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  1. Hi Dugh! Glad to see you here. Texy is still trying to get rid of me, and I need some help in keeping his ego from detonating, again.
  2. *The ones that didn't have escaped across the border to Canada and are hiding out in an undisclosed location near Toronto...😜
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    Symanthus

    This is an interesting world you are building. These brief glimpses of characters are like microscopic explorations of the types of people in the world. Although a unifying plot seems missing, you have key elements assembled to make an excellent new novel. Since I enjoy your stories, I can only hope that this gets developed into a complete tale in the future.
  4. I see your Russian cohorts are at it again. First you hire Russian reporters, now scientists? Are these the same guys that claimed the Sputnik V vaccine had a 92% effective rate in a study of 20 cases? Lame again. Keep trying.
  5. Goodnight All! Enjoy your squabbles. Aod wants me to go to bed.
  6. Not true, but she does scare me more than you!
  7. Yes she did. And I am enjoying my popcorn as you two duke it out. May the best woman win!
  8. OMG NAILED IT!
  9. More than you!
  10. Who do you think has been keeping me up this late. Nice try.
  11. Don't worry, your mom will only hire him part time for when she is on vacation. Page will make sure you eat right and don't get within several meters of a microwave. I am sure that Max will introduce you to the wonderful tastes of escargot. And...send you to bed when you get cranky.
  12. Good one Page. I think you would make a great nanny for the FORMER Boss Nanny that was recently fired.
  13. Glad to see you back in top form today. Keep them coming!
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    Jared

    Stumbled on this while waiting for an update of Death in the Shadows. You have got me hooked already. This future world is a realistic take on what will happen in the future globalisation of our world. Jared seems like an exceptional and thoughtful boy and is easy to like. Looking forward to the next few chapters. Thanks Aaron!
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    Chapter 12

    Mithras gave a wonderful gift to Ned and Peter for one night. The trip to the volcanic area must have amaze the troop who probably had never imagined or learned about this spectacular landscape. I was relieved that they were able to destroy the beacon and make it home safely. Spaceship Ned acted much like his historic family by being cautious and sensitive to the safety of the planet's magnetic field. I was surprised that the 1000 year old virus that destroyed the original three space ships was able to do the same to an advanced spaceship with a computer that is a 1000 years more advanced. Now the 12 crew members will have to join those on the planet and start a new life. I wish everyone the best!
  16. Dustin's not bad either.
  17. Glad that you both are OK, but was hoping the weather would settle down so you wouldn't have problems with your migraines. I'll keep my fingers crossed for you.
  18. Hi Dugh! Hope you and mom are OK. Has the weather improved your way?
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    Spirit Wolves

    Spirit Wolf is the first shifter novel by kbois, but you would never know that by the wonderful and unique world the author has created for this story. Reilly and Kellan have been on the run from a vicious, evil pack for 8 years. Reilly, beautiful in a dress and high heels is a Kappa and Kellan is Reilly's Lambda who must protect his Kappa. They are suddenly confronted by a power Alpha who demands to see his destined mate, the beautiful and shapely Reilly. The Alpha gives them two days to report to his pack. The beautiful young shifter and protector prepare for the worst when they arrive at the pack headquarters. From there this group takes off on terrifying and dangerous adventure as legendary as any I have ever read. With their friends and packs who rally to their aid, they challenge an international conspiracy that threatens the lives of all supernatural beings. The author is one of the best on GA and is ably assisted by a fun team of an editor and beta. kbois' writing style is compelling and her use of cliffhangers legendary. She fills her story with interesting twists and turns that will keep you off balance and guessing. You will also enjoy the funny comments and discussions, if you can break your self away from binging on the story. This humour filled story will have you laughing, crying, angry and gasping for breath! I highly recommend this tale! Great reading!
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    Chapter 26

    First and foremost, Thank You So Much. This story is one of my favourite stories on GA. I appreciate the time and efforts of your team, also. This has been a very intriguing and fun story, and I look forward to Elijah's story next. I think you had mentioned June, right? Following that I do expect Caleb's story. I can imagine this voice continuing to shout for justice for his sacrifice to the goddess of Cliffhangers. I how to get some notices soon. I am following and know where to find you. Of course I could also ambush you when you get into your usual fights with Mrsgnomie. I even bought some supplies to have on hand while I read the squabbling gif comments.
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    Chapter 25

    The executions were grizzly and made me cringe, although it was truly deserved. Justice prevailed. I was glad that Caleb's life was spared. After all the positive he did in most of the book, I found it hard to believe that his character demanded to become a willing part of the evil pack pact. I think Caleb was a sacrificial wolf to the goddess of Cliffhangers. Marvellous writing so fun to read.
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    Chapter 25

    There are advantages to a double post. Sometimes I can't figure out whether I should give out a heart or and laugh. With double posts I can do both! I just wish there were a few more emojis to pick from however.
  23. Hi Clo! Sawasdee Khrup! 🙏 Hope all is well with you and Minion. Is he home yet?
  24. Sorry Clo, I do know what you mean. I had nightmares after to real picture was posted several pages back. This one is probably worse, since it makes my stomach gassy and bouncy...🤮 Sorry, I'll clean up the mess. 😧
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    Chapter 24

    I am torn by the comments about Caleb. I stuck with him, because of all the good he had done throughout the story. I also felt that he was being coerced by Alberts and Belland to save the pup. I also feel that any punishment he receives will negatively affect Vann who an innocent youngster. What Caleb did resulted in Elijah being hurt, but probably did not affect much else. He did viciously attack Nichols when Nichols attacked Seb from behind. However, Caleb has also made two big mistakes that are definitely unforgivable. The first was to not proudly proclaim that Vann was his son. His excuse of trying to protect Vann was lame. Vann would have been better protected as Caleb's son. There was no need to identify Vann's mother. The second mistake was to not tell Seb about Alberts and Belland's contact immediately after the guys got back from Germany. Caleb compounded that by continuing to withhold information when he learned about Wayne, Sandi and Elijah's mission. He could easily take their place and save the others from danger. I suspect that his fate will somehow be decided by the Sentinels as a group. Knowing Reilly is the heart of the group, I feel that the punishment will not result in death. I liked many of the great suggestions for rehabilitating Caleb. I also hope the next story will be published very soon. Great story @kbois!!!❤️
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