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That's so low, using Eddie! Grr! He can't say no to mother, but I think he knows something is wrong. Where will they find his phone? An attempt at misdirection?
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Thank you! That pocket watch was supposed to be a lost wallet, but when I wrote the story it suddenly changed. Weird how the brain can do things on its own.
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Thank you! I just couldn't resist when this story more or less attacked me demanding to be written.
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Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it. I wanted to make us feel for him. He's so lonely... Also, thanks for the edit.
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Thank you! So glad you liked ut! Pretty intense cuddling. I'm not into blood play, but this kind almost seems tempting.
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Thank you! Guess who else was curious about George...? A certain author who likes to torment us. Great minds think alike... It's very tempting to write more. I'll listen to my brain and see what happens.
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Thank you! I'll see if I get struck by inspiration again soon. Hopefully I do. This was so much fun!
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Thank you! I felt the need to give us mere humans back a little bit of power after being overpowered by all those hunky vamps last week. I'm glad you liked him. He really is kind of cute..
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Thank you so much! I wanted it to have a warm feeling to it, so I'm glad I got that across. Expanding...? Now that you mention it...
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The warm water cascaded over my head and down my back. A feeling of relief was spreading through me. I had a slight headache, a soft pounding located just behind my eyebrows. Did I really drink that much last night? I tried to remember the night before, but somehow I drew a blank. Leaving the office was there. Going to my favorite bar was clear. After that… Nothing. I stepped out of the shower and reached for my towel. Something caught my eye and I glanced down at my left arm. I froze. What wer
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When you think all is lost, maybe that's when you find what you're looking for. This is the story of Levi, an unusual vampire, and Matt and George, the men he loves.
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Nathan's disappointment is just cutting my heart. And Josh is clueless. At least he's a gentleman. Kind of serious for someone so young. I understand if Kate was surprised. I'm a bit pissed off at people questioning Kate just because she was horny. Yuck to that! A woman doesn't have to be a virgin to be "worth it"...
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Aaahh... I can totally relate to Vincent's reaction when he saw that little flashing light. I've never fainted, but that is an amazing moment. First contact... I wonder how Dillon will take that piece of news. And Lor doesn't seem to get it yet. Maybe he didn't consider that a possibility?
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I do hope that's Lor and the gang. Not his idiot father showing up... Those brutes might get a taste of magic.
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Sounds like a good Friday! Just be sure to focus a little on school too, young man! (Sorry, the mom in me just had too...)
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Nick's Night Out - Prompt 438
Puppilull commented on comicfan's story chapter in Nick's Night Out - Prompt 438
I'm immediately curious to know more about these two, which means I liked it! But I understand you can't turn every prompt response into a full story. I like adi's suggestion though... Your story (and the prompt) inspired me to write one myself. A little late, but it might turn up next week. If I don't get stage fright... -
Poetry prompt 3 - Lyrics
Puppilull commented on Puppilull's story chapter in Poetry prompt 3 - Lyrics
Thank you! They felt very true to me, which is scary. So I'm glad you liked them. -
This is so nerve wrecking! Where is Wyatt? Could it be someone mommies dearest hired? Or is it someone else completely? Who is Marc's dad? Could he be useful? So many questions! I'll stay tuned for the next chapter.
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Chapter 7 Prompt #3 Lyrics-Earl Grey Tea
Puppilull commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 7 Prompt #3 Lyrics-Earl Grey Tea
Life's too short for not being spontaneous and impulsive! Small battle won... He, he. I suspect you didn't put up much of a fight. Cherish those moments! -
Poetry prompt 3 - Lyrics
Puppilull commented on Puppilull's story chapter in Poetry prompt 3 - Lyrics
I'm glad these are your favourites. They are the ones that are most me, so it's much more personal. The others are more observations from a safe disrance. This is my reality. Both of them. Thanks for your review! -
Poetry prompt 3 - Lyrics Emotional… Rasping beard on my shoulder blade His strong arms encircling Warm breath feathers over my neck He’s my fortress of love Feet padding over wooden floor Tiny arms encircling Warm breath feathers over my neck I’m her tigress of love Reality… Warm, tangled sheets suffocating Sharp elbow in my face Both stampeding for the bathroom He showers forever… Token breakfast on the table Kids argue over where to sit Rushing all out
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The difficulties of long term relationships... When you realise just loving one another isn't enough and communication has ground to a halt. I hope they make it. Vegas, baby!
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And we seem to be reviewing at the same time too! I fear I might be too concise to really get to the true emotions, but it's much easier to follow the form. Otherwise, I think I would get performance anxiety... Thanks for reviewing!
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Quite the tempest within you describe. Also a force of nature. I'm glad it ends with a promise of "spring". I like the use of "leaves" in both the first and the last tanka. Ties it all together.
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1 Chirping bird mid chase Across deepening blue sky Captures the late fly 2 The child cries in pain Blood trickles on warm asphalt A naked knee scraped
