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Part One: Bathroom Confession
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Bathroom Confession
What a great observation! I didn't even put it together in my head but that makes perfect sense. Why does everyone keep forgetting that Owen and Brandon was a thing. The beginning of that story is Captivated By Kai, coming to Glacier Bay soon. -
Part One: The Junkyard
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: The Junkyard
Tyler never does seem to learn, does he?" -
Part One: Senior Table War
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Senior Table War
It's a boy thing, one of my favorites as well. -
Part One: Son, You Stink
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Son, You Stink
My first time, I sat in the corner laughing uncontrollably, it was the worst feeling to be out of control. Who knew that I would go on to become a full blown addict, though I stayed away from hard drugs like pot, I preferred cocaine, pills, and occasionally heroin. Who knows where I would be if I would have become addicted to weed. *shudders* J ( who is very pro drug but very anti-pot) true story -
Part One: Son, You Stink
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Son, You Stink
Is that a dig against @Lee Wilson editing skills? 🤪 I'm pretty sure I'm far better off with him than anyone else you might have mentioned. 👌 -
Part One: Not A Fan Of Asian Food
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Not A Fan Of Asian Food
Brandon showered, he just didn't shower after AG47Fox, and his room was filthy. But the pizza thing, that's not cool. Sadly, for the rest of this tale, they will be oversharing in lots of different ways. I do enjoy writing these characters. The golden shower thing was just as a surprise to me as Tyler being the bottom. J -
Part One: Painting By Moonlight
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Painting By Moonlight
I’m not gonna lie. I might be too sober to get this one. -
Part One: Painting By Moonlight
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Painting By Moonlight
Sadly, I’ve never needed two hands to hold my pen -
Part One: Painting By Moonlight
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Painting By Moonlight
I’m very observant, watch out I’m always lurking about with my pen in hand, or something in hand. -
Part One: Not A Fan Of Asian Food
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Not A Fan Of Asian Food
I’m just glad the sex is out of the way and I can start focusing on their youth group activities for the local church.- 21 comments
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Part One: Rejection Is Never Easy
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Rejection Is Never Easy
My really good friend Christine. We’ve beeen friends for thirty years. -
Part One: Smells Like Paint Spirit
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Smells Like Paint Spirit
Can you imagine if I could even get the toilet paper for such a genius as Neil Simon. That would be awesome! J -
Part One: Not A Fan Of Asian Food
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Not A Fan Of Asian Food
What About Pizza? could have been the chapter title, but then I'd have to change....oh no, you won't get me to spoil things like suggesting a better title. Not me, I'm too street sweet wise... Does anyone want to see The Accountant 2, just saw an ad and it looks fun. Wow, it's funny when you write something and think you have it all mapped out and then someone suggest otherwise, it makes you rethink your life choices. J -
Part One: Not A Fan Of Asian Food
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Not A Fan Of Asian Food
Who knows what Monday brings, it's only Friday night, a lot can happened in two days. Hell, five chapters happen just on Saturday alone. For those of you keeping track, It was seven days ago that Brandon and Tyler first re-connected over a half full bottle of Jack Daniels. A lot has happened since then. Boy can I stretch out a story... J -
Part One: Not A Fan Of Asian Food
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Not A Fan Of Asian Food
Tyler's mother is very friendly and understanding, Brandon's not so much. I wonder if the two ever will meet? She did say Brandon was always welcome to stay over so who knows what can happen. Tyler surprised me when he became a power bottom, my original notes the two were reversed, it's funny how characters give you these little moments and it changes the entire story. J -
Tyler pulled out slowly and rolled over on his back. He looked at Brandon and said, “If you want, after I catch my breath, you can enter the cabin.” Brandon laughed and leaned over to kiss Tyler deeply for a moment. He pointed down and said, “I’m gonna need a minute or twelve to recharge myself.” Tyler reached over and felt Brandon’s cum soaked cock through the mesh jockstrap. He said in amazement, “You came without jerking off. I guess that means I did an okay job.” “An adequate
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Part One: Another Trip To Mars
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Another Trip To Mars
But there is a reason why I like him and his stories, a lot in common. Can I destroy Glacier Bay at the end? That would be epic -
Part One: Another Trip To Mars
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Another Trip To Mars
I know I asked this question before, what was the name of that story? @Lee Wilson doesn't know the ending of the story yet, he said he wanted to get there organically. So we'll see what he thinks when he reads it in a few months. -
Part One: Another Trip To Mars
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Another Trip To Mars
