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Seb has asserted his dominance and has the council in a corner doing his bidding. Giving them only two days will keep them busy and limit the amount of changes that can be made to records. The days the guys spent touring was definitely a benefit by reviving their souls. It also allowed them to get to know and trust (to a point) Robert. I am sure that Ben and Zev would have observed something about Roberts reaction if it were not true. I don't have the usual anti-snake bias, so I think that Chusi's reaction may have been because she thinks she may be able to trust Seb with information she feels is important for him to know about others on the council. Since I have the rest of the book to read, I'm off to the next chapter.

Just Cute????? You better go back and read your own chapters. They're soooo beyond cute!!!! I know you do. Did you suggest or try Loren's recipe? Truth now... @Mrsgnomie going to read this.

Congratulations to the new members of the Mile High Club. The ride to the castle seemed peaceful enough. Seb got warmed up for the main event by putting down a few underlings quickly. I like that he picks his fights and first appears to the full council a bit intimidated. That is definitely a way to lower the caution of those enemies on the council so they may talk more freely in front of Ben and Zev. I am not convinced that the entire council is behind the crisis. I would like to see and here more, especially the observations by Ben and Zev before jumping to that conclusion. The most fun part of this is Reilly and Seb having sex, but no shower. That's one powerful pheromone bomb to be set of at the beginning of the meeting! The only thing better would be if the other two couples have done the same. Great start to the trip with wins for Seb.

That and an oscillating fan. See reference in the first paragraph. 🤣

That comes from being a retired teacher. I liked to tell my students...get busy we don't have all day to clean up!

What started out as a mean, wild ride has turned into an amusement park full of vicious rides. If readers get their way there will be a new international destination park, Wolf World. I am blown away by the inventive and intriguing ideas for major plot twists these revolutionary readers are suggesting. Personally, I do think that there is at least one or a few of the High Council that are very corrupt and are leading this world into danger. It would fit with the original Sentinels storyline. Of course there are the lessor minions in the national council that are acting on their behalf moving funds, withholding information or sending information to the top. I do hope the guys check in with both Silas and Rosalie before they take off to Germany to see if these two can provide a little seer sight to help. Also, I haven't forgotten about the hunter that came into town and wonder what is up with that. I can't believe our evil author would drop this thread. More likely @kbois will hit us with it when it is least expected. Great chapter overflowing with suspense, and some badass comments to boot.

Ases mech assistant was very interesting as described. I was glad that he had destroyed the long-distance communication device installed by his father. It shows he trust Garjah and also honours his promises to Garjah. Ases does seem interested in the hot kiss between Essell and Garjah. Bouncer does a good job of keeping things from overheating. Looking forward to the next half of the tour.

I surrender!!!!! There is no way I can match what has already been said by the others.

Good start with Ben experiencing his first shift, then down to business for them both as they have their first sex as wolves. Ben is an explorer and shows it by wanting to run soon after the shift and sex. Priorities dictated the order of events. Late for the meeting, the group verifies that they all have the same markings as the original Sentinels. They also consult Rosalie to learn more about the possibility of the effect of the horrendous crimes on the Veil. A lot of talk and information shared, but I want some action. You know...

I am wondering if this ⬆️ is the result of this ⬇️ I hope not, but @kbois does know how to twist us up in knots. The Sentinels have started to work together, and I have great hope that they will be able to rescue the pups soon. It will be a great chapter when they all get together. I bet Silas will be very excited to show them the picture. Has the picture gone through a professional restoration yet? Maybe there are some hidden secrets in the picture that will be revealed when it is restored.

Hi kbois, Just so you know, you are right. It is morning here. I am from the Pacific NW originally, but now have retired and live in Chiang Mai, Thailand. I really love GA and all the people that write and read the stories here. You'll probably see a lot of me from now on. 😋 I do love your twisty style and wicked humour. 😈

Ben's date with Zev was so romantic and flowed into their amazing mating. Now I await the emergence of both the new wolf, and the new psi. I think that Zev will be quite surprised at his new ability now matter what it is. I do suspect that it will not be the exact same as Ben's ability. Probably the suggested pattern/seer that has been hinted by other commenters? Great chapter written so well I could feel the playfulness and joy of Ben and Zev, even when making Mac and Cheese.

