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OMG! You win @Alexmugs! Thanks for the compliment, but I didn't think to look at Storyverse for clues. That's brilliant! Of course, @kbois will claim this is fake news and say that this was written by @astone2292, even if we all know it fits all the clues she has already left us. kbois: us: Aaron: @Mrsgnomie:
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My turn to give out the award! Great work @spyke, this one's for you! (Sorry it took a while, but shipping from the other side of the planet takes time.)
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I wonder whose tunnel Asa will light up, @akascrubber
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@kbois is quite competitive with @Mrsgnomie and is probably considering a Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious Epilogue as we speak.
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Maybe? This chapter is steadily working on at least 13 pages of comments. Will that be a new record for one chapter?
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Aaaah...you're welcome?
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One comment about food. Unless you go to a restaurant and have the same cook, the same dish is anywhere from nearly the same to outrageously different. I once went to a store here in Chiang Mai about the size of a supermarket in the USA that featured twenty to thirty different kinds of each type of sauce usually used in Thai cooking. Most of the time families here make their own unique sauces and dishes. Crazy, but I love it...well most of the time. Papaya salad made from shrimp paste gags me.
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There are some similarities to predynastic Egyptian petroglyphs, as well as some theories of ancient immigration that suggest a connection, but no proof to date.
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I do understand what you are saying Justin, and respect that you want to follow GA's standards. I am only on chapter 3, and so far with the unique universe you have created, I have not found anything I personally object to reading. If I do, I will stop reading. I am still impressed with the original story and having fun with all the differences between it and this story.
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I've just started reading it, Chris. Let's just say it's a different book, and the comments here would be quite different if the original story was posted here. I think it would be amusing if Justin posted the original after he finishes posting the entire rewrite here.
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It will if I ever return to the States. The furthest south I got was Moab, UT. I think my old bones will have to forego extensive hiking and camping nowadays. It is a pleasant thought, however.
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You remembered correctly. I do love to cook, but also enjoy eating something new like dishes that are related to different cultures. The petroglyphs were amazing in their detail and complexity compared to many of the other petroglyphs throughout the western states. Born and raised in Oregon, one of the things I loved to do was camp and explore throughout the western states. This chapter brought up wonderful memories of my younger years. Thanks, Bill!
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There were many interesting places on their weekend trip that I would love to see. I did check the petroglyphs and chapel out on the net and was amazed by both. The food also was deliciously described and now I'm hungry. Looking forward to the next transition.
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We follow in your footsteps, Madame! Know you love it, too.
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OMG! I'm on a roll. First on ten!
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Hey @84Mags! Since kbois has hinted at the appearance of Rosalie in the future, we will both have to wait. It's going to get me cranky if it takes too long. Here are two more interesting details from Cassiel's talk with Elijah that might be of interest. I would also mention that I didn't find anything about Guardians indicating they were more or less powerful than the other elementals. As far as I know, Guardians were simply a group of elementals assigned the job of protecting the Veil.
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I honestly loved reading this story in spite of the sometimes academic lessons on business and law. The story is a rewrite of a much larger story created by the author in his youth. The rewrite is extremely extensive but brings depth to both the plot and characters. It creates a new and unique vampire universe with many different characteristics. However, you won't realize that until the end of this book. Whether the author considers this a prequel or the first book of a saga, you will enjoy this supernatural delight. The best thing about it? This is just the beginning!
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Looks like we have a lot more books to read in the future. The rewrite is vastly different than the original on the other site. I think I'm going to continue that story also, considering how different that is from this story. I hope we won't have to wait months for the next book since you left us with a cliffhanger.
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Howdy Page!
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Chapter 8: The Power of an Elven Bond
raven1 commented on Cailen's story chapter in Chapter 8: The Power of an Elven Bond
Harry and Draco bonding? Draco better let Harry know the truth soon. The bond strengthens Harry's power. Will it also strengthen Draco's? -
I like that Draco used his family name with Harry. It seems appropriate considering that Draco has in effect been reborn as an elf. It also represents the rebirth of his soul and his power of healing.
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I don't think anyone would call Jubal clueless. He's complex and always analyzes things carefully. He sometimes overthinks and comes to the wrong conclusion, but that's a long way from being oblivious to Lucas' flirting. I can easily understand why Lucas is smiling, and I would be also if I were looking at Jubal's backside. Jubal's reaction is proof that he is not clueless, but does tend to overthink.
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Hi Gary! I just finished reading it. I really liked the last few paragraphs best! I know it is a slow burn, but can hardly wait for the clothes to come off of these two. I hope Jubal knows how to build a durable, long lasting bed.🤞
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You two are sounding a lot like the characters in a BL series. Another boring day of crime and mayhem.
