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    Chapter 8

    The picture of Sam, the boy, was disturbing, but what I saw today about The Homeless Street Cafe and their work was something to celebrate. They are a remarkable group of people!
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    Chapter 7

    Jim and Jason's working together to restore phones and laptops could become a very good money enterprise. I hope these two are successful on the first tries. Jason, Jim and Beccy need more resources. I am hoping that Jason gains trust in Jim, and tells Jim about his problems.
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    Chapter 115

    The Kardoval gets exposed and the galaxy gets front row seats for a declaration of love. I would love to see the expressions on the faces of his parents. Ases reputation as a bad boy remain intact with his sneaky broadcast. I bet Bouncer is feeling a bit smug for his part in bringing the two together.
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    Chapter 38

    Korner Krew is all set to go!
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    Chapter 1

    Great new addition to Lucifer and Gabriel's story. You'll probably hate me for saying this @kbois, but Gideon reminds me of most of the cats I have loved. Like Gid they broke lamps, hid under beds, blankets, cabinets, were always creating mischief, and very hyperactive.
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    Chapter 1

    Hi @weinerdog, Here's the GA link that explains Promising and Hosted Author status. It's a bit old (2013) and I think there are more levels now. I'm glad I'm not an author. The work they are expected to do would overwhelm me!
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    Elias

    Elias is a well written mystery and ghost story. It isn't a sad or scary story, but a very compelling tale that keeps you engaged. The characters are lovable and often fun. The ending will leave you hopeful and wanting to visit again.
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    Part 6 - End

    There were some very good additions to Elias' story as told by the museum staff. Rhett was certainly rewarded for staying. Like the other comments, I feel that the story ended too soon. I hope there is an additional story for Rhett and Asher. This was a great ghost story and mystery!
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    Chapter 6

    Great chapter and I like Danny. He has a lot of courage. It is interesting that he and Jason are about the same age, and arrive on the scene at the same time. 🤔
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    Chapter 5

    Other comments have admirably covered anything I would say. Great chapter!
  11. I am just happy you are voting!
  12. Charlie, Kippy, Adrian and Ricky are once again visiting Engris and decide to visit their friendly ghosts Billy and Will in the spirit domes. However, the domes created by the Madracorn that have worked perfectly for many millions of years have a big problem. They are clogged up. The Madracorn ask Charlie for help, and he quickly realizes this is a job for Third Planet Inquiries. As with all Geron's stories, this is filled with humor, mystery and adventures. It is also darker than his usual Charlie Boone stories which is fitting since Charlie and his team are adults now. The job has many dangers, a great cast of old and new characters and some excellent cliffhangers. As for the setting? World building in this story is a universal understatement! Enjoy the read!
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    Chapter 8

    Not sure if it has ended yet. Kippy would throw one hell of a fit if he doesn't get back for Halloween at home. Besides, @Geron Kees hasn't hit the complete key yet so we can review.
  14. I'm better but still now 100%.
  15. On the same list with Drew??? No, I'll pass. The only Santa gift I want is one from you! I envy the recipients of your gifts. They have to be some special people.
  16. That's because you are my role model. How can I be any different?
  17. It keeps Drew a slight bit quieter. I fear for his health when he gets over excited.
  18. I'm wishing you the best of luck at the exam. Also as safe trip with cleaned and salted sidewalks. ❤️
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    Chapter 8

    I can't say it is Geron's best story either, because I can't make up my mind which of the many he has written I would chose.
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    Chapter 8

    I would agree. Geron is smart that way.
  21. Hey Nick! No worries. I have already had my trial by fire with these guys. 😜 Looking forward to getting to know you. I would warn you that Drew will likely add you to his list of insanity that usually has Albert and Clo at the top. The rest of us change places depending on his mood and Drew is always at the bottom. Of course I am always an 😇. Glad to have you with this group. It is the most fun and entertaining around. The only problem is we all have a food fetish and fight over the studs Gary is posting daily. Cholesterol and overstimulation of the heart is dangerous to my health!
  22. Thanks Spike! Your a good man. I'll return the favor any time you need the help!
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    Chapter 8

    Tallfield is one dangerous ghost. He's like an evil televangelist on steroids out to conquer and control the entire plane of the dead. Eseffa and Jorli are very subtle in the help they are giving. I mentioned before I thought it would be fun for Robin and the Baron to meet since they have so much in common. I also wondered why Charlie had not included Kirby in the first place, because they were going to an alternate universe outside of time. I am pleased that at least these two might be included. Of course now we know Chirka, Pacha is also a must. I think he might like some companionship. The big surprise is that this adventure might continue until Christmas. How the hell your going to do that Geron will be amazing and having us rolling on the ground laughing. I'm glad we haven't ended this story yet, but can't wait for the second half at Christmas.
  24. Hi Albert! Hope your hip is better today.
  25. Note to myself. That's 8:15 pm Thai time tomorrow. Of course that means I have to wait until I get home much, much later. 🤔 Wait a minute...tomorrow starts in 3 hours and 10 minutes. I get a two for one special! 😜
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