Jason Rimbaud

I'll take it.

Vers guys are my favorite too.

Not sure if anyone read my topic where I wondered if you should force your characters to have a happy ending or if you should let the story take you to the natural conclusion in spite of wanting a different ending. Not sure if I believe in happy endings, unless you are at a massage parlor, and then only if its a hot Asian twink with red hair.

I really liked the conversation between Tyler and Tyson, being honest and putting yourself out there is really good advice for some many things in your life. As for the sex, how do you have a part two? Thankfully all sex is now out of the picture, the two boys are going to decide to wait to get married before having any more sex. And Brandon promised his father that he wouldn't have sex again until after he graduated. So upcoming a lot of blue balls. J

So I would so respect the fuck out of you if you did end it right there. That would be some amazing gorilla art! That's something I would do for sure if I was a good writer.

So, the author has finally brought us to the part where it becomes clear that Ray is the "big paws" the title suggests. I never thought about someone shifting for the first time, having a tail and four legs, it would all be confusing. I guess it wouldn't be instinctually? Made me wonder and I enjoyed that scene muchly. Don't wolves mate for life? Why would the gods/fates/ancestors have Ray & Gabriel mates when they can't make little "thems"? It's not like the heros who all they have to do is drink and swap a little bit of blood? How do the villains pop out more baby bad guys? Not a tongue and cheek question, I really don't know how that works as this is my first shifter dodad.

Sex isn't as interesting to write about as exploring the motivations behind the sex drive. And since I've always wanted to write a full blown mystery story, I'm dipping my toe in that pool. Though this isn't a mystery per se, I am exploring that genre to see if I could attempt one in the future.

Sometimes when you are mad at someone, especially someone that is such a huge part of your life, you still need to be close to them, the familiarity is comforting. Devin might be childish in how he's dealing with his problem, but he still wants to be close to his friend. And since Tyler is dealing with his own BS, he doesn't have the bandwidth to focus on Devin. Plus he knows that since Devin is staying close, the Brandon issue weighs more heavily on his little horny mind. J

I always liked the name Jesse, it was a toss up choosing my name, it was almost Jesse Rimbaud, but I thought Jason Rimbaud flowed better. It seems to me, that Matt seems to be everyone's focus, I always liked the person Matt is based on, he was always in the middle of everything.

When have the Professor been accused or admitted to visiting a glory hole? Are you getting Brandon's earlier admission confused with Professor Shithead? . The other statements are interesting, I wonder how many of them are accurate?

Finally little pieces of the puzzle are starting to emerge as Tyler rushes blindly ahead. It seems that Matt, Tyson, Isabella, and Jesse have a shared history that no one really likes discussing. But we don't know exactly how. Hopefully Tyler starts putting all these pieces together and the image becomes more clear. As for that damn river in Egypt, D-Nile is just a bitchy mistress isn't she?

Tyler is turning into quite the bottom isn't he? That's what I would do, or have done, whatever Or the police!!! hahahaha Jake is a precocious little boy with a different sense of humor isn't he? He seems smart and well adjusted with a love of flowers that he got from Daniel. Maybe that little plant makes another appearance in later chapters...

Tyler was so focused on his biology homework, he nearly jumped out of his chair when a sudden knock on the door startled him shortly after 6:30. He called out, “Come in.” His father walked in with a big smile and a wave as he said, “Hiya son.” Tyler rubbed his eyes and closed his text book. He swiveled his chair around and asked, “How was work?” “Stressful, the closer the trial date comes, the more nervous the junior partners get,” His father said with a shrug. Tyler yawned

But isn't that to on the nose? Or am I just trying to throw everyone a red herring?

Someone else had commented in this same vein, I'll respond again the same manner, where were you when I was writing this. That's such a better person than the one it is. J

They seemed to have moved on from worrying about safe sex... Why 21 chapters of foreplay? Because this story isn't a tale of romance, this is a story about the end of the tale. When redemption is finally attained, where secrets become light, where the real protagonists get their happy ending that for the next five stories I take it away one brick at a time. *evil laugh* Or it's about sex,

Thank you! I hope you like what's in store for our trio of hero's. Once we get Brandon and Tyler naked in the same bed, then the real story begins. Think of Part One as a prelude to the affair. J

Sorry, I misspoke, two more chapters to my favorite scene in Tyler Dilemma, and all your questions you had in your comment will be answered by the end of part one, which is only seven more chapters. Other questions people might have, will be addressed in part two. Tyler does utilize his own Alexa, and who knows what types of fun he can have now that he has a taste for mars and rocketships.

