew Espinosa's story chapter in Poetry Prompt 3 Lyrics
Just hold onto your dream! And keep doing the poetry prompts! -
You are right, it does need a bit of polishing. I rushed myself and the story paid the price. I'll go over it again and try to finish what's been left hanging. Thanks for the insightful words. Thanks for reviewing!
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You're welcome! A little Christmas special seemed in order. God jul! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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I don't think there is a cure, but getting a family will hopefully ease their minds and give them time to enjoy their love. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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Things That Don't Interest Straight Guys
Puppilull commented on Dayne Mora's story chapter in Things That Don't Interest Straight Guys
Old wounds opened at the wrong time. Or the right one. Hard to tell just yet. Very hot chapter either way. -
In romance, almost anything is possible. But yes, it is perhaps asking a bit much of readers and Habibi to forgive something like that. He decided to take a chance. Thanks for reviewing!
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A small glimps, but I have no actual knowledge about this. Purely fantasy and I suspect strongly things wouldn't be this smooth for them. Living a secret life can be hard, but I hope Sayed is right about change being around the corner. Thanks for reviewing!
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Sexy beast! I like that, even if I think Sayed would raise an eyebrow at that characterisation. Thanks for reviewing!
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Life isn't black and white, more shades of grey. And not always with naughty results... You have to gambke to win, even if that leaves you open to lose. Thanks for reviewing!
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You're right. It was rushed towards the end, mainly due to my own stubbornness to enter the contest. I should rework it to make it lesd 'insta-love'. Thanks for reviewing!
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What lengths will we go to for a chance at love? Some further than others. I'm not sure I'd be as forgiving, but maybe... Thanks for reviewing!
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I think he pretty soon realised he was very wrong, but didn't want to break the spell they were under. Rafiq gave him a nudge in the right direction. Thanks for reviewing!
