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    I love this movie! It's such a beautiful and believable love story.
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    It seems I've gone nuts in a creative frenzy... LOL! Thanks for featuring my prompts!
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    Chapter 10

    Puppilull commented on craftingmom's story chapter in Chapter 10

    Well, if the cat's getting out of the bag next chapter, I'd better guess my heart out now then! All signs indicate MD and it was perhaps a neat trick to touch the letter in front of the officers and thereby explaining possible trace evidence. However, I suddenly had the feeling the butler did it! The unmarked envelope, long term service to the family means he knows the brother as well. But I'll still put my money on mum...
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    It's difficult to figure out why Nathan came over like that after ignoring Josh. Did he finally decide they had to talk? Too bad he doesn't have much practice in dealing with people. I'm sure Josh would have talked to him if he had asked.
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    Poor Nathan having such a crush on Josh, who isn't exactly thinking about the mixed signals he's sending. Sure, he can't help Nathan kissing him, but snuggling up to him again in the morning might not be his greatest idea.
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    Good that they managed to talk things over. They seem to me almost like kids playing house. They try to be grown up and behave perfectly, but they are still so young and naturally can't handle that pressure without a few cracks. Jason has some serious issues, if he is that easily rattled.
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    So nice to see another poem! The theme made me feel a bit sad, since you seemed so disappointed in someone. Disappointed but also wiser. Realising you have to choose your battles. Sometimes, you just can't win...
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    Those were very kind words! I'm a singer and matching the music and lyrics was hard, but I actually sang it for myself quite a few times. I missed the music part at first, so I had to rewrite it quite a bit. That however helped. I worked at it more and toned down the personal/private aspects a bit. I hope a little of the physical aspect remained though! I'm sorry if I embarrassed you, but I felt I couldn't stay in the safe zone of birds and pasta. To me, it seemed quite neutral, but discussing it with a male friend I see your point. Then again, it's supposed to be me, so maybe it's a good thing it doesn't sound too male? That would have meant I had chickened out again.
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    Thank you! This was by far the hardest. Possibly because I don't think I got it. I think I need to play around more with this to get a feel for it. And no one should be forced to swallow eggs!
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    Thank you! What a review race! I see what you mean with the start and stop. I think that's kind of how I usually do poetry. Sort of staccato. It would be interesting to try and challenge myself and do something different. Also, I was counting syllables like crazy...
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    Thanks for your input! It's great to have your view on them. I did think the "I" ban concerned me as a writer and not that the poem itself should be void of people. So thank you for pointing that out.
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    Thank you! Your encouragement and enthusiasm make me want to fo them all! I try to follow the "rules" so I can learn something. I in fact now finally understood a scene from the Simpson's! Lisa sneaking in to a poetry reading in college and a few guys stand up shouting "Basho" with those letters painted sports fan style on their chests. So learning all the time...
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    Epilogue

    Puppilull commented on LieLocks's story chapter in Epilogue

    I'm torn here. I understand Shay and Malachy making their plan, but for Shay to trick him into believing Sasha remembered is so very low. His hope from being on speaking terms with Sasha can explain him not getting angry, but it's still a shitty thing to do. After all Nick did for Shay... I also hope for more! I love your stories and these guys. Even Malachy... Thanks for letting us read
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    Thanks! Since I sort of was a bit daring, I'm glad you liked it. It's very close to me...
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    Whoever takes your fancy... I would go with Isaac, but you knew that already... Thanks for reviewing and the wow.
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    Pushing a few boundaries. I'm glad you liked it. Poetry is supposed to be close to the heart, close to the writer. I decided to chance it.
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    Prompt 438

    Puppilull commented on Puppilull's story chapter in Prompt 438

    Thank you for giving me so many ideas to continue with! I must admit the little grey cells have started working. We'll see if the plot bunny turned plot drill sergeant starts to yell in my ear again soon.
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    My eyes blinded from the light To just feel, suspending sight Over me hands travel By firm hands I unravel Softest leather my restraints Wanted hurt my body paints Soft sheets soothe the sharp sting Our games making bodies sing In the night we come true I give myself so free to you
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    Such a sweet , sweet ending! I really like your guys!
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    I planned to recommend this story, Painted blue, but you beat me to it. It's very good, with both humour and heat. Read it!
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    A puff pastry poetry prompt! Now you're making me hungry... Thanks for reviewing!
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    This was a struggle, so I opted for simple. Still not sure if I understood it. Will you follow? It's like "Challenge accepted!" for me now, thesr prompts.
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    Bacon fried to careful crisp Eggs, then cheese that’s grated Add some pepper to the mix Then the pasta’s plated
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    Prompt 438

    Puppilull commented on Puppilull's story chapter in Prompt 438

    Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it and reviewed. He's kind of sweet, my vampire.
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    Prompt 441

    Puppilull commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in Prompt 441

    Oh no! Tim bad! Tim bad! We don't fry other people's brains...
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