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  1. Good Night Texy and have sweet dreams of your mom's arroz con leche.
  2. It took you that long to remember it is April Fools' Day?????
  3. Or the worst, since you are the only nanny I have ever had. 🤣
  4. And can fire you:
  5. raven1

    Chapter 23

    This battle was great for all the revenge and anger that the guys were able to release. Just a gory as the first as the Sentinels took out the bad guys. I do hope you incorporate some of the punishments suggested! This must be devastating to Reilly and Kellan, since it is happening in their old pack. Reilly at least has found something that reminds him of his wonderful mother and that brings some comfort to his. I still think that Caleb is a good guy. No sure why yet, but I did mention in a hidden comment my thoughts: Hide contents The high council twosome are trying to recruit Caleb, and he is trying to find out where the pups are by playing along. Second, the idiots are trying to get him to cooperate by threatening the pups and have lured him into a trap by offering to give him the pup they captured from Caleb's pack. They might have also told him Wayne, his beta, and Sandi would not be harmed. I am sure there may be other explanations, but these came to my mind. I hope to find out Caleb's motives in the next chapter. I think it is important that Seb trusts that Caleb will do no harm, not escape and has promised to explain his actions to all.
  6. raven1

    Chapter 23

    I'll join them, since I stuck with both Nat and Caleb.
  7. raven1

    Chapter 23

    I thought you said you had about 1/2 left. Memory fading?
  8. Having too much fun here. Remember I stocked up yesterday for times like this.
  9. Sorry, no can do. This is the season of massive air pollution in Thailand as farmers burn the fields to prepare for planting rice next month. I have the air purifiers going full blast. Try again.
  10. Since you can tell time, just remember that it is almost time for Clo to wake up. I'll just get some popcorn and be back in time for the fun.
  11. Lame attempt to get rid of me Drew. I did that yesterday and all stocked up. 👅
  12. Oh! So you finally remembered you were the author. I was beginning to think you were having memory problems.
  13. I believe you Drew. That's why I am sending Albert this latest invention for his arsenal.
  14. Having a bad day Drew? I should have realised that when your alarm clock went off today.
  15. Real plastic one bought at Dollar Tree.
  16. raven1

    Unraveling

    She is a piece of work, and had us all fooled. Hope you are enjoying this story.
  17. I am sure that is because you are psychic. To the rest of us, they are cliffhangers.
  18. Don't worry, I don't do spoilers. I don't like to know what's next, because I like to guess a lot. All I will say is the author really kept me guessing. I don't think I need to tell you the author does like cliffhangers. You probably have experienced a few already.
  19. I am headed for bed. Goodnight All!
  20. Awesome news! Be sure to give him lots of petting and some scratches behind the ears for me. ❤️
  21. raven1

    Chapter 22

    Epic battle! Ya did good @kbois! The battle left me breathless and panting. I am still waiting for the Sentinels to take out the bad guys, all of them, without mercy! They deserve worst than the mercenaries at the mine. It is a bit depressing to think that this may be the first of many before the pups captured in Europe are freed. I hope the High Council starts to take action there, so our guys can regroup and recover. They still have one big, possibly bigger battle tomorrow when they go after the big guns and Nichols' pack to save Wayne and Sandi. I hope that Donovan and Jack's boys will be able to help some of the rescued pups quickly. I am really upset about Milo. I also am concerned that some of the rescued pups may not have parents, or their parents reject those that are stuck in a partial turn.
  22. raven1

    Chapter 21

    Oh I am sure you two would find something else to fight about if it wasn't this. I remember the coconut conflict sparked by Loe's drinks.
  23. raven1

    Chapter 21

    No, not buying it at all. I think the biggest twist is still to come. I don't believe that Caleb is working with this gang of idiots. There are many reasons for him to be there other than cooperating with the assholes. Here are two I thought of... I do think a quick call to Wayne and Sandi is in order. They need to escape and join the gang. It seems a bit strange that Donovan didn't think of some of the possibilities about Elijah being captured. The pacing and tension in this chapter is great.
  24. raven1

    Winter

    This is a magnificent chapter filled with mounting tension as thread fall approaches. Even though Jevikel's father is treating him better, Vikkel is still being a ass about threadfall and is jeopardising the hold. The signs indicating the approaching threadfall are all there. I hope that after the trip to the market that Jevikel will be able to quickly join Kadin in the mountains, then make their escape. I do hope before he leaves, he has the courage to tell his mother about the true fate of Kemi. The storyline and characters are a tribute to Mawgrim's great ability to recreate Pern in all its complexity. Awesome work!
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