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So beautiful how they start to unmask themselves physically and mentally, being Wade and Peter instead of Deadpool and Spiderman. Way to go, Peter! Being brave and daring to listen to himself, letting nothing stop him.
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This budding love is so sweet! I can remember being at that stage, everything so new and uncertain but exciting.
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Andy is getting so brave! Swimming, telling Zander about his past and then daring to get physical to how his love. Coming a long way and all because he knows people will catch him if he falls. Not only Zander, but Garret and Monica. Terry and Kaz. He's got his little village now.
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Wade has such a vulnerable quality to him. I'm happy for him, getting to realise this dream he has of Peter. Being touched and accepted isn't something that happens to him all that often, I guess. Peter's confusion is very sweet.
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What a kiss! What an amazing kiss!
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Wade is so desperately lonely. I just want to give him a hug!
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He, he... If I were Spiderman, I'd be pretty creeped out by those pyjamas...
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Nobu pretends to be in control, but I have a feeling he will discover it won't be easy to try and use Viko to please his father. All those feelings they have will come crashing out. Viko already struggles. I agree with drP. The entendre was amazing. Very witty!
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Oh, cliffhanger supreme! A chapter worth waiting for. So what will Merrick do now? Can he save Jenson? I'll be chewing my nails till the next chapter.
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He, he... I see the fluffy stuff sneaking in there. Well, if you ignore the bullets flying and the blood...
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Since it's your story, Thorn, and I love your work, I decided to give it another try. Also, Tim did a pretty good marketing job... I may not get all the references but I'll just go with the flow. After all that's one of the things I like most about your writing, that flow that makes stories seem effortless. So far I'm not disappointed! That line 'Stay in school' had me laughing!
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Poetry Prompt 8 - Quatrains
Puppilull commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Poetry Prompt 8 - Quatrains
Well, being a quart polar bear I actually like the snow. But I can relate to your poems nonetheless, since even I eventually long for spring. There's only so much cold a person can take... -
This will be interesting! I would find it so difficult to be limited to 1000 words. Especially with scenes of bdsm nature. I tend to get carried away... It will be fun to see what happens to Daniel!
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Andy has nightmares again. Possibly his mind telling him it's time to deal with things. I think the therapist is doing a great job and Andy is very brave to dare look at these ugly events in his past. Beautiful ending to it, with Zander showing how mature he is. And how much he loves Andy.
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I do hope Tareth is ok! Him just disappearing is ominous. If Kye could have just one friend things wouldn't be so dire. Now, he's so lonely it's heartbreaking.
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Matt's Rant -- What Does That Make Me?
Puppilull commented on Rip Skor's story chapter in Matt's Rant -- What Does That Make Me?
That was quite a statement. I'm not sure I agree with you on all points though. Granted, there are differences between men and women. If these are due to nature or nurture, I don't know. I do feel there are enough differences between individuals in the group men as there are in the group women. To me, saying "Men are like this and women like that" is problematic, since there are always exceptions who then perhaps end up feeling like freaks for not being 'a man'. Then again, a young person (such as our narrator) is perhaps more prone to such categorization. That said, I think this chapter deals with another important issue. Labels. Why are people so often hung up on labels? Worth thinking about for many of us, me included. End of my rant! -
Now this was great to wake up to this dreary Monday! The Metaverse expanding like any good universe should! I hope you write more. So interesting to see your take on the guys.
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I'm happy you thought it flowed. I find that's one of the toughest challenges, to achieve flow in another language. And you're right. It's a pretty big realisation... Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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Poetry prompt 7 - Blank verse
Puppilull commented on Puppilull's story chapter in Poetry prompt 7 - Blank verse
Since I wrote both the story and the poetry, I guess it is really me talking. But if you read the vampire story, certain aspects might make more sense. If you want more personal, read chapter 5 or chapter 7 (beware of blushing from that one... and don't miss the music to go with it). Thanks for reading and reviewing! -
I find it strangely endearing that Indie's ex isn't a drop dead gorgeous guy, but kind of regular. Says a thing or two about Indie. His first love and practically best friend. Of course it would hit him hard. Looking forward to see how Preston handles thing now...
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Oh, I like their little dance. I very much look forward to the next stage of this tango. BTW, the straight girl/gay man thing? Some have very elaborate theories *cough Meta cough* on this, but to me it's very simple. What's hotter than one hot guy? Two hot guys! What's hotter than that? Two hot guys getting busy! Very simple! Any questions? (There is a "turn" towards the end that is still in present tense. When Preston talks about the handjob. Just so you know.)
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There can never be enough hugs in the world! *hug*
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Chapter 47 Is This Normal?
Puppilull commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Chapter 47 Is This Normal?
Andy wanting to discuss his feelings with dr O'Shea is a major break through! He's thinking about hus reactions and feelings and is learning to handle them. And wow for Zander coming out like that! Honesty will set you free. -
I thought the boys needed a bit of closure, even if i'm not sure this was the final chapter. If another prompt strokes me the right way, they might come back. I don't want to say goodbye... Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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It's so interesting to read reviews! I (knowing where the guys were headed) just saw this as a Little romantic fairytale, but it seems to have impacted on you readers a bit differently. I love it! I try to keep it a bit fun too and I'm glad you enjoyed those moments. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
