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    Escape

    skinnydragon commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in Escape

    YUCK Val! Well written and very suspenseful but . . . YUCK Val! ...Hehe
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    Day and Night

    skinnydragon commented on Drew Espinosa's story chapter in Day and Night

    WooHoo! Finally made it to your story Drew!! Glad I did! Luke is super. He won't take Adam's knee jerk reaction as an answer. Let's hope Adam's love of literature has left him open to some original thought. Great ending. Actually the best you could write. Anything else would be anticlimactic. Thanks for sharing this!
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    A lovely chapter Parker! I never wanted it to end. Long? It should have been at least twice as long so Andy could have been happy twice as long! It ended with his beautiful prayer. Thanks so much for sharing!
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    Chapter 23

    skinnydragon commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 23

    I'm so glad JP is present. His calm demeanor and purposeful reflection will insist they TAKE NO PRISONERS!!
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    YAY chapter 23 up ...OK guys, put away the foil
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    Burning Bright

    skinnydragon commented on Renee Stevens's story chapter in Burning Bright

    Such a lovely story Renee. Such an interesting blackout. Throughout the first half, I was sure the migraine was going to somehow cause a blackout. Sweet ending. Thanks for sharing!
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    Thanks for the fine comments Def! I was chuckling along until I reached the last line, then I split a gut. If you really think about it though, the only person David could express his love vs. gay confusion to was Ginny, but only after he became comfortable with her -- and he did spill it all out! Now the shrink, and taking her advice, he did it again! David REALLY wants an answer. He's only hiding the feelings from his peers (perfectly natural) and Tommy's mother, bless her. Ginny's pretty slick, isn't she?
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    Thanks for your kind words jess! Aw ...I hope the boys aren't interfering with your work! You raise an interesting point about his room. I don't want to give anything away, of course, but stay tuned. Maybe David should become an author. He generates a lot of plots, doesn't he.
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    Chapter 1

    skinnydragon commented on Aditus's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Well done Adi! We know the love will rekindle. Maybe stronger, second time around. Thanks for this!
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    Thanks for the review CG, and for sticking with us too, even when David pissed you off. I appreciate that! So does he! Your wish is about to be granted re: Kathy. I think we all sort of see that coming, but it will have a few wrinkles -- of course
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    Thanks for the comments Parker! As Twoey's memory reassembles, his POV will expand, your wish will be granted.
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    Thanks for the support JB! David/Twoey thanks you too.
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    Devoted strength is watching over me. From the minute I got up all I thought about was the appointment. After our run, I told Gary, “I won't be walking home with you after practice because I have a doctor's appointment.” He grabbed my shoulders and looked me in the eyes. “Another one? David, are you sick or something? Is this why you've lost all the weight and fainted and everything?” Okay, how did he find out I fainted? Yeah, gossip town. I shoulda told him. First, we never have secrets and
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    Thanks for the comments jess! Yes, the Friday Knight was sort of a surprise. We've heard Martin's name every so often from the First Day of School, but who'd have thought!?! I think David knows exactly how he feels about Twoey. He's a master at suppressing those feelings though. This visit and realizing those feelings with Twoey right in front of him is what's causing his concern. Yeah, we'll meet the annoying kid pretty soon
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    For Andy

    skinnydragon commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in For Andy

    Lovely poem, Parker! It captured Andy's dilemma in a way which let us feel it. You can't ask for more.
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    Thanks for the comments Lisa! That one little visit caused an awful lot of pain. I wonder what the next one will bring David's control issue certainly must nave some deep psychological cause. It's really a symptom, isn't it.
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    Ah tim, another delicious tale (Reader beat me to the pun) and this one augmented Faris and James's family. This little Francis sounds like a firecracker and no doubt will be entertaining us with his exploits in the future. It's good Larry got his last licks in before he won't anymore. It's also good to see our boys haven't lost any of their love or sexiness toward each other. Thanks for sharing!
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    Thanks for reviewing jess! I think you've picked up on something about David. I always viewed him as compartmentalizing things in his life. I think it was Def in her review of idk which chapter, who saw a type of OCD, which is certainly possible. He misses Matty, as uber obvious as he is, I think because he belongs in the wrestler and PhysEd compartment. Once Matty moves into the friend compartment, assuming he does, THEN things could get a bit more interesting. But maybe by then David will have himself figured out ...hehe.
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    Well sh*t! Andy wasn't the only one to wake up happier this morning, all his readers were. Whatever happens next, Andy's life has changed, obviously. I have a strange vision of Zander shoveling the Abbotts out and then arguing with Andy over the pay. Zander, with his guilt over abandoning Andy to his 'father' isn't going to make the same mistake twice. Watch out Andy!! Thanks for this long awaited chapter (storywise) Parker!!
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    Well Robbie got into a bit more than he expected. At least he and we see a little more of what makes Alex tick. I'm certain things are going crazy at his house. The surely called Fran's house, with the storm and all. Now they know he's out in it somewhere, although maybe I'm wrong ...they haven't called Robbie, unless his phone is ruined. In any event, the next hour or so will be revealing for Robbie, whatever happens.
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    Thanks for the comments Def! You're right! Matty is a bit of a wild card, hehe ...in more ways than one! OMG if Matty ever knew about that fantasy!!! There's no doubt in my mind now that Twoey will recover his memory from that night. It's beginning to emerge, like a chick from an egg.
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    Thanks for the comments Jess. I think it's common for the lack of memory of a traumatic event, but it's usually temporary. We'll see if it starts returning, maybe in pieces. The cover-up will be a problem. It'll never completely work, but after a month or so passes, it'll be old news...or so they hope.
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    Thanks for the review Parker! David IS in a bit of turmoil right now, more so than his usual , especially with the growing Matty connection - not just the fantasy, we'll hope DR K. can help. I hope David doesn't break Twoey's heart, but It's a good guess he'll put pressure on it. Of course, in a way, Twoey is doing it to David TOO. It'll be interesting, anyway.
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    Eyes

    skinnydragon commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Eyes

    Thanks for the comments tim! I'm grateful you find it interesting!
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    Eyes

    skinnydragon commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Eyes

    Thanks for the comments Lisa! sorry to leave you sad
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