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Part One: You Have A Secret...
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: You Have A Secret...
You do know that AG47Fox was a true story and something I did when I was seventeen, right? I even had blue hair. My tastes haven't changed much, the older I get, all the guys I sleep with stay the same age range, 35 - 65. Old guys know how to...get it on...young guys you have to teach which end to suck, give me experience over youth any day. -
Part One: You Have A Secret...
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: You Have A Secret...
High schoolers don't talk things out, they go purely on testosterone and how many times they shoot off in a day. I think you should be always worried when matt is in the scene, he's unpredictable, highly observant, and not as stupid as he comes off. -
Part One: You Have A Secret...
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: You Have A Secret...
I've always found one normally has intelligence or street smarts, it's rare to find both traits in a single person. Doesn't all males have interest in kinky sexual games? I did when I was a teenager. -
Part One: You Have A Secret...
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: You Have A Secret...
I am humbled -
Part One: You Have A Secret...
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: You Have A Secret...
And yes you had a thoughtful comment regarding Matt, then you ended it with a sex joke...that's talent. I just realized today is Tuesday, I released the chapter a day early. Sadly, I won't make that mistake with the next chapter so you have two more days before you find out. -
Part One: Painting By Moonlight
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Painting By Moonlight
Oh god, another one!!! -
Part One: Not A Fan Of Asian Food
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Not A Fan Of Asian Food
Brandon might be one of those guys that don’t like his own filled undies but has no problem with someone else’s. Tyler is just discovering himself so who knows what he’ll do n -
Part One: You Have A Secret...
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: You Have A Secret...
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Part One: You Have A Secret...
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: You Have A Secret...
When you are used to being alone, having to share and communicate with your partner is quite shock. And brandon seems to enjoy doing what he wants whenever he wants.- 46 comments
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Part One: You Have A Secret...
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: You Have A Secret...
Hey, its Matt, who knows what that crazy man will pull out from his brain...PS. Your instincts are good, I just read the last two paragraphs, does seem like Brandon should be hit by a car or something right?- 46 comments
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Part One: You Have A Secret...
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: You Have A Secret...
Will you stop trying to make Devin gay? And this is probably the best thing you ever commented in your entire life!! -
Part One: You Have A Secret...
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: You Have A Secret...
Isn't everything better than anchovies! Around here everyone smothers their pizza with ranch, which is worse than anchovies.- 46 comments
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“I’m going to shower now,” Devin called out over his shoulder as he disappeared from view. “If it helps, I fucked him last night,” Tyler yelled as he gathered the trash from Devin’s breakfast. “Though then he fucked me again.” “And…we’re right back where I came in,” Devin replied from the bathroom. Devin’s bathroom was nowhere as large as Tyler’s but it was still pretty big. There was one feature Tyler wished he had, Devin’s toilet was in its own separate room. He called out, “H
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Journey to the Past - Greg
Jason Rimbaud commented on Bry Bryant's story chapter in Journey to the Past - Greg
Well, don't change on my account, I'm an old man with a bad memory. . Good Job Bry! -
Journey to the Past - Greg
Jason Rimbaud commented on Bry Bryant's story chapter in Journey to the Past - Greg
So after reading your comment above, I am guessing you are the narrator and the character name is Bry? Sorry I missed that. . -
Journey to the Past - Greg
Jason Rimbaud commented on Bry Bryant's story chapter in Journey to the Past - Greg
I enjoyed this chapter and genuinely can't wait to see where you go with this. I was at times confused who was speaking, as there were a lot of characters introduced and I had to go back and re-read who everyone was but I do get the uncertainty and fish out of water vibe from the MC point of view. That lost feeling one has at 24 and going back to something familiar almost as if that would restore order in one's life. Good job. And if I missed it, I apologize, but did you mention the name of the main character? -
Who Doesn’t Like a Maverick?
Jason Rimbaud commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Who Doesn’t Like a Maverick?
Could they be twins? Older twins often lord that fact over the younger twin. -
Part One: Painting By Moonlight
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Painting By Moonlight
How did I miss a peen joke? I'm so embarrassed. -
Part One: Did I Make You Gay?
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Did I Make You Gay?
Sadly doesn’t matter. 😜😜😜 -
Part One: Did I Make You Gay?
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Did I Make You Gay?
Never been a size queen but six inches is doable. 👌 -
Part One: Did I Make You Gay?
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Did I Make You Gay?
I really tried to make it ambiguous as possible what Devin's problem was, but I think throwing the look in the hallways at Brandon was my undoing. Sometimes I get too, not sure how to say it but I want to leave clues so when the reader goes back, they'll be able to say, oh, this was actually the plan all along. Clever, the word I'm looking for is clever, I try to be too clever. As a reader, I don't like things that come out of left field, when someone suddenly turns villain and there is no foreshadowing, drives me crazy. Anyway, you were right. And there is another fellow who has guessed several things right as well, sometimes I want to delete his comments so no one else will get the same idea. . -
Part One: Did I Make You Gay?
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Did I Make You Gay?
Err, you must not be familiar with a certain type of slut that goes by (can you @ yourself, I'm gonna try) @Jason Rimbaud (fuck yeah) who can still be a slut while wearing undies, and if they are the right kind, you don't even need to take them while engaging in said slutty behavior. The more you know....G.I. Joe! -
Part One: Did I Make You Gay?
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Did I Make You Gay?
So I said you won the award, lets not go throwing words around like, like. 🤪 By the way, I've been meaning to ask you about your name, is it really based on the hand tool (not that kind @chris191070 or now @Philippe) or am I going crazy? It's only been a few years I've been wondering but I've never asked for some reason. -
Part One: Did I Make You Gay?
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Did I Make You Gay?
I believe we will get a peak into that situation soon. Hopefully if my memory is correct. But Brandon is a lot like me, once a slut, always a slut. I wear it proudly. -
Part One: Did I Make You Gay?
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Did I Make You Gay?
I believe you have won the comment of the entire story award. Which is basically me bestowing said title, there's no perks, or discount to the underwear club but...you win anyway!
