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Actually, Aod and his niece May are currently gaming in the living room. Since she moved to Chiang Mai a few months ago, she usually comes over for dinner and a visit once or twice a week. Aod and I are both well, although like a lot of us here, I did have some problems sleeping a couple of nights this week.
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Sounds like a good plan. The alcohol sounds good, but I am curious as to why you are giving him the drill press. Is it for a hobby?
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Great chapter Gary! I love the interplay as Jubal and Lucas take turns observing each other and gently press for information about what the other is thinking. The nuance dialogue kept me a bit tense, but never worried. I don't think Lucas was manipulating Jubal, but Lucas' side of the conversation seemed more controlled while Jubal's was more guarded. I am happy they decided to check out the wilding herd and came up with a grand plan to get as many of the herd as they could. The new partnership will draw them closer together. I liked the last remark that Lucas made and Jubal caught him looking. I bet I'd have a smile on my face like Jubal did if that happened to me.
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Fainting definitely fits the occasion. The brave Prince Draco gets to meet his longtime rival. I wonder if the elves that rescued both boys are dark elves.
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It didn't take long for Voldemort to strike the elves. I hope that Draco finds something to prove the innocence of Slythersend. The celebration and recognition of Prince Draco went well. I did have to laugh about the comment I made before about Oliver and Draco. I didn't imagine that Oliver was already taken by Orion.
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Draco is so amazing as an elf. I'm glad Lord Malfoy got his just end. I wonder if the witch Draco defeated and left bound up is Bellatrix. I was surprised that Draco has yet another interesting power, healing. Oliver Wood looking adoringly at Draco? That could be a very interest relationship to explore.
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Hi Bucket! Sounds like the weather there is a bit confused about the season. It's a little less confused here with rain storms all week. The temperature is predicted to fall to 24C on Wednesday and then bounce back up to 32C by Saturday. Hope you are doing well!
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Chapter 3: Awakening from a Dream
raven1 commented on Cailen's story chapter in Chapter 3: Awakening from a Dream
There are some interesting differences between elven magic and the magic of wizards. It's small differences like these that make the story interesting and unique. I would listen to Draco if I were his father. Draco knows how Voldemort thinks. It wouldn't surprise me if old Volde hasn't already contacted the dark elves. -
Draco's appearance has changed as well as the character. I like the changes. His new power probably means he will be a great warrior. He certainly made a point of defending the recruit from the abusive instructor. There are also some interesting details about the world in which Draco now lives.
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Chapter 1: Destiny The Beginning
raven1 commented on Cailen's story chapter in Chapter 1: Destiny The Beginning
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Hi Albert! Hope you are off to a great start this morning!
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Hudson's trying to teach Otis restraint was amusing since it was evident that Hudson couldn't demonstrate restraint when it came to Otis. I also had to chuckle when Otis got the thought that maybe Hudson wasn't pleased by Otis' skill at oral sex and decided he needed a lot more practice. I guess we all know who will be the practice dummy. Then Otis decides that Hudson needs to sleep on a bed and not the sofa, so he decides to make a list of reasons to convince Hudson to sleep with him. Going by what Hudson is thinking, the only reason Hudson would need is an invitation from Otis. I do like the new clues and hints about Otis' past. His mother caused a lot of problems for Otis that his grandmother tried to fix. Great chapter Laura. (The sex was hot!)
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Great chapter with the family, friends and kids happily sharing a meal. Kudos for pointing out how excellent homemade croutons are for the soup (as well as other dishes). I am a little bit sad that both Roger and Jean are beginning to show their age. You also have left us with questions about why Colin wasn't smiling when he talked to Geno and why Armand feels something is wrong. At least now everything is set for Charles and Pierre to be adopted very soon.
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Hey Gary! It's Monday and time to post the next chapter!
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Hi Man!
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Hi Dugh!
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Hi Clo! Good idea in case there's a criminal trial. Drew's comment sounds like he wants to use kidnapping and coercion to get his way again.
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Hi Gary! By looking at your posts, it seems like you are feeling better and back to normal. Hope you get a good rest tonight!
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Wow Spike! You're really an expert at getting Drewth on demand! Have a great start to the week.
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There's a lot of the Drewth in that statement. Hi Drew!
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Hi Page! Love ya my friend for sharing these. The pie is bookmarked on my browser in my recipe folder. The soup is now on a Page document in my desktop folder. I'll try these soon and let you know how I did. It would seem we have much the same cooking style, take a recipe and change it.
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In my search to answer @84Mags question, I found this passage about Guardians in chapter 34 of book 2. It may be of help, although it's kind of like trying to interpret scriptures written thousands of years ago, not knowing how much truth was lost in retelling and personal interpretations. I would take it with a couple of bags of salt. Basically, Stuart is saying the Guardians were elementals picked for a job but gradually died off during the millenniums of peace. Of course, since the Fae King created the Guardians once, Kage and Asa may be the beginning of a new generation of Guardians. Maven sounds a lot like Brioc.
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I agree 100%. I also love to dive into books to dig out information I may have forgotten or missed. @kbois and @Mrsgnomie always provide me the opportunity to dig for interesting information. If Asa's power is equal to Kage's power there will be an awesome battle when Huntington's army shows up. With Asa and Enya's powers combined in combat, the comments about crisp critters may not be far off the mark.
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I'm sure the mare and cat appreciate you didn't provoke a skunk and forgive you for being a bit late. Sorry to hear about the sleep. Lack of sleep makes my next day miserable.
