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  1. I am sure that is because you are psychic. To the rest of us, they are cliffhangers.
  2. Don't worry, I don't do spoilers. I don't like to know what's next, because I like to guess a lot. All I will say is the author really kept me guessing. I don't think I need to tell you the author does like cliffhangers. You probably have experienced a few already.
  3. I am headed for bed. Goodnight All!
  4. Awesome news! Be sure to give him lots of petting and some scratches behind the ears for me. ❤️
  5. raven1

    Chapter 22

    Epic battle! Ya did good @kbois! The battle left me breathless and panting. I am still waiting for the Sentinels to take out the bad guys, all of them, without mercy! They deserve worst than the mercenaries at the mine. It is a bit depressing to think that this may be the first of many before the pups captured in Europe are freed. I hope the High Council starts to take action there, so our guys can regroup and recover. They still have one big, possibly bigger battle tomorrow when they go after the big guns and Nichols' pack to save Wayne and Sandi. I hope that Donovan and Jack's boys will be able to help some of the rescued pups quickly. I am really upset about Milo. I also am concerned that some of the rescued pups may not have parents, or their parents reject those that are stuck in a partial turn.
  6. raven1

    Chapter 21

    Oh I am sure you two would find something else to fight about if it wasn't this. I remember the coconut conflict sparked by Loe's drinks.
  7. raven1

    Chapter 21

    No, not buying it at all. I think the biggest twist is still to come. I don't believe that Caleb is working with this gang of idiots. There are many reasons for him to be there other than cooperating with the assholes. Here are two I thought of... I do think a quick call to Wayne and Sandi is in order. They need to escape and join the gang. It seems a bit strange that Donovan didn't think of some of the possibilities about Elijah being captured. The pacing and tension in this chapter is great.
  8. raven1

    Winter

    This is a magnificent chapter filled with mounting tension as thread fall approaches. Even though Jevikel's father is treating him better, Vikkel is still being a ass about threadfall and is jeopardising the hold. The signs indicating the approaching threadfall are all there. I hope that after the trip to the market that Jevikel will be able to quickly join Kadin in the mountains, then make their escape. I do hope before he leaves, he has the courage to tell his mother about the true fate of Kemi. The storyline and characters are a tribute to Mawgrim's great ability to recreate Pern in all its complexity. Awesome work!
  9. This is a great way to get away from it all, unless you are Jay and Loe. Those two were funny even when they were fighting. I do sympathise with Jay. I would be an angsty mess watching someone I love take on El Capitan. I am happy that Loe solved the bed problems, both of them. It was a honeydew moment when he cancelled the next climb.
  10. raven1

    Chapter 20

    Of course it would feature many of your bad kids who have been sent to the Corner. I did check with Carnac and he predicted it would be a best seller.
  11. raven1

    Chapter 20

    I do love the action in this chapter. Also, the new ability displayed by Seb. It is great that he has an empathic ability to help his Sentinels. I too have some soapy questions. Elijah flickered when he was creeped out by Nichol's sneering smile. What will happen when he sees the missing pups? If he is in pain, will he be able to stay in form? Does he heal when he shifts like a wolf shifter? If he shifts after being hurt, will it take longer to heal since his metabolism is not as high as a wolf shifter? (Donovan's explanation of why Elijah's stink pills will last longer.) Inquiring....Sorry, That's @drsawzall line. I am having a lot of fun now things are really moving fast. Great chapter. I do have a suspect for the mole, but (I'm tired of being sent to the Corner.) Hey, that's a great title @kbois . Sent to the Corner! by kbois
  12. raven1

    Chapter 20

    Yes, but I can't see sour cream, buttermilk or yoghurt replacing a good whiskey.
  13. raven1

    Chapter 20

    Now we know why flavoured whiskeys were mentioned so much. Our beloved and wicked author was doing extensive research for the story. 🤪
  14. raven1

    Chapter 19

    Yes the abduction was extremely fast. It was so fast that it seems the Nichols' gang was expecting them. Now I feel a traitor in Caleb's pack. I am glad that Seb is suspicious and keeping quiet about Ben and Zev. I am not sure if Sandi and Wayne are safe, but think they too may be captive. Zander, having seen the momentary shift of Elijah may be important later in the story, but I know I will have to wait in the Corner if I demand to know immediately. Great deal of tension and action in this chapter, so I am happy.
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    Chapter 19

    Did you mean nothing happens to Elijah, or nothing happens to you? Cliffhangers can be dangerous to evil authors if they leave readers hanging too long!
  16. Great story! Watch out for the three chapter cliffhanger near the end. It's a real ride! I don't know what that author was trying to do. He nearly gave me a heart attack!
  17. raven1

    Chapter 18

    PS Great chapter! ❤️
  18. raven1

    Chapter 18

    The guys have it all planned out now that the smelly problem has been solved. Can't wait for all the action to start. The last few chapters have been like a cliffhanger in reverse. I am still waiting for the action. Just don't hurt Elijah! He is much too sweet. Besides, I think that more than a few innocents will already have perished by the time the guys tackle the Idaho pack. Save all the pain, blood and gore for the bad guys. And @kbois....I ain't going to the Corner! 😠 I have to thank @drsawzall for the Carnac comment. I went on YouTube and watched some episodes there. I'm old enough to have some great laughs again even if some of the predictions were very dated. ❤️
  19. raven1

    Chapter 17

    Now everyone is here and they all know the plan, I want to see some action. Only one caveat is that Elijah is spared. He is willingly coming to help strangers he has never met in order to save a bunch of pups. He deserves a better reward than a bloody death at the hands of vicious, evil wolves. Interesting comments for this chapter. Everyone seems to be obsessing about assholes. 😄
  20. raven1

    Chapter 17

    That's my worry also. The Aryan Nations, a neo-Nazi organization, was first founded in northern Idaho. However, the author said no because she was too lazy.
  21. Hi Gary! Sawasdee Khrup. I was happy to hear you and the animals are all doing well. Are you beginning to see signs of Spring yet?
  22. Hi Texy! Sawasdee Khrup!🙏
  23. Hi Page! Aod and I are doing well. How are you, Morgan and Max?
  24. raven1

    Chapter 16

    Hunter and Kellan get off to a good start to the day, and all our friends seem to be ready to tackle the task of getting the information. Breakfast was very interesting. I was surprised that they got the dump of information scanned in one day. Dinner was interesting as we got to know the other councillors better. They seem to be alright except for the two bad guys. Fate, or a certain trickster we love, places Kellan and Hunter in just the right place to overhear Alberts and Belland's incriminating conversation. I hope our guys get out safely and in time to set their plan in motion to save the pups. From the conversation, the pups are being used as guinea pigs in a series of experiments. I hope nothing is done that will permanently affect their lives, but highly doubt that. Excellent chapter!
  25. Good day everyone! Sawasdee Khrup 🙏
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