An answer to Rosalie's exclamation is startling. The guys are Sentinels. We already know the other two will soon be a couple. Ben's not stupid, just careful. I am know wondering if Rosalie knows Silas, because she has obviously seen the picture in Montana of the Sentinels on the mountain. Everything seems good and the community about to celebrate new members when the roof falls in on them. Milo's abduction is very upsetting as are the abductions out west. I hope the whole thing gets solved before harm comes to the young shifters. I was very concerned by one comment that the young shifters might be used to open the Veil. That could be disastrous for all. I do think that Reilly's father sounds a lot like a stupid, inept version of Maven and probably is behind the pupnappings.

Hi Drew! Glad to see you are in a good mood today. You must have had some very sweet dreams last night.

Reilly's first run as a wolf was so sweet and beautifully written I could feel his joy as he and Seb ran and played together. I also immensely enjoy the humour you use to spice up this tale. One of my two favourite parts of this chapter are when Hunter and Kellan first spot each other and are introduced by Reilly. The other is when Hunter and Kellan relate their confusion of what to do as former straight men trying to make love together the first time. Like other commenters, I want to know why Rosalie exclaimed, "It's real." What's real??? I also got a lot of laughs from all the great comments by others.

I'm just a sucker for love. 🍭

Wow @drsawzall you really packed a lot into this chapter. I have to admit that I am relieved that neither Thad or Evan were sacrificed, but now they are on a mission that sounds dangerous. The earth space craft is approaching the planet and although with very good intentions will bring death to Mithras and destroy the wonderful society that has evolved on the planet. I was amazed that both Peter and James have been given bodies to help the boys to destroy the signal box. You do sent some intriguing twists our way in this chapter. I will have a very difficult time waiting to find out what happens next. Brilliant story! ❤️

Good timing Albert! I'm in the middle of a story that includes a pack of Montana wolf shifters.

The evil 😈 cliffy queen is forgiven...at least until the next chapter. Hallmark moment? Naa..this is Hot and Furry. Great chapter!

Hey Albert! Glad to see you out and about tonight.

After reading many of the comments, I wonder how twisted you really are. Could Ben end up with the twins as his shared mates??? Naa...My bet is still on Zev. Ben was a real hero in this chapter. He not only saved two lives, but had the courage to honestly reveal his special ability. I think the suggestion that Silas will be able to suggest a way for Ben to help rescue the pups is a good probability. I too want to know more about the picture. Looking forward to tomorrow's dinner when the boys meet. Bet it is something special.

Nice diversionary tactic to distract readers from a cliffhanger. Just throw in a possible new pairing and a friendly pack of wolves. Mix with a possible scouting mission of the bad guys living next door in Idaho, and of course we will forget the cliff you left us all hanging on. Ben is a very interesting young man, and I do wonder how he got his talents. The town is also interesting in the number of shifters concentrated there. I don't have to wait for postings, so I'll just bing away until my many questions are answered.

I was expecting a dramatic/traumatic mating, but this was one huge first drop, followed by a 360 twist, a hairpin turn by a stone wall cliffhanger. I can see how you have earned your evil reputation for cliffhangers. I swear I hear a "muhahaha" in the background as Seb screamed, "Donoovaan!" As to the speculation about a certain Lambda and Beta, I was wondering the same thing. They seem to at least have something in common before they even meet. It wouldn't be the first sexual preference to change in this story. Great chapter and looking forward to many more like this!

He's probably still asleep dreaming of his mom's cooking. 😄

Good for you Clo! Rehydration and antibiotics are standard treatments for kidney infections and work well. I'll keep my fingers crossed for you and Minion.