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    Early October

    skinnydragon commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Early October

    Thanks AC! As usual, your review has me realizing my subconscious does things my conscious mind is, as usual, unaware. Yes the faces. How could I not have realized it? But you're right, I wrote it exactly that way. Does it count I was in the dark? Hehe. Chapter 4 was so natural to write. Chapter 5 is another matter entirely. Maybe I'll be satisfied in 2020 or something
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    First Decision

    skinnydragon commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in First Decision

    I loved your interpretation of "ring" in the prompt. Your response made my morning ...aside from the coffee, that is
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    Well of course. Andy couldn't move any degree forward without his 'confession' to the therapist. He's been hiding, running, avoiding and shrugging. Finally he's confronting. His controlling the 'date' and developing new skills under Kaz reveals the spark in him we always knew was there. How did I just know they would revisit the spot Zander's first observed Andy? Poor Zander. I think we overlook how frustrating it must be for him to be so close to the object of his love each night, with his hormones surging, and keep it all in. Poor Zander. He is a saint, not just because he seems to know how to solve each of Andy's little dilemmas. Another insightful and rewarding chapter Parker! Thanks for sharing.
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    “Methinks you are my glass, and not my brother.” CoE - WS *** During our run, I found out Gary came in first and his JV also beat Dennis - Of course in Dennis, cuz it was an away race. I congratulated him and the win and mentioned it was probably ugly with all the hills. I told him we won. He was unnaturally quiet for the remainder of the time. When we were finished, he asked, “Why didn't you tell me you beat Jacobs?” “You know then, huh?” “Jesus David, for a smart guy you're a little th
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    Aletheia

    skinnydragon commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Aletheia

    Thanks for the neat comments AC! I haven't been inspired by any of the prompts since Aletheia, but maybe I'm simply uncomfortable with prompts. And now here you are gently prodding me to do another. Why are you always pushing me into alien waters? Are you a teacher?? [ Exit the dragon, stage right, petulantly stalking away. ]
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    Vanished

    skinnydragon commented on Sammy Blue's story chapter in Vanished

    Finally! An exciting and fast paced chapter. The twinnanigans are clearly over. Anyway, Margery to the rescue! (we hope) It seems Jacob has run away, although I am a little concerned about the blood in his room. Where will he run? Home? Why not? Of course we don't know how far this new military school is. So Sammy, don't keep us in the dark tooooo long!
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    12 was great with tons of new stuff to think about! Great writing dayne! I know I laugh waaaay too much when I read it.
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    Chapter 4

    skinnydragon commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 4

    This is a very touching story, and well told. Daniel is multidimensional and you portray that lovingly and clearly. Thank you for sharing this with us!
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    Lyric #3.5

    skinnydragon commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Lyric #3.5

    Very Lyrical Parker, and lovely too! You are multi-talented
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    Well done Timothy! And well worth the loooooooooooooong wait. Speaking of long waits, Russ was more eager than anyone to get back since he knew the prize at the end of his yellow brick road. He was so frustrated with his brother and Chris, you could feel his impatience, even before we realized what it was for. Great writing there! Of course the love scene was ...lovely. The shoebox scene was especially touching, with the flashback. Nicely Done. Thanks so much for sharing this little gem with us!
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    Oooo the attack twink has suddenly become Indy's twingman! The car scene was priceless dayne!! As well as a visual of Cory and his posse descending on the club. I have a feeling we might not have seen the end of Jameson? Anyway another great chapter!!
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    Thanks for the review and insightful questions jess! No, David definitely believes he's not gay. "I'm not attracted to boys, only Twoey, etc." Of course, if he were to become attracted to ANOTHER boy, he might need to rethink. At least the closet door would open a crack to let in some light. We don't know what Tommy does or doesn't do yet. But we see how smart he is, so he might be aware of some things. We'll need to discover that as the story unfolds. Mike's visit is definitely important and crucial.
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    Thanks for the great comments Def! Hey, you're right! Since Mike and Twoey always considered themselves brothers, there really were three sets of brothers present ...even Jimmy and Cal (although Cal wasn't present). Sometimes Tommy seems wiser than his older brother. David should hang out with him more often, or at least ask for his advice. Mike's visit is probably something we should watch closely, for exactly all the questions you brought up. He MUST feel replaced, knowing Twoey gave the dollar to another boy!
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    Thanks for the review Parker! Yes, Mike's visit should prove interesting. You don't really believe Matty has any chance with David do you? I mean, TWOEY doesn't seem to have any chance and David actually admits he's in love with him! Biggy is growing up. We first met him when he crashed into Twoey at the park while he was stalking three cute girls, the day before the fight. Now he seems to be settling down nicely. I think David has been good for him, and I don't mean because of his fists ...although that might have gotten his attention
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    Thanks for the review Lisa! Wow! You covered a lot of ground - and were correct about so much of it! re: Josiah praying: wait for chapter 51 The Kathy breakup is right on schedule and we'll learn a thing or two. I don't think there's any going back for David as far as his feelings of love for Twoey. Now will he act on them as he SHOULD? Well, we've seen how easily he gets derailed.
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    I agree it was a well crafted chapter Gary! You took the day through Bodies POV so we could experience the growth and realization (in him) of just what he had here, both in his boyfriend and the supporting cast. The accelerated move-in date was the icing on the birthday cake. This feels like the concluding Nodie chapter. I know they'll be around, but the story seems ready to move on to what Geemeedee seems so itchy and eager to read about. Thanks for sharing!!
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    Thanks Def! Yes, Mike DID come out of the blue, didn't he. Going forward, he'll definitely be a factor in how things proceed with Twoey. We'll see how David reacts to Mike pretty soon
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    During our run I tossed out the question to Gary. “What if I told you this real deep secret about me I was holding in? Something you might not like about me. But I trusted our friendship and divulged it to you. Would you ever end our friendship?” “I don't think there’s anything about you which would affect our friendship.” “But Gary, what if it was something you couldn't possibly think of that was the secret? Like what if I murdered the pig-fucker of a pastor, cut up his body into little piece
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    This one's a little scary Comsie. Jimmy going postal? Or is everything in Billy's head? Although ...two happy chapters in a row was awfully unusual for you Anyway, I'll take Billy any way I can get him
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    Jesus, send it!! We're dying here
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    Ah! Winter is progressing at the same well-developed and humorous pace we've come to expect from you Carlos! As usual you've created a great sense of place. Also a little tension (naturally ). And then there's Owen ...love it! Thanks for this!
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    A great chapter Parker! I wonder if his squeaky clean status will help Andy come to grips with Uncle Ray at his therapy sessions. He has to face it before he can move on. Monica explaining gay sex was a hilarious scene! Humor is needed in this story every once in a while. Kaz will recruit Andy, for sure. Wow! If he wins a race, it will really do something for his self-esteem! Thanks for this!
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    Holy shit Michael! Are you serious? You binge read 53 chapters? I'm impressed, or maybe I should say I'm worried about your health ...hehe. I'm so glad you found Twoey and really glad you like it! 122 chapters could get tedious, but I try to keep it interesting. There's a lot going on, so some crisis or other always tends to get in the way of our star crossed lovers
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    Hey jess! Thanks for the comments! Mike DOES add a new wrinkle, doesn't he? Will he take over from David in caring for Twoey? Does he see David as a threat? Lots of possibilities, all revolving around Mike, who we haven't even met yet! Add Johnson and his cult to the mix, and David is sure to be distracted.
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    Thanks for the review Parker! You think Matty has designs on our little hero??? Bwahahaha!! Unfortunately, Putin and Johnson might make all this moot. I think we need to be worried.
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