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Fifty-two percent intimidating
raven1 commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Fifty-two percent intimidating
This is a great way to get away from it all, unless you are Jay and Loe. Those two were funny even when they were fighting. I do sympathise with Jay. I would be an angsty mess watching someone I love take on El Capitan. I am happy that Loe solved the bed problems, both of them. It was a honeydew moment when he cancelled the next climb.- 67 comments
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Of course it would feature many of your bad kids who have been sent to the Corner. I did check with Carnac and he predicted it would be a best seller.
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I do love the action in this chapter. Also, the new ability displayed by Seb. It is great that he has an empathic ability to help his Sentinels. I too have some soapy questions. Elijah flickered when he was creeped out by Nichol's sneering smile. What will happen when he sees the missing pups? If he is in pain, will he be able to stay in form? Does he heal when he shifts like a wolf shifter? If he shifts after being hurt, will it take longer to heal since his metabolism is not as high as a wolf shifter? (Donovan's explanation of why Elijah's stink pills will last longer.) Inquiring....Sorry, That's @drsawzall line. I am having a lot of fun now things are really moving fast. Great chapter. I do have a suspect for the mole, but (I'm tired of being sent to the Corner.) Hey, that's a great title @kbois . Sent to the Corner! by kbois
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Yes, but I can't see sour cream, buttermilk or yoghurt replacing a good whiskey.
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Now we know why flavoured whiskeys were mentioned so much. Our beloved and wicked author was doing extensive research for the story. 🤪
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Yes the abduction was extremely fast. It was so fast that it seems the Nichols' gang was expecting them. Now I feel a traitor in Caleb's pack. I am glad that Seb is suspicious and keeping quiet about Ben and Zev. I am not sure if Sandi and Wayne are safe, but think they too may be captive. Zander, having seen the momentary shift of Elijah may be important later in the story, but I know I will have to wait in the Corner if I demand to know immediately. Great deal of tension and action in this chapter, so I am happy.
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Did you mean nothing happens to Elijah, or nothing happens to you? Cliffhangers can be dangerous to evil authors if they leave readers hanging too long!
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Great story! Watch out for the three chapter cliffhanger near the end. It's a real ride! I don't know what that author was trying to do. He nearly gave me a heart attack!
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PS Great chapter! ❤️
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The guys have it all planned out now that the smelly problem has been solved. Can't wait for all the action to start. The last few chapters have been like a cliffhanger in reverse. I am still waiting for the action. Just don't hurt Elijah! He is much too sweet. Besides, I think that more than a few innocents will already have perished by the time the guys tackle the Idaho pack. Save all the pain, blood and gore for the bad guys. And @kbois....I ain't going to the Corner! 😠 I have to thank @drsawzall for the Carnac comment. I went on YouTube and watched some episodes there. I'm old enough to have some great laughs again even if some of the predictions were very dated. ❤️
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Now everyone is here and they all know the plan, I want to see some action. Only one caveat is that Elijah is spared. He is willingly coming to help strangers he has never met in order to save a bunch of pups. He deserves a better reward than a bloody death at the hands of vicious, evil wolves. Interesting comments for this chapter. Everyone seems to be obsessing about assholes. 😄
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That's my worry also. The Aryan Nations, a neo-Nazi organization, was first founded in northern Idaho. However, the author said no because she was too lazy.
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Hi Gary! Sawasdee Khrup. I was happy to hear you and the animals are all doing well. Are you beginning to see signs of Spring yet?
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Hi Texy! Sawasdee Khrup!🙏
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Hi Page! Aod and I are doing well. How are you, Morgan and Max?
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Hunter and Kellan get off to a good start to the day, and all our friends seem to be ready to tackle the task of getting the information. Breakfast was very interesting. I was surprised that they got the dump of information scanned in one day. Dinner was interesting as we got to know the other councillors better. They seem to be alright except for the two bad guys. Fate, or a certain trickster we love, places Kellan and Hunter in just the right place to overhear Alberts and Belland's incriminating conversation. I hope our guys get out safely and in time to set their plan in motion to save the pups. From the conversation, the pups are being used as guinea pigs in a series of experiments. I hope nothing is done that will permanently affect their lives, but highly doubt that. Excellent chapter!
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Good day everyone! Sawasdee Khrup 🙏
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Seb has asserted his dominance and has the council in a corner doing his bidding. Giving them only two days will keep them busy and limit the amount of changes that can be made to records. The days the guys spent touring was definitely a benefit by reviving their souls. It also allowed them to get to know and trust (to a point) Robert. I am sure that Ben and Zev would have observed something about Roberts reaction if it were not true. I don't have the usual anti-snake bias, so I think that Chusi's reaction may have been because she thinks she may be able to trust Seb with information she feels is important for him to know about others on the council. Since I have the rest of the book to read, I'm off to the next chapter.
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Just Cute????? You better go back and read your own chapters. They're soooo beyond cute!!!! I know you do. Did you suggest or try Loren's recipe? Truth now... @Mrsgnomie going to read this.
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Congratulations to the new members of the Mile High Club. The ride to the castle seemed peaceful enough. Seb got warmed up for the main event by putting down a few underlings quickly. I like that he picks his fights and first appears to the full council a bit intimidated. That is definitely a way to lower the caution of those enemies on the council so they may talk more freely in front of Ben and Zev. I am not convinced that the entire council is behind the crisis. I would like to see and here more, especially the observations by Ben and Zev before jumping to that conclusion. The most fun part of this is Reilly and Seb having sex, but no shower. That's one powerful pheromone bomb to be set of at the beginning of the meeting! The only thing better would be if the other two couples have done the same. Great start to the trip with wins for Seb.
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That and an oscillating fan. See reference in the first paragraph. 🤣
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That comes from being a retired teacher. I liked to tell my students...get busy we don't have all day to clean up!
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What started out as a mean, wild ride has turned into an amusement park full of vicious rides. If readers get their way there will be a new international destination park, Wolf World. I am blown away by the inventive and intriguing ideas for major plot twists these revolutionary readers are suggesting. Personally, I do think that there is at least one or a few of the High Council that are very corrupt and are leading this world into danger. It would fit with the original Sentinels storyline. Of course there are the lessor minions in the national council that are acting on their behalf moving funds, withholding information or sending information to the top. I do hope the guys check in with both Silas and Rosalie before they take off to Germany to see if these two can provide a little seer sight to help. Also, I haven't forgotten about the hunter that came into town and wonder what is up with that. I can't believe our evil author would drop this thread. More likely @kbois will hit us with it when it is least expected. Great chapter overflowing with suspense, and some badass comments to boot.
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Ases mech assistant was very interesting as described. I was glad that he had destroyed the long-distance communication device installed by his father. It shows he trust Garjah and also honours his promises to Garjah. Ases does seem interested in the hot kiss between Essell and Garjah. Bouncer does a good job of keeping things from overheating. Looking forward to the next half of the tour.
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I surrender!!!!! There is no way I can match what has already been said by the others.
