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@astone2292 Just finished your birthday gift. Have fun with it!
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@Bft is right. It won't work. @kbois forgot to divide by the number of feet in a mile.
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Internet has many resources to teach those interested in science much more than what they learn in school. National Science Standards in the US start to teach the basics of matter and energy conservation at the fourth grade level. If the boys were really interested at that age, the science demonstration videos and tutorials could get them to high school level in the three or four years. As a teacher I learned that many adults underestimate how much kids can learn on their own.
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Hey Guys it's way past my bedtime, so I'll just say Good Night All! Also, I hope to get you know you better Bignick now that you're back. Welcome back! Terry
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Love comes in many forms, and this chapter displayed the three most important. Love of family, love of friends and love of two special couples. Sam selected a great pair of adult role models for his randy sons. I'm hoping Tim can continue to avoid their traps, and help them avoid the traps of others.
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Maybe when you redeem yourself for killing off Kage. I'm OK with the twins and mates, but still miss Kage!
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I noticed you said series, not book. You pull all the strings to create the loose ends. Stop whining and get writing.
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Happy Birthday Bucket!
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As an example of what you are saying @Mawgrim, Here is what happened in my old home town and now throughout the Pacific Northwest. A local family in Portland, Oregon formed McMenamin's Brew Pubs and located them in old grand theaters and old historic buildings of the past century like fire stations and schools. They provided live entertainment, films, good food, microbrew beers, barista coffee and featured local arts and crafts. Some even have small hotels. These were big changes that now pack people in all hours of the day and night. They are a very successful entertainment spot and show all kinds of films. The one I love best is the Bagdad Theater that was about half a mile from my home. I've included a link to that theater page so you can see what I'm talking about. https://www.mcmenamins.com/bagdad-theater-pub They have grown from one location in 1983 to 62 locations in Oregon and Washington.
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How @kbois prefers to end chapters: What we want: Great chapter, but could have waited for the fecal matter until the next chapter! Ashton and Austin are very intelligent. I personally think that the observation that the answer may be inside the box was good. I also remember that the change was at the molecular level. DNA information is stored in four basic molecules, and can be spliced to make changes. Of course, kbois would need to learn some science for that to work. Things I loved about the chapter is how the bonds are strengthening with the mates. Also, that the mates are now part of Sebastian's pack, or soon will be. Tyler's fears of his family have been reasoned away. Things I don't like are K.H. is back and Fae magic won't work to cure the kids, unless... Fun things for the next four chapters? Tyler's family when they have learned the truth! Mama kicking K.H. where it hurts the most then shoving his head up his
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Since I have been following you, I did know that English is not your first language. Your English in stories impress me a lot, since I have taught many students whose first language is not English. The stories themselves impress me even more. I like that you are taking a risk by expanding your talent and skills even more to create this new world. I don't think you need it, but I am wishing you the best! Looking forward to your new adventures in writing! Terry
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Well your aim has improved, since Portland is only half a planet away and not somewhere in another galaxy far, far away. BTW, Which galaxy was planet Chon Buri in? Also, I think Page would make a great Luke Skywalker and Clo a lovely Princess Leia.
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Dang! After reading @Aditus comment, I guess I screwed up and need to answer the rest of the questions. 1. See above. comment 2. Inherited by lomax61. I agree with Aditus on this one. 3. @Geron Kees reintroduced me to this site. I first found it about 12 years ago, but then lost it. 4. Transitions Thru Time 5. Potato Leek soup.
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Wait...the last chapters?
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I see you are back to your Darth Vader persona. Never heard of a planet Chon Buri. 😁
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Hi DDDrew! Hope you are doing OK. As a teacher, I would advise you to learn some vocabulary. It seems a bit limited.
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Hi Bucket! Hope your day was good! When did you hurt your foot? Hope it is better now!
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Hi All! Hey Drew....I'm back!
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I'm jealous of Clo now! I first had Texas BBQ at Buster's Texas BBQ in Portland. My favorite place though was a local place that unfortunately is no longer in business. There they gave customers bibs that tied in back and went down to your knees. It was needed! I always ordered a combo, because I could never make up my mind. I also went home with a doggy bag.
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Sorry, but it is part of the American culture. I love the holiday much better than Halloween, because it is focuses on family and heritage, not candy sales. I taught it to my elementary students about the Day of the Dead before Halloween. I give myself a waiver any time I want!
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How do you like your eggs? Scrambled? Over-medium? I like them sunnyside up and runny so I can use the toast and fried potatoes to mop the plate clean! I'll take a day or two and send you my three birthday questions for the authors. My only problem is to decide who among the many authors and which of many questions to use. 🤔 Do I get to ask you if you make the list? (Hint: I just got through reading chapter 38.)
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The Cat Burglar is a great story and I'm enjoying it immensely. I'm not sure what you mean about the sister story. Is this going to tie in somewhere with The Cat burglar? I am really anticipating these stories, so write on! 😁
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I was expecting to see Cyn and Shea soon, but not this soon. It was a great mealtime conversation, and I wonder if it will lead to a bit more of a crossover when you start posting the next story. Thanks for the bit of a teaser @astone2292. A very pleasant evening spent with some favorite characters!
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That was some chase scene through the city dodging live amo. Bouncer must have some foxhound blood the way he leads the way to their escape. Ases did his job and got back his mech. Now to get the hell out of the city and somewhere safer to plan how to take out the Kardoval! I love the great action Cia! The tension was as thick as the dust Essell was trying to wave away with his four arms.
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