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I love @kbois' pun filled review!
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The trailer park project was a surprise to me when Colin told Armand, but it makes a great deal of sense. Armand and Colin made a commitment to support these young people after they grew out of the system. They did that by providing the apartments and jobs, but that was temporary. The park makes a great way to transition from the Home to an independent life on their own.
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Roger led a good life. He was a kind and gentle teacher who influenced many lives. His death was both peaceful and happy. His memory will live in the hearts of those who loved him. It was a very fitting end for a noble man.
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This is one more fun-filled chapter that sent me searching the internet several times. Lugh is both interesting as a house and an ancient Irish god. Of course, he simply could have been a powerful user of magic and not a god. The itch is an interesting concept. I would be surprised if Max had not told Charlie about this type of magic and its users. I wonder if the elves have encountered someone like Mildred before.
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There are a lot of clues flying around my head, but I figure out connections because that machine back in the bored room keeps reminding me it's not what I think. The only thing I think I may have right is the house definitely should not be where it is now. I didn't help that Geron's humour kept me distracted.
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Knowing Geron's habit of playing with words, I decided to check out Gonkers online and found this collectable toy. I can imagine seeing these race on tree branches from the corners of my eyes.
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Another great start to a Halloween story. I love the way you have set up the beginning with everyone bored in the bored room. One phone call and skwish fills the room. The research on the house helped add to the seasonal atmosphere. I love that the guys will be able to stay at the Octagon House once more. It was one of my favorite places in your stories.
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Wonderful imagery! The poem felt like an anthem to survival when each day we face death once more.
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Seth's father is a good man and is willing to help Greg deal with his chaos. Greg seems to feel that the chaos in his life is over. Somehow I doubt we have seen the last of the chaos. There is still Stacy, Seth's mom and Seth's relationships with the other three boys. Not a mess, but still not total normal.
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Great chapter @kbois! I love Kage is now protecting both couples. Also, he has given them the power to travel in the shadows. Totally unexpected.
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Hey Spike. I still love the both of you. You do have some content in the BL discussions. However, remember when Drew used to write pages of history, present his unsolvable math problems and explain why he was nuking a place? I miss the little nerd.
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All is going well with Greg's security, a new armoured car, and the ability to partially change. He does need to learn how to control, but that is why he is at James' estate. It was interesting that Greg was able to assimilate a new language while feeding on James for only 10 minutes. Chris' outburst has him hanging by the neck, but Thomas has shown he knows how to do his job as chief of security. I think Chris may be shocked, but not hurt when his feet next touch the floor. Fun chapter.
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G'day Mates! Hope you all have a fun and spooky Halloween!
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Show start? No, it's the neverending story, Nick. What did you miss? Yes, No, the drewth, BL fights, Yes, No, You love me, Hate You!, Shut up, Bit.ch...oh...one glitter nuke. Rinse and Repeat.
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I can read it. Hangovers are for Saturday mornings...and the day after a birthday party.
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Slow and easy seems the course that Hudson has chosen. Although for Otis some of the things seem very advanced, he is very willing to accept Hudson's ideas. The boyfriend word was spoken, and although Hudson changed it to temporary boyfriend, I liked Otis's attitude that the position of permanent boyfriend was definitely in the cards. Nicely written slow burn!
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The boys did a great job of manipulating their parents into going to Leipzig. Planning with their siblings got Winston, James, their fathers to the museum, and their mothers distracted with a tour with Ben and Amelia. I laughed when Ben asked how it would benefit him, but he did get to spend the day with Amelia even if with the mothers. The guys got lucky once again when Dr. Schwartzman showed up and then gave them an up-close view of the Sky Disk. With the clues and a map, the adventurers now have a place to start. Where will the map take them from the ancient observatory?
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Often, but not always. Huntington and his army is still hovering in the distant background, with the hybrid pups, poisoner, Cassiel, Giles' pack, gathering of allies to fight the war and Caleb/Vann's situation. Who knows in what order the boss lady will address and resolve these issues?
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Wasn't the shift Ronin experienced explained as an extreme emotional reaction? Can't wait to see what happens next!
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I think at Max's age and attitude, it's the costume that makes it fun. Candy is just an added incentive. I am betting Max likes the performance aspect of Halloween best.
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Time has passed so quickly. Those children that Colin and Armand first adopted are middle-aged with kids who are now married. The family resting place will keep loved ones close until Colin and Armand meet their end. It may not be soon since they are only in their 60's, but it is also not that far away.
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A sad but inevitable chapter in life. The sadness will be for those Roger leaves behind. I believe that Roger will be happy when he is reunited with his friends who have passed before.
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You did great @kbois! Despite the expense of tissues, this chapter was awesome. It was delightful and exceeded my expectations. Since you won't be cleaning up the many threads in a sequel to this story, I look forward to the many, many more enjoyable chapters ahead of us. That also makes me happy.
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Thanks, @weinerdog! I've just checked out the stories. Chris must have been working on these in secret.
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With the plans the four have for the upcoming night, they will need all the wonderful calories provided by the cheesecake. Better to take time for the cheesecake than run out of energy halfway through the night.
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