Tyler is slowly working through his dilemma's, one by one. The whole Devin of it all, we shall see what his issue is. I will say all your questions are answered in part one. And there are only 21 chapters in part one. The very first scene i ever wrote for Tyler's Dilemma, happens in Chapter Sixteen. That one scene was the seeds of the entire story. I am so excited for people to read it. But judging many of my favorite scenes haven't even been mentioned in the comments thus far it will probably go unnoticed as well. J

By the time class was over, Tyler’s mood somehow shifted even darker. He would need a lot of help if he would have even the slightest chance of passing the hardest class at Glacier Bay High. As far as he could remember, he had never met Professor Robinson before but there was something familiar about the man. Maybe it was his voice or the way he held the marker as he wrote on the whiteboard. Whatever it was, that familiarity nagged at the corner of his mind. Maybe he had met the man at one

I see by your profile that you are new to GA, so I'll allow you some wiggle room in the absurdity of your above statement. You have yet discovered the silliness that permeates nearly everything I do. I will give you down to earth, I'm self aware enough to know that I'm not so humble. But it's humbling to hear that you believe otherwise. . Self depreciation is the best tool to use because online no one can see my twinkling eyes or the smirk that is plastered on my face. And due to the fact I'm blunt at times, I use that to clue the reader that I am not being serious or mean in my reply. I am not formally educated, true, I do not know the rules of grammar nor do I really care to learn the ends and outs. You were right(write) when you said I do care about learning. And I completely agree with your explanation of changing was to is. And more importantly I understood your explanation However, Devin disagrees with you. 🤪 Readers like you, if I was a talented writer I would have made it clear, readers like you who know more about the technical side of writing scare me. Which is pretty much everyone on this site. Going back to my earlier statement, I'm self aware to realize I am not humble. My fear with writing is this technical side only, I don't worry if the story is good, or if the characters are amusing, I think my writing speaks for itself in that regard. I just don't want to be exposed as a poor writer. Which is why I rely on other people to clean up my incomplete sentences and dangling participles. I also love to end sentences with though or to. I also know that is not proper but I like to. I love to argue/debate the ins and outs of nearly everything. When I find someone who stands up and says what they mean in a wonderful way, I gravitate towards them. Praises don't help me, pointing out that was should have been an is, helps in understanding structure. Now when I make that mistake, I'll do so knowing I am wrong. It's the little things I find pleasure in. (did it again) And on another story, me and another person went off about wind direction and how fast could a cloud get from here to there, it was amazing completely pointless so I understand the enjoyment of doing deep dives with as something as silly as one character shoving a marker up their ass. Welcome to GA and as long as you can put up with my silliness and absurdist behavior, we shall get along fine.

I have all the patience that I want at any given time. I do love your story and I no longer say the "W" wolf word, I am only using Shifter in your honor. See you in the next chaps

Seems like we are finally getting some answers, though I am sad that Ray did not display his whore(ish) nature with the re-alived hero in front of the villains. But the day(night) is still young and who knows what mischief our pawn could make before night(dawn). And on a side note, I'm only asking for a friend, is Big Paws a euphemism for fangs? Like, wow grandmother, what big teeth you have? Can't wait to see our hero's fangs! I'm enjoying this immensely. J

Thank you for your comment. You are the kind of reader that keeps me up at night, which is basically any reader on this site. I never graduated High School and my knowledge of writing is vast enough to fit in a thimble a child might wear to protect their tiny fingers from the needle. I have to look up what possessive determiners meant and after reading the definition and then looking at the examples provided, I still don't really understand what that means. That being said, I can tell you the context in which that statement was made. Devin wasn't referring to said marker up his personal butt, but in a sweeping broad statement that anyone that shoved a marker up their ass would be kind of gay. I'm confident you could point out where I am wrong in constructing that statement in that manner, I am not confident I would understand your explanation but you are welcomed to try if you don't mind banging your head against a brick wall. Imagine me as the dumbest student you ever taught, and then make it a bit more simpler when explaining it. In my meager defense, and probably not warranted, I understood that anything written between parenthesis does not need to adhere to the rules of grammar. (sorry, it was the only defense I could muster) All jokes aside, thank you for your comment, I'm just glad anyone likes my silly stories and if you continue to read, I'm sure there will be plenty more mistakes you can point out. And please do, I will correct those as they are pointed out. J (the moment you read this everyone understands and accepts that all mistakes are my own and not anyone else's fault)

Damn it, it should have said redacted by the author of this comment, there I go again messing things up.