Think of this story as four Dilemma's, currently we have three left to solve. I really hope you continue to enjoy the ride as the mysteries deepen, and the stakes are raised. Isn't it always? Why does everyone believe that marriage is the beginning? *shudders* Does this mean you are a hot asian twink? Asking for a friend, and my friend might or might not make the sound boink when touched. I understand that sentiment and discussed it in greater detail Here if anyone is interested in my thought process regarding this subject. How can you stay true to the characters voices, the story you never wanted to tell, and vying for readers to trust that you will give them a wanted conclusion. One would hope that your characters are compelling enough, the narrative is conveyed in a manner that lays out the story in a way that the ending feels natural, right, and warranted. In terms of happy or sad endings, I trust that if the ending is real, then happy or sad the readers will accept it. If it feels forced to be sad or forced to be happy while the narrative has been dictating the other, I think the readers would feel cheated. It has been a struggle in my writing since the beginning. I think I've found balance but it's always a crap shoot isn't it. We'll see how well I stick the landing. If I am nervous about anything, I am nervous that the narrative will feel forced or unrealistic, as it pertains to the rules I created in this world. Anyway, enough of my internal craziness, up next is my favorite chapter in the whole story, I might even release it on Monday. -
Part One: Another Trip To Mars
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Another Trip To Mars
Whew, I was worried about this chapter. Not much to say, the first reply was nothing but spoilers. So I say, the sex isn't finished yet. So Devin, off page, received bad news about his left rear tire that has him out of sorts. When they were at the glory hole, Tyler dropped a pen and it punctured Devin's tires. The tire was insured for everything except a pen puncture. Again off page, Devin asked Tyler for the money for a new tire and Tyler said he'd only pay for it if Devin visited the glory hole. So when Devin agreed, he went inside and the person in the stall was Matt, wearing a sweater with a zipper down the back. This led to some confusion and Devin now has to live with a horrible diseased called Mattology. Its a rare but devastating disease that affects young males by having a perpetual case of the asshats. There is no known cure. I won't spoil anything aside from agreeing with Lee. Or did I write another chapter and fail to give it to him to edit. Sounds like something I'd do. . -
Part One: Another Trip To Mars
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Another Trip To Mars
So I babble during sex a lot of the time. I have uttered those exact words many times over the years. I think on those rare times where I'm the passive partner, I like to make my guy lose focus or break his rhythm by trying to make him laugh. I also blurt out things during sex that have nothing to do with what we are trying to accomplish. Sometimes it's just random movie facts, or once it was naming every movie I could think of where it showed full frontal. Michael Pitt in the Dreamers by far the best one. Anyway, too much about my life and on to the next chapter, where we find out the sound Tyler's peen makes when someone touches it. Another thing that is true to life. J -
Part One: I Have My Own Alexa?
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: I Have My Own Alexa?
Your only one chapter away from getting some of the answers you seek! The prevailing theory as of this moment is Professor Shithead was the one in the bathroom stall. We shall see if I made it that obvious or if there is another culprit lurking in Part Two. We have all agreed that as of this writing, Devin is an asshat, not a full blown asshole yet. We shall see if his status changes. J -
Death and Redemption, Pt. 2
Jason Rimbaud commented on Mike Carss's story chapter in Death and Redemption, Pt. 2
Sometimes all it takes is a spark to ignite change. With so much human dead, society at large have to be weary of burying entire generations. World War II killed in the neighborhood of 65 million people in six years. Granted it seems that the level of technology is swords, so the casualty would be lower, but to last a hundred years, that's a lot of wasted lives. To begin the change, you need the truth, someone brave enough to voice that truth, and a populace that is on the brink of change. Since this story comes highly recommended, I will soldier on when I have time to read the rest. It is also superbly written with great attention to detail, I wish I would have found it when it was being posted a chapter at a time, I think having a break in between chapters actually helps the narrative here. J -
Part One: Another Trip To Mars
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Another Trip To Mars
Tyler's home life is one based on trust, and love. But I've always thought when things are going to good, life has a way of reminding us that we really aren't control over our own lives. J -
So Laura and I were chatting over coffee and I actually have Cottontails real name... Jonathan Nuresh Garcia Lopez Jr., his family is from the Boston Lopez's, they made most of their money through hemp farms in Taiwan and Barcelona. Due to a bug infestation, they lost their family fortune and opened a small online magazine called Buyers Beware where they did in depth reporting on the dangers of buying over the counter condoms in gas stations all over the south. It's a tragic tale but they are on the upswing due to heavily investing in a new reality show called LiveFeed. Let's see how it all plays out. J
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