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    JACC is right, it was a nice chapter! It moved smoothly and highlighted the growing relationship between Owen and CJ. I'm glad Owen put his foot down about paying for lunch. CJ's usually a quick learner. And there was only one (I think) asshole.
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    Hey Lisa! Thanks for the review! You're right about Chuck. We'll get into his head with his POV from time to time. Now we just have to stop Matty from drooling over fresh meat. Sam will come up with something good. Actually he'll give us a couple shocks on Sunday. But first David has to survive a date with Lanni and a trip to Syracuse.
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    Chapter 6

    skinnydragon commented on CarlHoliday's story chapter in Chapter 6

    This was cute and clever and very tongue in cheek! And even though this took place a long time ago, the ugly dwarfs still don't like same-sex marriage.
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    pure evil
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    Can We Talk?

    skinnydragon commented on Robert Rex's story chapter in Can We Talk?

    A great chapter Rex! You portray the action easily and make it very real. Neat talent. The portrait of Benoit was brilliant. I could actually (dis)taste him. Now we just have to worry about what's going to happen on the patio!
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    Hey jess, thanks for the review and comments! Your deduction is quite correct. We'll see quite a bit of Chuck. Strange David thought he kissed Sam, when it seemed from the narrator (who btw is also David) that Sam kissed him! Homemade pesto in the freezer is the perfect backup plan. Plus, with pesto, homemade is the only way to go. I have no idea what they put in those little jars on the store shelves.
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    Hey mg thanks for the review! Aw ...the van was probably just a florist delivery. But Sam took note. And Sam doesn't take anything for granted. whew
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    Hey Parker, thanks for all your wonderful questions! You realize, of course, I can't answer any of them But I want it on the record here and now the 'nuclear option' we'll read about several chapters forward was written by me MONTHS ago and was not inspired in any way by your review today. You have enough on your plate writing AtoZ without adding ideas to Twoey too!
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    Thanks for the review Carlos! Pissed off David is like the opposite of the kid who thinks he's always in control. Maybe it's the REASON he's gotta be in control ...haha.
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    Hey Lisa! Ewwww is right! Unfortunately, it IS a possibility. Tommy's Mom does seem to be following Enos pretty closely. Erik is definitely on the offensive. It'll be interesting to see what happens, especially if David gets distracted by his war with the Angels of Murky.
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    Hey Lisa, thanks for the comments! David volatile? Wait till chapter 60! In all fairness, David isn't the only one in denial. Twoey often states David is straight, but he's waiting - for what? If David is straight, there's nothing to wait for.
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    Hey Lisa, thanks for your comments! - I see you're on a reading binge tonight ...hehe. I think the betrayal David feels is that Gary tried to interfere with his life. They seem to have a 'hands off' relationship with each other. So it didn't really matter if Gary was fooled or not. To David, he shouldn't have done what he did, period. David IS tempted to crash the Bible Study. Unfortunately, the option is still on the table.
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    “Sometimes, you have to get angry to get things done.” - Ang Lee *** All there was drilling into my mind, was the thought of that slimy bastard in my room! I was still so pissed this morning I let Gary do all the talking on our run. I got my Twoey naked call. But today I was all business. I had too much anger to do the usual joking. “Erik will tutor you today and then Friday because I'll be getting ready for the dance. Gary and I are gonna pick up Lanni and Mel and grab something to eat a
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    July 2009

    skinnydragon commented on CarlHoliday's story chapter in July 2009

    Haha ...I was wondering how you were going to wrap it up. Of course reading it this late, I knew it only had 14 chapters. As I said before, I'm usually not into stores with magic, were-creatures and vampires ...definitly never zombies! Although there are a few notable exceptions ...not zombies. That being said, Josh was fun to follow through his tangled journey. I enjoyed this a lot. Gosh, I guess that means I'll have to sample one of your latest now!!
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    Chapter 6

    skinnydragon commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 6

    Not that he's avoiding it, but Rayn certainly has his work cut out for himself. It's not only Daniel. I think, on their own, Rayn could figure out how to live with him, make him more comfortable and independent. The major problem is with Daniel's sister, I think. While Sara has his best interests in her heart, she might be not approaching Daniel in exactly the right way. What's worse, she seems to be approaching Rayn/Daniel in exactly the wrong way. A great chapter in a great story!
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    Anxiety is right, and it's certainly not over yet! Swimming anxiety. It might actually be a good thing so many top swimmers were mentioned in that post. It'll be more difficult to scrap them all. It could work in Zander's favor, especially with the coach he has. Track anxiety. Kaz might help out a lot here. Especially since the team has met and encouraged Andy. School anxiety. This is a big unknown, the reader doesn't know much about the school yet. A Great chapter Parker! It showed lots of Andy development too. He'll probably need that strength.
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    Late October

    skinnydragon commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Late October

    Thanks for the review Carl! I think Toph is surprised at the relationship developing with Steve, and certainly has feelings for him now. It'll be interesting to see if he lets it develop (which could change him) or goes back to being an outside observer. You're correct in believing Steve could be the key for Toph. Gary is still an enigma. We don't know for certain who he is, even if we suspect.
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    Hey Lisa! Yes, you're right about the decision. But at this particular juncture, his logic is pretty strong. Whether he acts on it (we know how he avoids action)or broods on it, we'll have to discover. Also David/Erik/Twoey feels like trouble. At least if it were Matty, he'd suggest a threesome
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    March 2009

    skinnydragon commented on CarlHoliday's story chapter in March 2009

    It looked like there was an impossible three-way conflict building here with Jan and David. At first I thought it was the cause of David's suicide attempt. But then discovered it was his family. It still seems like bad times are approaching.
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    Wow Gary, nothing gradual about that beginning! Although we could sort of piece Carly's (or Jared's) problem as the chapter unwound, nothing prepared us for its conclusion. Great job there! So Craig has a lot on his plate right now, including memories. A great chapter and I'm sure it will be a great story too!
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    LISA!!! You're the only reviewer to even mention David's "everything's fine" phone conversation, which was so off the rails - it demonstrated so very much about his mental state. Tommy is a force of his own, as we're coming to discover. The mirror his brother needs - let's hope. Thanks for the great review!
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    Early November

    skinnydragon commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Early November

    You're right spikey. There's a lot of beginnings but not many endings from this chapter ...but there's a whole empty year for Toph to fill The Toph/Steve thing does seem less worrisome than it did in the last chapter. I guess we'll have to see how it plays out. Thanks for the great comments, as always!
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    Early October

    skinnydragon commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Early October

    Haha ...don't worry Carl - nothing about Toph happens very fast. Of course, as we've seen a couple times so far, when it does, the abruptness startles everyone! Thanks for your terrific comments! I'm glad you're enjoying Toph!
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    Thanks for the comments Lisa! We really aren't privy to Tommy's world. I think somewhere I threatened to write a story called "Tommy's World" - but don't worry, I'm OK now. Sunday WILL be important in lots of ways. David fight? You know he never does that - he tells us all the time.
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    Chapter 6

    skinnydragon commented on Zenith's story chapter in Chapter 6

    This chapter moves the story into a more complex territory. - Which is a good thing. And, in a way, it gives Jerry more options when dealing with the face-to-face he inevitably was going to endure with Rob. And that, as soon as you post it, is going to happen NOW. Is the story about to begin?
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